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GeodesicDragon
I am a Scotsman who writes stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety. Books are available again; check my userpage for details.
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At Least Equestria's taxmen aren't as bad as HMRC. Imagine if Twilight got a letter the next day saying 'Sorry, all your details were left on a train and may or may not have been taken by criminals'.
And for the record, there's is clop way worse than this.
Even it's not the best clop you wright, it's still good and I could never thank you enough for taking into account my idea
Puns everywhere xD
I don't think it was a bad. A little short lived but you got the good points and nice dialog.
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The last clopfic I wrote was 14 pages long — the actual sex not happening until page 8. This one is 7 pages long and the sex starts on page 2. So one is long-winded and the other, as you said, is short-lived. So I either need to write longer sex scenes, or shorter intros.
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Was it pun-ishing to read the story, though?
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Ahh, yes, HMRC. What a bunch of numpties.
youre actually doing just fine. I dont really care about the clop since I just read it for fun and entertainment. As long as you have something in mind, just let it out, metaphorically speaking.
4282610 it's not the worst. Not the best but very far from the worst. So no, I read through just fine lol. To bad I'm terriable at puns, else this wouldn't be very pun-y...
I don't see the problem I think you did a really good job and you even introduce us to another face of Twilight the 'bad girl' that 'need' to be spank.
For some reason I'm starting to think that Twilight will like to repeat the experiment but now with a catholic school girl…or the 'commoner' that sneak into the prince room and the prince think she need some 'discipline'.
Ideas for future clops dude, just for you to think about them
You blew me away before I can even think about trying, so there's that. I liked it.
In my opinion... *Faps hard* It wasn't that bad I mean I've read worse *Fapping furiously* I mean the whole Roleplay act was actually satisfactory. *Fapping as hard as I can* The spanking could open up to more than just Twilight, keep up the good work and keep the ball. *Creams* Now if you'll excuse me, I got some cleaning to do.