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Be who you are and do what you like. Those who mind won't matter and those who matter won't mind. ~Dr. Seuss~

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Very nice! The picture is what drew me in :raritywink:

Aside from some misplaced commas, I didn't really see any other mistakes.

Nice fic. It seems the longer I procrastinate, the better the submissions get. Dang, this is gonna be tough to top. I need to get started, but I'm soooo lazy. Best of luck to you, I hope you win if I don't (99% positive I won't even place).

Sorry guys, the mods pulled down the story temporarily because there were a few parts that they didn't like. I went back and fixed them so it should be all good now :) Again, sorry about that.

I saw this was unfinished, I'll come for more. Good job!

5863647 Even though the mods may have pulled the story, I still have it in my internet history!

*clasps hands together evily* MWAHAHAHAHAH!!!

Yay! It's back. Now I can re-read it.

Edit: Nope, just a link in my notification list. Still not searchable

5865510 It is? o.O You can get to it without having a direct link? To me it still says its under moderation


Nope, sorry, I got overly excited.I thought it was, but then I realised I clicked a link in my notifications and was editing my response when you replied

Story is now up and visible again! Sorry for the inconvenience, guys!

Really loved it (OctyScratch is my personal favorite, even just a little bit of it) and looking for forward for part two.

Do my eyes decieve me? The update is in! And for some strange reason my feed didn't alert me, but it was still listed in my feed, I only noticed it under the updated section. Doesn't matter, time to read

Nice one! Really liked this chapter.

"Ahhhn! Oh goodness, do that harder! Mmmphh!"

Oh my...

"Nope." She turned and walked back out instantly, making sure the door shut quietly so they wouldn't hear.



there should be a foursome with all of them

I expect a sequel to this where these 4 create a foursome, and takes place during the hot summer.

It was a good thing she decided to wear a tee shirt over her bikini top or else she'd be freezing. Even though it was cold, the walk along the beach was still somewhat relaxing.

Did she remove the shirt?

"Oh. Right... Damn, it's freaking huge..."

(Don’t make a sex joke... don’t make a sex joke... don’t make a sex joke...)

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