• Member Since 14th Feb, 2014
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The people who give you a smile every time you look at them are my favorite kind of people.


Rainbow and Twilight go on a little adventure all because of one itsy bitsy mishap. Besides what could go wrong?

This is just a little story I came up with randomly and I wanted a break from my other story. Anyways a huge, huge thanks to Atlantean, because honestly without him this story wouldn't exist. It's dedicated to him, Dashieluvzcandy, Gamer X, Lance, Shadowblades (Alex) and coolrose60. You guys totally rock and without you I wouldn't have gotten anywhere on this website so I hope you guys especially enjoy my story along with everyone else that reads this.


Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 66 )

Very well done.:pinkiehappy:

In interesting premise indeed... I shall keep an eye on this :rainbowdetermined2:

Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?

4330115 honestly I have no idea :rainbowlaugh: maybe, maybe not it just depends on what I can come up this its just a random story I just thought of I really don't have anything planned out yet but do you want RD to kick some flank in this story?

Whoooo... Mystery...:pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh: can't wait for more!:rainbowkiss:

Lol, looks like Spike is gonna enjoy himself. This sounds really interesting. :derpytongue2::twilightsmile:

4330169 Yes. It's NEVER a good story without the Dash being awesome.

4331748 Lol :rainbowlaugh: well I'll see what I can do

There's no such thing as being too awesome for Rainbow Dash! :rainbowdetermined2:

nice and dare i say it, this is better than your other story. keep up the good work!

4336948 yes I agree it is much better than my last story and thank you I'm glad you liked it

:yay: :pinkiehappy:
Great chapter! more? :fluttercry:

Awesome job Dashy.:twilightsmile: Keep it up.

Nice oh how you did twi! Oh the lols as I read this!:rainbowlaugh:

4363402 Thank you guys so much :moustache:
yes there's more hopefully soon :scootangel: thank you

Lol Twi. I agree with Dashie, I Iike my room having organized chaos. Then my mom will come and clean it and I won't be able to find where she put everything. Great chapter! :derpytongue2:

4364112 heh thx :rainbowlaugh: I know my mom always makes me clean my room, it's only a good thing she can't see my locker hehe :twilightblush: :moustache:

Oh my gosh Twi must've been really mad. Reminds me of when my mom asked me how I disorganize my room in a day...:ajbemused::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Must. Have. MORE!:flutterrage:


4369684 :rainbowlaugh: why thank you I'm so happy you enjoyed it I hope to get another chapter out as quick as possible :twilightsmile:


Thanks! Little fun fact: I can't stand suspense, so if you wanna torture me, that's the way to go. Commander Rainstorm knows this all too well...:raritywink::pinkiesmile::rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh:

4369752 oh I'm sorry I'll hurry it up for you and if you want anything added to the story or ideas etc feel free to tell me this is just a story that I wrote during my writer's block haha ironic thing is it's better than my first one that I wrote without writers block :rainbowlaugh:


No no no, that's not what I meant, just the really big cliffhangers.:raritywink::twilightsheepish: I can stand the smaller suspense, but when they're really...suspense-ish, I go crazy.:pinkiecrazy: <---No, not like that. either.:ajbemused:

4369851 lol :rainbowlaugh: well either way I'll try to whip up a great chapter too just for you :raritywink:

4369886 no problem :pinkiehappy: my pleasure really to do it for a great fan and friend :twilightsmile: (if that's ok with you)

Thank you!!! I can't believe you wrote a chapter just for me!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: Is it just me, or did I enjoy that chapter more?:rainbowderp: Oh, well, it was awesome!!!:rainbowkiss: Hmmm, something mysterious going on... Can't wait for more and keep up the great work!!!

4416595 thank you it makes me happy to see one of my friends happy and I'm extra super duper glad that you enjoyed it:pinkiehappy::scootangel: yeah I made Twi all upset, oh I'm a horrible person :twilightangry2: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::facehoof:


No you're not, it's the way you choose to make the story bend, not wether a few of us (not including me) don't like or aren't fully happy with it. We will still always love the story for what it is.:twilightsmile::raritywink::rainbowwild:

4416646 aaawh that's so sweet :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy: you my friend deserve a mustachio!!:moustache::moustache::moustache: - eh make that 3!:rainbowlaugh:


Thanks! You get a...Derpy! Derpies.


4416664 lol :rainbowlaugh: heh it's good to know there are super awesome people like you out there in the world


You too. I've met many good, people, but let's just say that some weren't too nice...:twilightoops:

4416711 darn tootin you can say that again! :rainbowlaugh: I usually ignore them and walk away though it's kinda hard to do when some people get you really mad


Yeah... *sighs* No one has the right to treat anyone badly! Gah! If no one did that, half the world's problems would be over.:ajbemused:

4416766 that is so true :facehoof: ah well there'll always be us bronies and pegasisters to hold the world up when it gets thrown into chaos, comforting I know :ajbemused: :rainbowlaugh:


Eeyup.:eeyup: One can always count on his or her fellow bronies and pegasisters. Spellcheck, how dare you not recognize those words?!:twilightangry2::rainbowlaugh:

4416805 how dare they indeed, most uncivilized humph . Whelp there I go slipping into Rarity-talk :rainbowlaugh:

Fine work as always.:twilightsmile:

4417028 thanks sugar, that's mighty sweet of you :ajsmug: :twilightsmile:

Don't worry about Twi being upset, most of the stories I like reading on here anyways are really sad ones. I must have something wrong with me cause I enjoy reading sad, depressing stories that make me show some sort of emotion(e.g: crying). :twilightblush: Of course I like happy stories as well though! :pinkiehappy: Ha ha I'm pretty strange sometimes! :twilightsheepish:

4418274 That doesn't make you strange see I can't read a fanfic that doesn't have RD I dunno why I don't really have the longest attention span ehehe :twilightblush: and I also like reading sad stories too even though sometimes I'm scared to cuz I usually end up crying heh so you aren't the only one :scootangel:

4419214 Heh yeah most of the stories on here that I read do have Dashie in them but I do sometimes read ones without her in them such as Sparity and Cheesiepie stories.

4419221 ugh lucky! :rainbowwild: I cannot for the life of me sit down and read a fanfic that doesn't have RD :facehoof:

4419226 Ha ha poor you! I guess I've just come to appreciate the other Mane six characters more, though Dash is still my ultimate fav. Like I love Pinkie's craziness, love Rarity's overdramatic moments, Twi is so adorkable when she's getting excited over books/learning, I love Fluttershy's cuteness and I really like how much AJ cares for her family.

4419240 yeah I love all of the main six as well they each have something that makes me like them more every time.....I just dunnno what that is yet :rainbowlaugh: but I'm getting there....hopefully I'm going to start reading a story that won't have RD in it as sooooooon as I get done with the 90 others on my read later list ehehehe :twilightblush: and no I'm not kidding when I say 90 :ajbemused: ......oh god what did I get myself into :facehoof:

Uh-oh.:twilightoops: Will they ever be friends again?!:fluttercry: JK:raritywink::derpytongue2: Can't wait for more!:pinkiesmile:

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