• Member Since 5th Jun, 2013
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Sir Hat


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Corey has a very simple job, make, fit, and maintain horseshoes. business is good but unfortunately for him his customers find these great chances to chat and gossip.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 80 )
Comment posted by Pelakka_wurm deleted Aug 7th, 2013

I like it. One of the main reasons I like stories with humans is the interactions between the different races. This story seems like it's all about that.

This is fun to read and is a fascinating look into how ponies would get horseshoes, I like it.

A few spelling errors and the ellipsis (the ... ) are only supposed to be three periods. Other than that a fun little story. :twilightsmile:

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I know about ellipses, I just exaggerate them because I'm A: on a massive amount of painkillers and B: because I like them.....

But yeah fun and little were what i was going for....wow that sounds like something I've heard before....(self deprecation)

lol this is good

please for the love of god keep working on this story its really good :scootangel:

I'm not liking the split story line.

Feels like there should be "If Cory stays in the club turn to page xxx, If Cory leaves the Club turn to page xx"

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It's all experimentation, I'd usually be more detailed but I have splitting headache.

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I'm loving this story, would rather see him trying dating all three for a bit to whittle it down to the one he likes most, a lot of fun with near misses.
More on how he and the other humans got there.
Maybe throw a human female in the mix.


OH More belly wubs.

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>Belly wubs
That was funny.
I might do another one, next one was planned to be school kid, I'll see about pushing another one out. Expect Journalist.

I'd love to see this Corey x Vinyl expanded upon.

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Yeah the first version was kinda slapdash. I feel this flows better considering I worked out the head canon.

Alright, sick as :pinkiehappy:
That was nice, fun read :twilightsmile:

Nice,

So is Vinyl and Octavia still together?
Is Vinyl looking for a Stallion to head their herd?

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Down with the ship!

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aawwww come on, Be funny as hell, Corey comes home and finds Octavia moved in.
Vinyl "oh yeah we're a two for one offer"

That author's note.:rainbowlaugh:

3242188 you might wanna put an incomplete status on it bro

Very interesting, a HiE fic that doesn't have to deal with war, bronies, Ponies enslaving humans, humans enslaving ponies, zombies or all the other crap that pops up when dealing with humans. It is very refreshing to read a story that the ponies and humans (who I am wondering how they even got there) living peacefully. Personally I am not much fan of the romance, kind of feel that it was too quick, but what the hell you got good dynamics going on.

Also... I am waiting for that one chapter when he is called to Canterlot to help shoe the Princess.

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Eh.....yeah....I got a few more to go.

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I always assumed they were like slippers instead of shoes....and yeah, my version of HiE is pretty calm, almost like what would normally happen.

3243107 if i help you write new chaps will you keep going... please:scootangel: ?

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Well I write when I get inspiration, just cause the main stories closed doesn't mean I wont revisit, like now! If you feel like making a story of your own in the "Everyday adventure" style I'd be ecstatic!

3243142 i say you and me work on one together if you need refrences check out my story when two ponies meet not soldier in equestria it sucks but my first fic is great... strange.

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Good point, really don't know exactly what the boot things they wear are, are they pure ornamentation or are they for protection like a hoof boot. Still might be an interesting thing to explore, granted just having a farrier (thus horseshoes) in a story, human or otherwise, is very uncommon.

I'm assuming that humans have been working around ponies for quite a while and the sheer shock of first contact has eased away.

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Yeah, this takes place about a year or so after first contact, Corey's been there for a few months.

And you sir will see that princess thing happen!

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And I'm guess first contact wasn't that bad, oh what the hell I'm just happy that everything is peaceful.

I look forward to it, honestly Celestia I think would be very curious about Corey's work. I look forward to it, and I will keep an eye on this story.

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Well shit.....now I have to live up to low expectations.....bollocks

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Eh, It's better than being a productive member of society

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It was sarcasm....it's hard to convey over the internet

Oh Good! I wasn't aware we got the expansion pack! I thought we had to pay extra for that DLC! :pinkiecrazy:

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Yeah you're right! TEN DOLLARS PER WORD!

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I like the Princesses shoes idea
Vinyl be like "ALL STUD The Princesses are after my Stallion

*looks up metal fever* Huh what do you know it's real, neat. So some bonding, not bad the dynamics is good between them. They do seem to be trying to have a somewhat normal relationship and not just be friends with benefits. Good chapter, and yes Princess Mononoke is classic, remember watching it in theaters when if first came over here to the US.

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Yeah no it's real....I had to learn about it...it's why I hold my breath so much.

Colds are ALWAYS So much worst for males than Females. Love the youtube video.

Cory just wanted a warm soft place to rest his aching head.

Oh dear... so things are going to be more random?

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Eh...kinda....this is just for fun really. Next two should be more normal.

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As normal is it can be as we follow a man, his marefriend, and being in a world full of magical, talking, technicolor ponies

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Yeah....I live a drug filled life as well.

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...must be some weak stuff then, I've read some crazy stuff that had to written under the influence

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Whoa hey, I never said I was on drugs when i write, just almost anywhere else.

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