Each chaper is a complete story and with the exception of the first chapter it will not be necessary to read them in order.
Factory Meltdown- Fed up with Rainbow's constant broken promises Scootaloo abandons her admiration for the rainbow colored mare and for the Wonderbolts. However, even after failing her final test it seems she may have grand opportunity ahead of her.
Minor characters include: Applebloom and Sweetie Belle.
Very minor characters include: Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and Featherweight.
Chapters (1)
AWESOME STORY DUDE!!!!!!!!!! Little bad due 2 Scootaloo's relationship with RD, but otherwise, AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
huh, so is this just gonna be a one-shot?, or is there gonna be a sequel?
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Each chapter will be its own adventure. Like books in a series.
3539198 ah, ok. i guess that makes sense.
I very much like how this has changed not only the dynamic of Cloudsdale, but this will keep the Weather Factory under 'Royal Inspection'.. including the top floor..so if they don't keep their hooves clean, they'll be seeing a lot more than just an Angry Shadowbolt Team I wager. Still, for the Cloudsdale Top Ponies to allow this... there's going to be far more than just a 'Cleaning Out'.
While a proofreader/editor would've helped, the story is pretty neat. The Scootaloo as a Shadowbolt vs. Rainbow Dash as a Wonderbolt element at the end was just delicious.
Interesting and original, I'd like to see more.
hey, what ever happened to this story?!
This is an awesome story. I wish I could make a shadowbolt wrestling costume and be a shadowbolt wrestler.
I can't believe this amazing story only has one chapter I so wanted there to be more.