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When Rainbow Dash becomes the shadow of a new super pony in town, she makes it her will to stop them. When she finally catches the mysterious masked mare, her jealousy goes over the top, causing an unforgivable mistake. But by the time she realizes what she's done, it was already too late.
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Great for such a short story
It's a really good short story but it just feels a TAD bit rushed
Now you did the best thing a writer can do on FIMFiction: Kill Pinkie Pie.
But what made it great is that you did it smoothly. Nice job!
Excellent work. Short, but I like short stories; they say what they need with only what is necessary, and can be quite powerful.
Mechanically, it's excellent. Four Shattered Skulls out of five.
It flowed well, albeit quickly once or twice. Four Shattered Skulls.
The concept was interesting, and rather brilliant, if I'm honest. Five Shattered Skulls.
Overall rating: Four Shattered Skulls out of five.
Very short, but I'm glad Rainbow didn't end up committing suicide, that happens too much. I liked the story.
um... before i read this, i gotta know... does anypony die in this?
4221134 maybe, but I guess if you want me to spoil it :::::::::SPOILER ALERT::::::::::: yes
Awwwwww
that was so sweet the ending was so nice 
thanks for an awesome story
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PLEAAAAAAASE tell me there's a sequel. Either way it's still pretty good without one.
You murdered my favourite pony!
Prepare to die.
(it's a reference)