Where am I? who or what am I? why do I have these memories?
Life is a mystery because what makes life “Life” having a soul? Being a soul? Or is it having a living body? Or is it living your life with the meaning you give it? Or is life only life because of death at the end?
This is a short/one-shot. I really liked the story, so I am going to write more on Consciousness, learning what she does not understand anymore. Why “It” is who “It” is. So
I don’t know what genre I should give this story.
I also don’t know what groups to put it in.
Chapters (3)
Interesting idea, I noticed a few errors but nothing to bad. Try a spelling or Grammar checker.
A free grammar check site
Or
Grammarly
Grammarly does have a free version.
It be interesting to see this idea expanded to a longer story.
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I have Grammarly premium I know probably where you think there is a spelling error.
But thanks anyway.
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Not spelling just seems missing words.
But thinking on it perhaps you did that on purpose to demonstrate he broken?
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yes like the sentence “what is “creature?” I asked her. we would say “what is a creature” but that is only because we gave “creature” the meaning of it being a thing, or one thing like a house, a phone, a person, but what if you don’t know that. then it would be left broken.
Really like this story, that Discord would have a sister, who isn’t a draconequus. very interesting to see where it goes and if our POV is going to Equestria at some point.
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It was meant to be a one-shot but I may actually continue it as I kind of liked it. it was new to me and kind of refreshing. like getting a part of me out that I wanted to share. plus I really liked writing discords dialog kept having his voice in my head.