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The SCP Foundation, an organization that has existed for thousands of years, an organization that survived the near extinction of their species, an organization that has always been in the shadows, but will one slip-up bring them into the light?
What if someone wanted it to happen?
Based off SCP: CB
Takes after the end of season 8
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Thoughts on CH. 5?
Suggestions?
Anything?
Please Comment. Please.
Honestly, this is pretty good. Wish the chapters were longer, but I find myself enjoying it.
The stupid move for the ponies would be to assault the facilities. Smart move would be to approach them peacefully first and ask for help.
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Well, emotional ponies do lead to botched results.
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Suicidal for the ponies. They’ll get mauled by the MTF and I believe there are SCPs that can be utilized to either defend the facilities, or contain other SCPs.
The Foundation should have a massive army complete with tanks, artillery, MLRS, SPAAW, etc. Something most people forget. It’s not just teams of elite soldiers, they have enough manpower and firepower to invade and conquer a country.
I’m liking the story so far, just wish the chapters were longer, keep up the good work!
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Very true, their actions could cause hundreds to tens of thousands of deaths (depending on how bad they screw up, eg letting scp 682 out of the facility and roam free in equestria)
Also why would a commander be carrying the blueprints or plans to all the facilitys if he is only recontaining an scp and bringing it back to base? I would say thats a major security breach
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He is carrying a map of all the facilities that currently exist. He doesn't have all the SCP documents, just the ones on 106.
You've gotta remember, the humans and by extension, the SCP foundation, don't know the ponies can read their language (Yet) Therefore, they assume that it doesn't count as a breach.
Hopefully it doesnt include the facility locations just the layout of the facilities
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It is the location of the current facility and every facility to ever exist. Uh Oh!!
OooOoof
K guys, just finished writing chapter six. Have a question for y’all. Should I only focus on one group per chapter (like only Flurry/Ulgrin or only the other princesses)? Also I need suggestions on how to improve my writing. Anything helps.
Bye!
Another good chapter! Also, in my opinion, focus on more than one group per chapter
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Thanks for telling me.
Flurry is gonna die or be scarred for life 100%
Ahhhh 079 just said destroying the foundation would spell disaster and you ponies decide to try and destroy it anyways! Stupid ponies!
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deus vu- *looks at pic* nvm, your from the future
Also good story
always fan of SCP: foundation
GOOD LUCK WITH THAT!
oh, even if you did take out the Foundation... cough cough 682 cough cough 3000 cough cough 001 cough cough 4999 cough cough 4000 cough cough 173 cough cough 096 cough cough wheez
I am in need of a transitional chapter (From this chapter to one at the foundation.) if you have any ideas on how Twilight deals with life at the foundation or requests for an SCP, then please ask.
Thanks.
Does not fit what the Foundation would do.
Ím preety sure they would extract as much information out of Flurry as possible, and not kidnap Twilight, but since they see Twilight as a threat, they would kidnap her. The only problem is that this might backfire for them, the risk is to big for them, so why?
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I can agree with you that pout. Kidnaping Twilight would not be the best move, but, we know more than them. The foundation only knows that Teilight got the information from somewhere, and, because of how secretive the foundation is, they’d want to know where. With Flurry out of commission, they need to get the info from the source. I’ll be sure to address this in the next 05 meeting with Twilight.
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Ah I see.
Thanks for clearing it yp
Dammit, they should have recovered the knocked out commanding officers equipment so the ponies cant study it and use it against them!
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🤔
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Ah, i tend to skim and skip words by accident sorry
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np
Hmm, some sort of poison in the gasmask?
Im not really sure
"He licked his top left molar. ‘Nah, not today, rather not die.’"
Suicide by pure willpower
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No, it was suicide by pure willpower
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Let me just remove that part. BRB
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The Foundation, "you didn't think that mole on that guy's check was normal? Ha, too bad, he's dead,"
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?
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oh no
http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-743
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I am In the US. It is still March 24th for me.
IDK how that happens
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Knowing her, she will probably be fine, so don't worry
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Tbh it was between the IKEA and the blue key.
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The UIU?
Have you read the UIU Orientation?
It's hilarious.
I was expecting some other GoI, like, maybe the Insurgency; or the GOC, heck maybe even Anderson Robotics
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Just because I only did thi UIU doesn’t mean other groups don’t exist.
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I didn't mean that; I was expecting some other group to appear first; not the UIU
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I only did the UIU first to introduce the Foundation’s (basically only) ally.
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Agreed, honestly they should have sent in a large force of mtfs to contain 106 then released amnestics to the witnesses. It is a plot narrative, however it’s one that lacks common sense. A more suitable plot would be if the princesses were scp’s, this would give reason to their capture and the attacks. Also the fact that the foundation is basically protecting Eqestria from the scps makes it stupid for Luna or anyone else to attack them. It’s a great story and a fun read, but a lot of things don’t add up.
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TBH I think this is the weakest chapter.
Originally the princesses were going to be SCP’s, but I decided to do fallout of an attack by 106.
I mean Applejack in the show is kinda just above average at detecting lies.
Not really a lie detector.
Other then that good chapter
My reaction:
Reads SCP 106 oh no
Reads SCP 173 they are dead
Reads SCP 682 ... well they are fuck
With some hope 999 is around to calm down 682 if not, their best opción is to get the help of 079 to convince 682 of not killing the ponies (I know he is supposed to be dead, but if the foundation didn’t destroy him over 1000 years, I doubt they will ever do it, special considering that 682 will probably go on an even more uncontrollable rampage if he discovers that the foundation kill his “friend”)
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Dude what are you a mind reader?
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No you are very predictable
No but seriously, the 2 options are the most logical, but I specially hope is the second one, I mean, seen 999 will be nice but not interesting, however seen 079 and 682 will be more interesting, as both creatures hate humans for their destructive nature (682 hates humans for the destruction of nature and 079 for how humans destroy each other and how the foundations acts toward him( however most ponies are not like this, something 079 probably knows already, but 682 does not, making their encounter a interesting attempt of 079 to convince 682 of not killing the ponies (although I doubt that 682 will change his mind about killing the ponies, but he will probably agree because they are “friends” with 079)
Also good work with the story, but this chapters seems a little force, don’t get me wrong i like the idea of a massive containment breach, but for what you have been hinting since episode 1, I was sure that it will 100% the fault of the foundation and not an attack by the ponies, but hey, in my own fic -shame less self promotion, is best promotion
- I introduce 4 ideas in the first chapter, but now I will only going use 2 ideas instead of 4, so is understandable that you change your plans for the story as you writ it.
Any way, as I said, this is good, I can’t wait for the next chapter, specially now that the shit has hit the fan.
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Ouch man. Well played, well played indeed. But you forget. 079 was terminated. It was when Luna and co. Got infected with 008.