Welp, after a lot of work, here's part one of two! Sorry it took so long Hope you guys enjoy!

3979522 wait, only two parts!? but I want LOTS of smutty twidash!

Dat art tho O_O

3980939 Yeah, it's pretty cool Still waiting on Rasp's art. I know hers will be better

3981001 or at least more related to the story as this pic isn't anthro.

I hope everyone enjoyed! If you have any criticisms or comments, please feel free to let me know!

When's the next chapter comin

3997392 I've been real busy lately with classes... But its about halfway done so... Less than a week

Ok, I like this so far. The only problem I have with it so far is how little it explains about what Spike is. It says he has claws so I would think he is a dragon, but he wears pants? I'm a little confused, I don't much about the MLH universe.

THANK YOU and there kicking my ass to

3999275 It's anthro, so he has a little of both. It's kinda hard to explain, but imagine him with the same dragonlike qualities but in a human shape. If that makes sense Sorry for the confusion...

4003258 Bad news: I found out why my cover artist has been behind schedule. Her pc broke down recently and she's trying to get it fixed right now. So it might be a little longer until I can put up the actual cover art for this story. Sorry about that

Great read
Just one thing: is Spike gonna get any action? Just curious, I'm fine with our average Spike either way

4010965 I'm maybe considering putting in a third part with him in it, and I have a good idea for how it all turns out, but as of now, no. I really wanna get back to working on BOWTB, so I'll probably work on this next part, leave it as incomplete, and come back for part three with maybe some spike action later.

Almost done with part two guys! Sorry for the delay, fimfiction has been running into a lot of 404 errors and random shennanigans that have prevented me from working on the story, but I got a good bit done tonight
Also, still waiting on Rasp's cover art. As far as I know, her PC is still broke, so it might be a while. I'll keep you guys updated tho

Next chapter should be up in the next couple of hours!
Also, I just wanted to thank Alex from Equestriaafterdark from featuring another one of my stories

I just read Chapter One, and I noticed a couple of things:

First off, when Twi runs upstairs, you wrote that it was to her bedroom. In the next paragraph, you described the floor as 'bathroom tile'. You should probably clarify which room she's in.

Second, you might want to change the phrase 'sexually starved sex'. It seems kind of redundant when read. Maybe replace 'sexually starved' with something more descriptive that evokes sensation, such as 'aching' or 'yearning'.

Thought you could use a bit of help in the form of constructive comments. Hope this helps.

Sir, you had my curiosity, but now you have my attention, like and favorite. I will look forward to this

Very hot. To me, Anthro and Humanized are better for clopping than the normal ponies. Gives it a bit more realistic circumstances. But that's just me. Good work. Did you notice you had a 4/5 on Equestria After Dark?

No offense, but why is this in the comedy section? It's not really funny but it's a fairly good clopfic.

I love this new search thing.

I get to find stuff like this even easier.

~Skeeter The Lurker