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Be who you are and do what you like. Those who mind won't matter and those who matter won't mind. ~Dr. Seuss~


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Keep up the good work!

when is the next update? i cant waitt!!!!!!

Working on the next update now, I'm in college so free time for me isn't abundant :applejackunsure: But don't worry, I'll have it done as soon as possible!:derpytongue2:

You know what I think?

All this talk of "purity" sounds really strange, and even a little insulting to most of humanity. Besides, there's war in Equestria as well- the last time Canterlot was invaded is only a few years back at most.
No, I think the "purity", in this case, refers to the ties that bind a particular human to his or her home.

Think about it: If the Princesses brought a human to Equestria who wants to come at first, but soon grows homesick... that sort of misery could surely be called "impurity", no?

well... that was a strange story. good but strange.

as someone commented the "purity" was over used and could have been avoided ... "you have been chosen... now deal with it" not "because of you "purity" "

but i it is a good story, so far i do wait for the next chapter to see how it develops so as far as i go now worth reading and waiting to read more.

Thanks for the feedback guys :3 I can't say much about the whole "purity" thing yet, and I admit at second glance it does appear a bit cliche. I suppose all I can say for now is that a child molester or a thief or just a hateful person in general would lack the prerequisite to be able to enter Equestria. This would prevent Luna from accidentally picking the next serial killer or what not by her subjective judgement. Buuuut the definition of "purity", at least as far as this story is concerned, has a more complex meaning than that, which will be explained in detail later. For now, its not something to get bogged down about :twilightblush:

3198200 That would be an awesome concept and I commend you for using your noggin :rainbowkiss: But no, the definition, at least as it's explained now, deals more with morals than anything else. But as I commented earlier, the definition, as far as this story goes, is more complex than that. So don't get all bogged down and confused by the terminology, for now just take the word to mean what it says- being a moral and good person alltogether. :twilightsmile:

That was amazing i will definitely follow this story. :pinkiesmile:

Just an update- to make my life a bit easier with college and rotc, I'm going to schedule chapter updates every wednesday night-thursday morning. I might have a chapter done before that, but probably not after. I'm still working with what little time i have to add to the story, so don't you worry your pretty little heads :rainbowkiss: Thanks a bunch!

Wow. Just wow. I never expected Twilight, of all ponies, to do the flirting.

3232858 That's what happens when you give a few drinks to a pony with mild OCD and stress problems :twilightblush:

Nooooooooooooooo..... now I wait for the next update.:fluttercry:

P.S. What is the ETA for the next update?

You dun gone be RAPED SON.

3233720 Well since I don't have anything to do this weekend that's college related, I'll probably start on it tomorrow. Sooooo....wednesday-ish? Maybe tuesday if I'm feeling ambitious.:ajsmug:

I so called it. Right when I read "Didn't know she had a guest room." or something along those lines, I'm like "Thats right. She doesn't."

Nice chapter man!

god, the blessing:pinkiecrazy: and curse:pinkiesick: of high-proof alcoholic beverages.
measureless courage:pinkiehappy:, and stupid decisions:pinkiesick:

nopony can save him now.:raritydespair:

i suddenly wonder what kind of kinky shit twilight has in store for him:twilightoops:

Sorry guys, classes are getting busy because labor day is coming up so I have a lot of work to do. I'm working on the next chapter right now but it probably won't be finished till tomorrow. Sorry for the delay, thanks for the love!:twilightblush:

3263184 Thank you ^^ I'm working on the next one now so I'll try and finish it asap! :scootangel:

3263385no rush here longer the wait the better the chapter:eeyup::yay::raritywink:

Screw that! Be a human! We humans like having thumbs and not I very large tounges..... I mean no! This is a hietiap human in equestria turns into a pony story... FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

3264665 Hmmm I'm not sure what'll happen :rainbowkiss: Guess you'll have to keep reading to find out :raritywink:

Ermegerd 500 views!!! Thank you so much guys I really appreciate it!:heart:

And now 100 favorites :rainbowkiss: You guys are the best :heart:

If he gets turned into a pony, can they turn him back into a human? Good chapter dood!

3270879 That's a good question. I probably shouldn't say too much about it because I don't want to spoil anything, but this topic will come up later, trust me :raritywink: There will be more discussion about the whole ordeal between Alex, Luna, Celestia, and Twilight further along so don't worry if some concepts seem a bit vague so far, they will certainly be expounded upon in the future.:duck:

Rather interesting story. Ill have to keep popping in every once in awhile. Hopefully more chapters shall be out at said moments of searching for an interesting story to take my time. Great story filled with interestingness. I tip my imaginary hat to you. :eeyup:

3272638 Thanks! I'm actually gonna be finished with the next chapter probably tomorrow night after I'm finished proofreading it and making any final minor corrections. Other than that, I try my best to make a new chapter each week. The only thing that interferes with that of course is my 6 college classes, so if I'm ever late uploading a chapter, that's probably the culprit :ajbemused:

Well then good job of at least trying to be frequent. that will be the thing that keeps me as a follower. Keep it up please.

Hey guys just a reminder, if you liked the story or just wanna show some support, be sure to hit that thumbs up button and/or that star button :raritywink: It really helps me out! Thanks a bunch <3

They should've asked me for a smoother spell I am superior after all

3278704 Ah. I see what you did there :ajsmug: Ah that reminds me. Don't worry if your favorite pony hasn't shown up yet, every character in the mane six as well as a majority of background ponies have a part to play in the story.

Update: Hey guys I've got a one-off clopfic in the works right now so it may delay the next chapter from coming out. I'm sure you'll like what I'm making though so stay tuned! :twilightsmile:

Ermegerd I can't believe I got featured in EQAD!!! Just wanted to give a thank you to the EQAD staff for giving me the opportunity.:twilightblush:

I'm enjoying this so far! I'm liking your portrayal of Vinyl :pinkiehappy:

Looks to be a nice start, first I read of The princess wanting to met the MC right in the Human world before the choice, let the adventures Begin!

The drunken librarian wanting some late night play huh?
:twilightsmile: My body is Ready.

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