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Welp, after a lot of work, here's part one of two! Sorry it took so long
Hope you guys enjoy! 
3979522 wait, only two parts!?
but I want LOTS of smutty twidash!
Dat art tho O_O
3980939 Yeah, it's pretty cool
Still waiting on Rasp's art. I know hers will be better 
3981001 or at least more related to the story as this pic isn't anthro.
I hope everyone enjoyed! If you have any criticisms or comments, please feel free to let me know!
When's the next chapter comin
3997392 I've been real busy lately with classes... But its about halfway done so... Less than a week
Ok, I like this so far. The only problem I have with it so far is how little it explains about what Spike is. It says he has claws so I would think he is a dragon, but he wears pants? I'm a little confused, I don't much about the MLH universe.
THANK YOU and there kicking my ass to
3999275 It's anthro, so he has a little of both. It's kinda hard to explain, but imagine him with the same dragonlike qualities but in a human shape. If that makes sense
Sorry for the confusion...
4003258 Bad news: I found out why my cover artist has been behind schedule. Her pc broke down recently and she's trying to get it fixed right now. So it might be a little longer until I can put up the actual cover art for this story. Sorry about that
Great read
Just one thing: is Spike gonna get any action? Just curious, I'm fine with our average Spike either way
4010965 I'm maybe considering putting in a third part with him in it, and I have a good idea for how it all turns out, but as of now, no. I really wanna get back to working on BOWTB, so I'll probably work on this next part, leave it as incomplete, and come back for part three with maybe some spike action later.
Almost done with part two guys! Sorry for the delay, fimfiction has been running into a lot of 404 errors and random shennanigans that have prevented me from working on the story, but I got a good bit done tonight
Also, still waiting on Rasp's cover art. As far as I know, her PC is still broke, so it might be a while. I'll keep you guys updated tho
Next chapter should be up in the next couple of hours!
Also, I just wanted to thank Alex from Equestriaafterdark from featuring another one of my stories
Yay it's here!! Brb, reading.
Post-read: HOLY SHIT that ending
I saw that coming a mile away (hehe, cum.) And still made me giggle like an idiot.
Author, ya did good. Damn good.
Will there be a third chapter? Or is the "Incomplete" a mistake?
i have read up to the box part and have had enough of reading for today
ps i think there is a giant dildo in the box
4025732 Nerp. Third chapter coming soon
That'll be the last one
4029360 Aw... okay.
4030223 I'm sorry
I just really wanna get back to Becoming One With The Beat 
4030749 Understood. Every story must come to an end.
Rainbow Dash sat up and instead of sitting next to her, sat right behind her with her legs wrapping around the outside of Twilight's
ether this is a grammar error or dsahies legs are bendy as hell
4032120 Imagine someone sitting down on the edge of a bed and you're sitting behind them with your legs spread around them
yeah i got that part but it sounds like dashie is warping her legs around twilight's legs because when you put an s on the end of someones name it usually indicates that it is theirs like joey's hammer
Rainbow Dash sat up and instead of sitting next to her, sat right behind her with her legs wrapping around the outside of Twilight's
to make it sound correct it should say
Rainbow Dash sat up and instead of sitting next to her, sat right behind her with her legs wrapping around the outside of Twilight
or
Rainbow Dash sat up and instead of sitting next to her, sat right behind her with her legs spread to either side of twilight's legs
i don't like the second one it doesn't sound right but you'l get the i dear
OH GIANT DILDO NAILED IT
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA
dirty Luna
It was instantly more intimate than the last one as she slipped her tongue inside of Twilight's mouth right off the bat and swirled it around her own tongue
bat?
4032521 Right off the bat? You know that expression?
4032541 i do now
Oh Spike.....
Just got some confirmation from Rasp, the cover artist I "hire", that the real cover art for this story will be ready around Friday. So the last chapter for the story will be coming out around the same time
i just noticed that there is just over 5000 words of this story just for the sex scene it literally takes up the bulk of the story
4036731 Yup. That was the intention
I just read Chapter One, and I noticed a couple of things:
First off, when Twi runs upstairs, you wrote that it was to her bedroom. In the next paragraph, you described the floor as 'bathroom tile'. You should probably clarify which room she's in.
Second, you might want to change the phrase 'sexually starved sex'. It seems kind of redundant when read. Maybe replace 'sexually starved' with something more descriptive that evokes sensation, such as 'aching' or 'yearning'.
Thought you could use a bit of help in the form of constructive comments. Hope this helps.
4037489 Ahhh. I remember changing a few things around there. At first, I was going to put her going into her bathroom but I changed it around. I must've missed that part.
Also, I'm using "sex" in that phrase as a noun. So I think I think it's okay... I think
If I get more comments on it, I'll change it
Thanks for the help
4033150
Go kid!!!
Sir, you had my curiosity, but now you have my attention, like and favorite. I will look forward to this
4039991 Ahh! Your picture scared meh
4041885 WELL ITS ALWAYS WATCHNG YOU!
Cover artists:
(1 month ago): "Yeah, I'll get right on that CB! I'll have it done in a couple of weeks
(two weeks ago): "Sorry my PC crashed, I can't do shit for the next week and all my commissions are backed up now"
(One week ago): "Hey, I can definately have it finished by friday!" Me: "Sweet!"
(Today, friday): Announcement from cover artist's page on tumblr: "No livestream today, I'm going to take a day off"
...................
Have patience, CB....
Sorry, everypony. I'll have the actual cover art up as soon as I get it!
4038415 i thought i read the same thing and got a bit confused but i thought i must have missed something in the story and didn't bother to check
i have nothing better to do while i wait for the live stream of mlp so here goes the 3rd chapter
o_O how much dirty stuff can you fit in one box DIRTY LUNA
lol
Her mouth made perverted slurping noises every time she sucked up and down his shaft
another great story lots of juicy action a little bit of mystery and plenty of in between the line story going on great job and i expect the next chapter of bowtb to be extra good since you have had some time to think
my expectations high but i know you will deliver can't wait
4051858 Update: next chapter of BOWTB will be around july
lol jk it's actually pretty close to finished
Awww but muh kinky twidash fix