When three friends find a rift, it takes them somewhere could not think possible. The one who jumps willingly ends up in a windswept field, the one that slips and falls crashes through trees, the one that follows her friends lands in darkness. This is the story of Roman, Draco and Shontia as they find themselves in Equestria, and how they manage themselves in the new world.
Friendships will be made, arguments will be had, secrets will be revealed, and cake will be eaten.
This is their story after Falling Through.
Created and Co-Written by CodenameTobias
Co-Written by Argentum Fabulam
Cover art by AoNoPrincess on deviantART
(Rated PG-13 for language and scenes that may be considered graphic by description)
(Tags and Character Tags will be updated as the story progresses)
great so far, can't wait for more! faved
erma gerd is ser gerrrd :D
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Alright, I'll look into that. As for pacing, I've personally improved on that from my earlier works. I'll work on that in the future.
Hehehe. Awoken was a good song. I tip my hat to you good sir. Five out of five moutaches... I can't put emoticons on from a mobile. DAMMIT!
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Thank you kindly! (It really is a good song.)
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I know right! It was all like (insert song lyrics here), and I was all like "das awesome."
2342185 you can i do it from my iPad see
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DAMN YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
I usually don't like Human in Equestria stories... but I like this one!
Faved and Liked~
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Glad you like it!
Hmmm... interesting development...
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More to come!
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
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Patience.
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yay!
Human to pony?......
do not like
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*shrugs* You don't have to like it.
2381268 meh, don't worry, that doesn't mean that I'll stop reading it
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Alright then.
um... the ending was repeated at the end of chapter 4
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Fixed, thanks for pointing that out.
I only saw four references:
made into rainbows = Rainbow factory
there were copious references to Cupcakes
ordering something with "no Meat" = The Sunflower Project
the internal dialog dealing with flutter's epic cute -- I cant remember the name of that fic, but it was a guy summoned by Twi who had a lot of conversations with his own brain. might have been Story Buddies
Ok.. i see rainbow factory, and rarity's new dress? i wouldn't know because i never heard of it.. well i did in a comic but that's it i don't know what happens in it (and i don't want to know thank you very much) and i'm thinking twilight's lab experiments? can't remember the name :/ and it goes the same with the other fic i mentioned..
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I was aiming for it to sound like Scotty from Star Trek.
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Never read 'The Sunflower Project', I'll look into it.
Also, it was 'Study Buddies', made that one by accident.
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3/5
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Take some time to read all of Sunflower Project, that particular line is near the end. However, that story is one of if not the best Pony fanfiction I've ever read.
There was also you're reference to Spaceballs, but I don't know if you counted that in your 5 points.
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Yeah, my co-writer, Argentum told me to put that one in (Spaceballs). He also told me to use that PETA line (I'm assuming that's the line in question). And I guess I should clarify that the 5 references are in Blitz' quote that scared Scythe.
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"Can I get, let's see... One banana split, no meat, one hot fudge Sundae, hold the meat, three of those cookie ice cream sandwich things you have there, without any meat, two of your ice cream cakes, provided that they have no meat in them, and... Do you have any cupcakes with an ice-cream filling?"
That's the line in question. from Chapter 28 of Project: Sunflower
Nicely done!
Btw thanks for the songs, they're awesome
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They are awesome, aren't they?
2465449 Of course they are! I always wanted to hear a song from A Theory of a Dead Man but I never found a song to start with but thanks to you now I'm loving it
Executing someone who have done nothing at all and call them a 'Threat'? How can 3 normal beings pose a threat to a whole nation (okay well ...maybe)?
Celestia is insane!... unless im missing something
dont worry its tyrestia they probably wont even help her in case of anything
My English teacher is a bitch.
I sense a reference in the Force...
Okay, going to try a multi-response.
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That was what I was aiming for in the scene (and I wouldn't be too sure about that).
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Not exactly what that has to do with this, but it's funny so
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The force is strong with this one... moustache for you
you missed a line or 2
2563155 Thanks for pointing that out. I will let Tobias know straight away.
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Thanks for pointing that out!
Really the only thing that is bugging me is i want to know more about Sil, but it looks like you guys are getting to that
2564773 Indeed we will be.(well eventully, you may hjave to wait a few chapters though.)
My opinion? My opinion is that I like
2565465 I can wait i have a few other stories to help me kill the time tell you get there and really curious on how this is going to work out
Yay, I'm finally all caught up and made an account just to drop a comment!
Gotta say, you two are awesome writers. The characters are in character to the point where I can hear their voices speaking their lines in my head. The plot for both this chapter and last chapter were especially well done. The story is silly like the show and the letters at the end really make it feel like I just watched a real episode. Keep up the great work you two! 
Wren't there four of them? Also is his name Drake or Draco, you need to keep those things consistent.
I don't always read Human In Equestria stories (Yes I do), but when I do, they're badass like this one. Good on ya mate, look forward to catching up and getting more. Anyway, Allons-y!
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Yeah, I get that. His name alternates sort of how someone has a short form to their name. I change it depending on which one better fits the sentence.
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Glad to hear you like it. I haven't updated much due to a lack of confidence, and I just scrapped the chapter I was working on because it didn't feel right. I have another in the works though and plan to update more often in the new year.
>not spotting that sneaky inFAMOUS reference
lel
Geez when did celestia become an ass. *Looks over at random donkey* No offense. None taken...
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Wait, this is the end?? EUh... RUUEEAAHHHHH!!!!!!! RAAAAAAAAWWWWRRRRR STUPID HIATUS!!!!