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TheEquestrianidiot


Likes Ponies, Ninja Turtles, Batman, Regular Show, Gravity Falls, Green Day and writing. That's about it.


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Tyrannical.

Fearsome.

Horrifying.

Those are few of the many words that describe the new Empress. Queen Chrysalis. Turns out that 'Princess Cadence' was disguised as the Changeling Queen. Twilight's gone missing, the Elements have been separated, and Celestia has been captured. Equestria has fallen into darkness and Princess Luna is nowhere to be found. Along the way, another of the Elements is lost.

Rainbow Dash.

But stranded on a small island, Dash finds a mysterious temple that might hold the key to Equestria. But in order to do that, she must do things she never thought she'd do.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 18 )

Probably safe to say that this AC fic here is awesome.

The most popular characters that are used for AC crossovers are:

*Rainbow Dash
*Octavia

This nice so far, but it would make more sense for this to be a teen rate or possible mature when it comes with the Assassins.

You definitely have my curiosity. Let´s see if you can get my attention.:pinkiesmile:

Justice runs in crimson rivers :rainbowdetermined2:

Good so far :pinkiehappy: I'm intrigued to see how this will play out

Only the first chapter, but guess what? I love it.

It had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, and I love the alternate endings to the Royal Wedding! Amazing! The event played out very well, and you did a good job isolating RD as the possible main character. Oh, my gad and the suspense! I love it, love it! A well-deserved like and favorite! I look forward to reading more from this!!

i need moar of this immediately!:flutterrage:please good sir :fluttercry:

This looks good.
I intend to read this. :rainbowdetermined2:

#ThisLooksGood

Hmm... It's a bit confusing and hard to understand who's talking at times... might want to work on that a bit.

carry on. also if you put a zebra named Ade in this fic you will win one internet:pinkiesmile:

Jeez what took this so long? It's was awesome, yes, but short. :rainbowkiss:

4196466

Sorry about that. I feel bad for making everyone wait, and even worse because it was so short. That was all I could think of. I'm working on three other projects right now, plus having to finish High School. But I promise, I'll try and give you an awesome next chapter!

4196737 High school is a bitch :rainbowlaugh: Most of your problems i can relate to.

Huh, this caught my attention. Fav'd.:pinkiehappy:
You might want to get yourself and editor, though. You make quite a few spelling mistakes and sometimes even grammar-mistakes, which kinda interrupts the flow of the story. And if I was you, I'd try to make the chapters a bit longer.
You could try do detail the scenes more, that would add some flesh to the story and make it end up with more words. Win-win-situation!:twilightsmile:
If I was you, I'd aim for about 2000-3000 words per chapter. That is a pretty good length.

Yours,
Color:pinkiesmile:

4197039

Well, like I said, I feel bad because it was so short. I'm currently working on a lot of different things right now and I tried to make this as long as I could but that was all that came out. And as for the editor, I'm still trying to find one. But like I said, I'll try to make the next chapter as long as I can!

I love it! More more more!!

The figures hoof felt holey.

Should it be "figure's"?

Please continue this story, this is SOOOO good!

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