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Shin Guyviroth


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How absurd it is for the Princess of the night to have a night off! But, with Celestia's insistence, Luna really has no choice.

When she finds a scared, bullied little orphan on the streets, however, she can't very well return him back to the orphanage. What better place than at Canterlot Castle?

You always hear stories about how she eats little children every Nightmare Night, but looking after one? Now that is absurd!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 43 )

This looks promising. Let's see where this goes.

4009217 It was actually meant to be just one chapter, but I've decided to split it into two or three to make proofreading a bit easier for myself.

But I'm glad to see you're lookin forward to it :twilightsmile:

Aww kawai :raritystarry::heart::twilightsmile: :lunasmile: I'm trying to make my own

What a excellent story. I would love to see or read a new chapter for this story.

4117500 I've been in a writing block for a while now about the second chapter. I know what to write, but it's just... having the motivation to do it. It'll be up soon, though.

I feel like if I keep reading this I am going to have to spend some money. How much do tickets for the feels train cost now anyway?

Love where the story's going so far. Have a fav, a thumbs up, and hope to see more.

I opend up Google Translate, and it translated really well. Amusing, as well.

4177630 There'll be one more chapter to finish the story off. I guess if the the story if fairly well received, I will make some more short stories following Luna and Midnight.

4179041 Yah, I used google translate, too. But I tend not to fully trust online translation programs.

Its fucking sephiroth the picture holy shit run luna hell impale you then cloud will drown you....

4180993 huh... I guess he does look a little like sephiroth.

RC

Awsome chapter. And as for chef, etres muertos. Al enes efues. He is doomed.
Update and have chef switched from the punishment(chop chop for the 2nd head)

true about the french grammar thing. I translated some of the chef's mutterings, and it said "I could do that with a shoe tied behind my back." Not criticising, just find that kinda hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

4198325 Haha, it was meant to be 'hoof'. It seemed that every translation I double checked came with the same result.

Arf >< Poor Midnight. It seems he have some super skills for get himself into some trouble.
But i hope it will be ok for this little one.
Nice story, can't wait for the next chapter.

What the fuck is that thing sitting by Luna? it looks so disgusting! :facehoof:

You can always find comfort on the moon! So I'll just banish you to the moon yay!:derpytongue2:

I don't see them and it doesn't give me an option to show the other chapters
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4729326 Ian't there supposed to be more chapters then only two last time I checked before this happened it had I think ten chapters :rainbowhuh:

excuse my language but I f*cking love everything about it! again excuse my language.

I hope Midnight grows on Luna fast and she doesn't want to send him away. Your first chapter had my curiosity... but now you have my attention.

By the power invested in me, myself and I, (since this story hasn't been updated for over six months) I declare this story to be dead.

My it forever rest in peace.

When do you plan on updating this story? Its great!

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