After pausing briefly to savor the moment, Queen Chrysalis completes her conquest of Canterlot. Celestia, Cadance, and the Elements of Harmony are all under her control. Trapped within Shining Armor's force field, Canterlot lies in chains.
Desperate promises made deep in the castle dungeon will spark hope for Equestria. Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy will fight, plan, and survive for Equestria's future and for each other. Together, they try to make the spark born between them ignite the flames of rebellion.
Chapters (12)
In your short description, you label Chrysalis' song as a reprise. It should be called an aria.
I really like this story until now!
So I'll just fav this and wait to see what happens next, I guess^^
Anyway, wouldn't it make more sense if Dash would go to search for Luna instead of AJ? She can break the barrier with her Rainboom (at least according to what Twilight said), and when she flies, she is much faster than Applejack. Also, she can fly, in case Luna and the Wonderbolds really are in Cloudsdale.
Whatever, I'm sure you planned this through.
Keep up the good work! And have yourself a mustache!
3807289 I meant her second performance of the song. Isn't that called a reprise?
Wow, you update crazily fast! You might just as well finish this in ten seconds flat!
I really love this story though. I can't believe it has only gotten so little attention. It easily is one of the best here on fimfiction I have read so far.
Also, the idea with Hurricane is great! I can really imagine Dash doing that!
3812043 The story is basically finished. I have it saved on Word, so all I have to do is copy, paste, edit.
And thank you, I'm happy you're enjoying it.
The new chapters were awesome. Again!
It might even become an official featured. Give it a try!
You really should feature this fanfiction in some groups. It deserves more attention than this. A LOT more!
And as always: Keep up the good work^^
Yours,
Color
Every new chapter is even better than the previous one. If that is even possible. Your writing-skill is amazing!
Just gotta love how you described the CCC^^ I wonder if they will eventually find out that Dash and Flutters are both Hurricane?
I've got a bad feeling about that planned attack, though. Dash is still hurt, so I bet she won't be able to pull off another Rainboom. I have this feeling that something will go terribly wrong. Aaaaah, I can't wait for more!
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You are quite right. The song is called 'This Day Aria', the second part she sings (lthe part in her true form) while still called 'This Day Aria', is the reprise.
The end was so beautiful!
And a sequel. If you feel up to the task.
The whole story is so well written, and the plot is amazing. I just slightly regret that Dash and Fluttershy never told the CCC about the true identity of Commander Hurricane. That would have been a funny scene.
And really, feature this in as many groups as possible. Please trust me on this one. This story deserves so much more attention than it has gotten.
I really hope that this is not the last time I get to read one of your fabulous works.
Yours,
Color
good first chapter- might i say "captivating"?
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I see what you did there...
Different time.
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Indeed. I forgot this story even existed.