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Majin Syeekoh
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Majin Syeekoh
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This story is terrible.
But not bad.
4103163 Thank...you?
4103166 It makes me feel sick to my stomach and hate humanity, which makes it terrible, but I'm pretty sure that's what you wanted it to do, so it's not bad.
Understand?
Good, cause I don't.
4103183 ...I think I do.
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4103525 That's actually the exact vibe I was going for with this characterization of Angel. If Cartman was a rabbit foal rapist.
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Yeah, that was certainly an interesting take on his character.
4103560 Well, you see, I'm entirely convinced that Angel is an unrepentant bastard.
This idea actually came from a joke I made in my previous fic, I, Changeling, where Fluttershy said that Angel wasn't allowed within five hundred feet of a school zone. Then I had Rainbow Dasn call Angel a foal-toucher, and lo and behold, a beast-foalcon-clop-rape fic is born.
Shit.
That's fucked up.
You're fucked up.
4103606
There's worse out there. It'll be alright.
This seemed to be sort of written as a joke, not anything too harsh or serious.
4103606 Why thank you. I accept your statement with the highest gratitude.
Needs more.
Allow me to correct something, if I may:
"Pipsqueak is in for a surprise, when he runs into Angel in town, that will change him forever."
That's all... I couldn't bring myself to read the story though, so... thanks anyway.
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It's weird... but good...
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Short, Has a few mistakes, no penetration.
trolltastic! I was turned on.
4106176 Thank you!
4103636 Just saw the art.
It's fucked up.
This story is fucked up.
You're fucked up.
And I suppose I am for reading it.
Shit, all this is fucked up.
Fuck.
4108118 Thank you. I'm glad my writing was able to evoke such a strong reaction.
The actual molestation scene needs to be broken into smaller paragraphs. It's currently a wall of text that's rather annoying to read through and disrupts the pacing of the story. I also feel that you could have extended this story, made it more satisfying and depraved by giving more personalization to Pipsqueak. As it is, you really just state actions and minimally Pipsqueak's feelings. Coupled with the large paragraphs don't really emphasize any specific action that Angel performed, or Pipsqueaks (How little there was) feelings and reactions to them.
It's a good idea. And I'm sure that if you give the story a few more passes and flesh it out, you can easily evoke stronger reactions from the readers.
4126831 Thank you for your rather well thought out review of this fic. I wasn't expecting that.
Haa cool fic
When I saw that title in the whats new for group stories notifications, all I could do is
before 
and now seeing that picture and just the hilarity of that premise has me tipping my existential hat to you for daring to write such "HOW CAN THIS EVEN WORK" type of story.
A bucking BUNNY RABBIT molesting creatures far bigger than itself. I keep saying we need more diversity and originality in this fandom, but this takes the proverbial cake. It can keep that cake, but, damn. Now I have to see how Angel even manages to carry or drag something, let alone restrain somepony that... just... HOW?
Write on, Author. Write on.
EDIT: Holy CELESTIA. That's... that's WOW Angel. Angel Bunny truly IS the greatest evil in Equestria! D:
Dat rosebud... Citizen Kane?
Greatest fucked up story ever. I laughed so hard I gave myself a headache. That Angel is too damn crafty.
This concept is completely absurd, and frankly stupid, yet it's played as dead serious and even downright horrifying in this story. This combination is something that I love to see, and something that I don't see nearly enough of. Bravo, good sir.
The following image string represents my feelings while and after reading this story.
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Loathe,
Your Antagonist
Angel---more like DEVIL.
You WASCAWWY WABBIT, YOU!!!!
Damn you, you fuzzy-tailed little demon.
Damn you to hell.
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That is literally the worst insult I can come up with
...
~N
Definitely different but felt too trolly to have much effect for me.
I'm not sure if I should laugh or be offended
Okay Maj, I'm finally going to add this to a visible bookshelf. But not the usual one you end up on. And only because I love you.
Also, is it bad that this isn't as shocking as the first time I read it?
Angel is an evil little bastard, so I wouldn't be too surprised...
5774758 He is an unrepentant bastard, so I'm not really surprised.
5774761
You should make a sequel where he ends up as roast rabbit.
5774763 nuuuuuuuuu
5774766
YES
5774768 but wai
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5774775 I suppose that's as good a reason as any.
5774777
Blame me for it, if you do write it.
5774792 k then
60 dislikes?! There must not be a scene of dominatrix fluttershy, and Angel must be alive at the end. I'll upvote just for that, seriously the ratings system on this site is so crazy broken cause people down voting based on the title. :P
Not a bad story. So what's next for chapter two? Is pipsqueak going to seethe with anguish and hate and plot his revenge? Is he going to lure Angel bunny into a trap? And laugh as Angel screams in agony as pipsqueaks cock rips Angels asshole apart?
The vile little bastard...Angel, my butt.
since when do bunnies have fingers?
7416342 Please tell me that's not your only issue with this story.
7416369
actually, that's the only major issue lol. I can't believe nobody pointed this out yet, but reading this with some friends tonight, the finger thing got us giggling. So thanks for the fun read :)