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Hold up now... This is cancelled!? Why!? This sounds like an great premiss to go with. I don't know what made you feel this isn't worth submitting but its wrong whatever it is. Ok might be jumping the gun alil there, too many fics out at once could be a good reason. Should you ever want to continue with this than I shall read it.
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I just felt it wasn't very good. It was only meant to be three chapters or so.
4027611 Well you know what I think of it. Even three chapters I'd still read it. Though ultimately I would rather you write what you want not what I'm willing to b**ch about for.
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FUCKER, YOU'RE ONE OF ABOUT TEN PEOPLE I ACTUALLY LISTEN TO! Dipshit....
It's because you comment a lot, or rather, on a story I care about.
You, Random, Maroon, Marshmallow, Candyman, and Lupus. I'm sure there's more, cold spike is up there. But fucker, you have the power!
4027644 This is a good thing, right? Yeah I think this is a good thing.
4027607 I agree whole-heartedly with this
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Well I never know what the reaction will be to one of my stories. It's like...throwing it towards a fire, it's either gonna fly up and away, or crash and burn.
Fine...I'll see about submitting.
I am very much impressed with what you have. I'd be sad if you truly decided to cancel it.
As soon... frig it, I am reading NOW! The updated fic CAN WAIT!
This fic looks that interesting
This is an idea I have NEVER seen before in any fimfic...
YES! I WANT MOAR! 
4029197 Glad I could provide good quality.
4029208 Let me amend that for you... EXCELLENT quality
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Flattery will get you nowhere.... But danke regardless.
Please, Sir Hat, can I have some more?
I've read fics before about the changelings being corrupted ponies, but never once did those fics explore that premise. Much less about curing them. So yes, I'd love to see where this goes.
So humans will come in later, I hope its the Combine! If not whatever.
+1 on MOAR
4029600 Um.... what? The combine? Ok.... seems odd to be suggesting that.....
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I got bored.
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First off all thank you for taking time to respond to my comment, and for considering my opinion on the matter
Secondly, I believe it would be well with in right and reason for you to have a bit more fate in your ability as a writer
PS My favorite story of yours is Ben and the Bat Foals.
I honestly can't believe this was almost cancelled. This is very good, however I believe you should find an editor, or two if you are so inclined because while the story pacing and writing is good, there are some minor grammatical errors and an issue or two with the tenses. That is the only criticism that I have for this story, and for you others it is mostly just small grammatical things. That in mind excellent story so far and I look forward to reading more of it.
4031670 A lot of what you're seeing is just how he speaks. (Finnish Russian.)
403176 It isn't just that though. I am noticing a few. I am also just calling it like I see it lol nothing more nothing less. Trying my best to help in any way I can without making an ass out of myself. Still really liked the chapter, I can kinda see already that this one is gonna be pretty dark.
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Uhhhhh....your reply...what happened!?
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I'm not quite sure what you mean as I am quite tired at the moment it seems that not sleeping at all for three days may not have been as intelligent a choice it had seemed at first.
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I will eventually, but I meant every word of what I said; the minor minor punctuation and grammatical errors I mentioned before do exist and if you don't want an editor, I think at least a proofreader would suit your needs just fine, keep up the awesome job lol
Hahahahaha
God dammit. Build those feels up only to knock em down. Dunno how you managed to get such a reaction outa me in such a short time but you did. Great chapter.
4032792 All aboard the Feels Train. Choo Choo.
This.. This is really depressing lol. Nice work.
My feels is all over the place! MOAR!
Pretty good. How long do you plan on making this series?
You...you...
With your ways of making people grapple precariously on the edge of a cliff then pause time for about 24 hours... you.
With your amazing writing skills and ability to make a reader not stop looking at the screen of their computer until they happen upon this time in which they shall grapple on the edge of said cliff then witness the atrocity that is you and your cliff hangers...you.
You... you ...you...
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Me? No way, couldn't be.
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Yes...
you.
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Get your panties unbunched and wait patiently. I'm writing as fast as I can!
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I was just kiddin around, but very well.
4035361 I think this has just become one of my favorite stories you have written so far lol simply fantastic.
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Is that off of in between the lions?
im surprised this hasnt been featured yet
im surprised this hasnt been featured yet
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Because the system hates me. I mean honestly I can't try any fucking harder by myself!
MMMMMMMMMMMORE!
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Yes
You should probably put an other or OC tag because of the doctor character.
interesting concept, you have my interest
. . . .Are you going to continue?
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Yes, but entirely unsure how to end this.
4175715 Just describe more of the character of the doctor character.
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No I mean how traumatic I should make the end. I have two options planned out, both...not very nice. But one far less painful.