Not all sisters are related by blood. AJ and RD know this better than anypony. They know what being sisters truly means.
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I shall sometimes have "deleted scenes" from the show added on to the end of chapters because the show wouldn't really be able to connect to this unless I did. As I do each one, I shall list what chapter it is in at the bottom of this.
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Sequel to Give To Good Home by Cubette found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32175/Give-to-Good-Home
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Chapter One: Family Apprication Day Deleted Scene
Chapter Two: Sisterhooves Social Deleted Scene
Chapter Three: Foal Weather Friends Deleted Scene
Chapter Four: Friendship is Magic pt.1 Deleted Scene
Chapters (5)
Nice.
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Thanks, this is my new project. I haven't felt like this about a story since my first story which I wrote about ten or eleven months ago. It's gonna be EPIC!
FINALLY!!!
SOMEPONY ACTUALLY GOT IT RIGHT THIS TIME!!
YOU ARE A CHAMPION MY FRIEND!!
I liked it but you don't need to add the disclaimer and summary at the end of each chapter if they're on the same page. It just felt like you where artificially extending the word count. Otherwise it was good.
Yay! Awesome new story to track! great writing, and hope to see a new chapter soon!
762558 (The Brony Writer)
What did I do right exactly?
762832 (treborabc)
Actually I did that because I was having trouble getting enough words for the first chapter and it seemed like it would be unnatural unless I did it for the rest.
damn these chapters are good. Makes me wish they were longer though
keep up the good work!
AMAAAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG
I am now writing a sequel called Caramel Rainbows. It's going to be my first shipfic and it's title is based on the wonderful treat known in America as the caramel apple. The first chapter shall be up as soon as possible. This one is more just RD and Carmel but it will be EPIC just like this one!
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The Apple Siblings:
You my friend, have weird writing technics...
772130 (Goholite)
Yeah, I know. That's what makes my stories EPIC! Either in failure or success. This one is definately an EPIC success.
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The Apple Siblings:
Thanks for making my story a sequel
I'm excited to read it.
*blinks* I just finished reviewing the original. *reads* Hmm, okay, this needs a clear mind. Review in the morning.
now this is kinda story i like to see about AJ and RD i am sick of stories of them being romantically invovled with one another
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, in fact when I first became a pegasister it was one of my favorite shippings due to how well written most of them were, but there's SOOOOOOOOO MANY now, and they aren't all that good! I liked the idea of them being sisters, though, so I stuck with it. I'm making this into a full blown series if your interested. Check my blog for more info.
I will admit I'm kind of sick of them too. It's not really that I don't like
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The Apple Siblings:
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Now it's becoming a full blown, ten part series (check my blog for more info). Thanks for the inspiration. I award you with a mustache, whether you are a pegasister or a brony.
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The Apple Siblings:
The problem I am having is that I can't find the first story. Would any know where to read it?
1285413 Give to Good Home does not exist anymore, do you have it saved anywhere?
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No it doesn't. That's why I started the story "What is Family?"
Okay, this is an interesting idea, rainbow being part of the family by adoption, but the design of this chapter kinda felt weird. I mean, did you need to put the prologue, the first chapter and deleted seen all together and have the disclaims are bio of the story three times?
Also, when aj Big Mac and rd said their bits, it felt kind of stale, more boring than emotional.
I will read the next chapter and I hope it will be a bit easier to read.
It still feels a little choppy with the transitions between times, but i will continue on
So, up to that point, rd and aj didn't have cutie marks.
It also explains why aj went to Manehattan. She missed her sister too much and tried to find comfort in their relatives... Wait a minute. That means dash helped her sister get her cutie mark!
764493 agreed. Those chapters are pretty short.
Fuck that teacher, she dare to tell one of her students that unless you can fly your worthless, when said student has a whole family of flightless? What a dick! Hope she got sacked for that
Why are these so short? Just asking, I like the story.
This chapter seems glitched.
Well this is pointless to read given its true start no longer exists.
Aw, lovely story! You only have to post the disclaimer once though, and it's AJ, not Aj.
Wow, interesting! I guess AJ and RD had other races, too!
Too bad the chapter ends like this, this is a good story, though!