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Frostbite4


What's the meaning of life? Well its to live it to the the fullest, we only have one life after all.

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When generosity fails...Greed takes over

When loyalty is questioned.... Betrayal overrules

When kindness falls..... rage corrupts all

When honesty is lost..... lies are created

When laughter is no more..... pain takes over

When magic is forgotten.... harmony falls

When harmony falls......Darkness invades

Without the order needed to control the harmony.... the darkness will always take over and the hope will be lost within the darkness

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Comments ( 31 )

it is pretty good so far id read it if you made more:twilightsmile::twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy:
PS: never wake a sleeping me ether u may loose a arm :pinkiecrazy:

I saw a few errors, grammer errors, but the mane thing was you need to capitalize their names. All of them. It's great tho! I will read it as it progresses!

Didn't comment on this earlier, but besides a few errors here and there, it seems really interesting! I hope you publish it, bro.

4808415 lol yea
4823495 lol I finally finished the first chapter
4809830 thanks

oooo I'm interested in this story... another new fav

You have caught my attention:pinkiehappy:

When loyalty is questioned.... rebellious overrules

I think you mean Rebellion...

4982657 Or betrayal even. Traitors betray loyalties.

4982715
Yeah, betrayal sounds better....

Why is this under romantic comedy? (In the spikedash group)

Oooooo how interesting. :pinkiehappy: You, sir, have gotten my attention.

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Yea I think I'll change it to that, I couldn't think of any other good names that would work

4985850 it's just that most looking for romantic comedies aren't going to want to read something labeled as a tragedy.

4985853
Glad to help :3

4986140 well i put the trajedy part because of whats going to happen to the mane six

Noooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooo o ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!

Hey I just was FREAKING out okay?

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4986342
Ditto.
EDIT: I'm looking this over again, and yet, it still doesn't quite fit, so I looked up some synonyms online, and I found "Treachery," and "Treason." I think this is the best case scenario here...

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I'm going to second this point here. Considering this story has no actual SpikeDash shipping just yet, it feels a little unjust to "tease" a romantic relationship in a tragic story. I came for the SpikeDash and found none.

5010641 that's because the story is just starting

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I suggest next time you add a story to group folders as they become applicable.

5010728 This is actually a interest concept. Please say there is more to come... It is like a new take on things... Not bad... not bad at all...

What happens next?!?!

7119265 I'm sorry, I'm just stuck atm, I need inspiration

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