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Cardinal Dan Productions


I love to write, I love to read, and I love this community! If there's a story I want to read that doesn't exist yet, I'll write it myself.

Comments ( 16 )

only complaint here is that you are putting Womb instead of vagina, or pussy, or whatever ya wanna call it. The womb is behind the cervix, which is at the back of the vaginal canal to help keep the baby safe, and to protect the womb from anything outside the body....

Great story so far and great title/chapter names


P.S. Hate to be that guy but I’m just wondering what the sauce is for that cover art

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The artist is stated on the main page of the story xD

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“Ahem” excuse me sir I will be leaving now my horny has made a fool out of me!

(Disappears from this comment section for eternity)

Dang, we just got cheated out of a very....interesting scene. Hopefully Rainbow gets her time to shine.

I have a feeling rhat since Spike is at the spa when this is happening with Rainbow, my guess is that Rarity and Fluttershy are gonna be the next mares Spike run into here. And the unusual twist is both know Spike is at the spa because of Twilight (in essence, she tipped them off; RD was a coincidence). So this could be a potential four-way on the horizon...:trollestia::raritywink:

Poor rainbow got cockblocked. Hopefully this isn't dead, I enjoyed it.

Please update this very interesting and great story

story died, which is sad

Hopefully there'll be foals in the future if the writer ever continues this story.

Please come back to this 😭😭

Guys, i looked at the summary of this story again, and I think that is it for this story. Its not gonna get a new chapter, which is disappointing. The summary stated that Spike is gonna help three of his mares when there is a "heat" wave occuring, and those three were Twilight, Starlight, and Rainbow. Once those three mares were satisfied, thats it. And honestly, adding more characters practically turns this story into another heat story that we all know the general gist of. This is a bit painful saying this, since I personally love heat stories, especially when Spike, Rarity, and Fluttershy are in them together (personal preference :raritywink::yay:), but I respect if this is the author's wishes, and he or she forgot to click 'completed' for the story status.

Now, if he or she decides to continue this....I'll be waiting, lol.

When the next chapter.

And I wonder what the deal will be.

Stay tune for the next chapter

I hope to see another chapter to this story or a sequel dealing with the other female characters in heat and Spike help as he did for the other three.

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