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Be who you are and do what you like. Those who mind won't matter and those who matter won't mind. ~Dr. Seuss~

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U maud bro? :ajsmug:

And its not even halfway done :rainbowlaugh:

You know, if this hadn't been added to the Clopfics group, I might not have gotten the innuendo in the title. As it is, I will look at later.

Welp. I think I found the problem. It's NOT a LunaCord clopfic.

6003879 Haters gon' hate.
The tee shirt bit kinda threw me off, made me think it was anthro (not that that'd be a problem), but so far, I enjoy it.:twilightsmile:

6004016 Thanks bud :twilightsmile: Yeah the only reason I included that was because it was consistent with the cove art I got, that's it really


6003995 Eh... I'm kinda passive on those

But, I couldn't just... I couldn't just court a princess just like that.

Big Mac has an interesting definition of the word "court".
Or maybe he's just being coy. :raritywink:

Perhaps we should... How do the young ponies say it? Take this somewhere more private...?

No, Luna. That is not how the young ponies say it. 1998 called, it wants its innuendo back.

This was very well done. So far, anyway. But I like a little build-up to my literary sexytimes. Have a like and Fav.
Was this inspired at all by the IDW comics? There's been a little surge in Lunamac ships thanks to that.

:eeyup: Excuse me who refered ya to me?

:trollestia: Not I.

:duck: Match maker match maker. . .

:moustache: Don't need a match.

:facehoof: What about me?!

:applejackconfused: Don't mess with ma hat.

6004487 the IDW comics? I've read those before in the past but I haven't recently. I think I'm up to the part where Cadence tells about how she met shining. What's that, volume 15? I dunno. Anyways long story short, no, I didn't take any inspiration or protips from the comics :twilightsheepish: Also thanks a lot!

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Well, the image of Luna hugging Mac in the cover was modified from one of the IDW comic pages:
Although he wasn't enjoying the hug quite as much in that image :rainbowlaugh:

And also, from the same issue, there was this. Soooooo... :rainbowkiss:

6004649 Oh :rainbowderp: I just noticed that. Well the artist that made it must have made it from that image, I just used it since I thought it fit pretty well :twilightsheepish: But I promise I wasn't just taking ideas from the comics :twilightsmile:

She giving him the OK signal on rutting!!! Question is can she handle him?

Awesome story. I'm loving it so far! keep it up xP

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Also if you call me sweetie belle one more time I swear I'll shove an over-ripe bananna into your left nostril. :derpytongue2:

pretty good story, following it.

6008809 wait, so are you Vinyl or Octavia? (K.Wing.EXE has stopped working.)

I don't blame 'ya; if I was in your hoof-shoes, I'd be as excited as a witch in a broom store.

A witch in a... ow.
OW.
That was physically painful to read >_<

Her juices were leakin' out like a water hose after an Appleoosan shootout.

Aughagrlk... :pinkiesick:
Narrator Mac, you are the WORST at similes.

"Not bad, not bad... Hey, mind if I have sloppy seconds?"

God, Vinyl! Rude! Don't ask Luna when he's right in front of you!
Some mares. :ajbemused:

Mac does seem to get a healthy dose of poon. High Hoof my man.

i expected Mac to have more endurance then that but ok

6050788 Hey man... Those royal flanks got some game to them :twilightsheepish:

Had to take a little break for a few days to spend time with friends an family and just relax my writing brain. I'll get right back to work I sowwy :derpytongue2:

That was hawt.

BTW, I love the title of this story.

If any of you have been wondering where I've been, I've been taking a break for a while just to default my brain for a bit in terms of writing, as well as take care of some other life things that frankly, were more important. I'll be getting back to finishing this one up within the next week and after that, it's off to working on Prodigy again :twilightsmile: sorry for the wait!

Well, I got the wrong idea from the first chapter. I thought this was going to be something special for Luna.
If I was Big Mac I'd have turned around and left. :rainbowlaugh:

It was a good read though!

My tastes are a bit diverse, I must admit.

That better be a reference to PON3's album called Diverse. :pinkiesad2:
it can't have been coincidence right?
IT WAS IN ITALICS:pinkiecrazy:

Next chapter should be up tomorrow! Sorry again for the long wait :twilightsheepish:

For some reason, patreon messed up and made two paid posts on chapter three. Don't worry, I'll try to fix it!

6217324 Well turns out I cant fix it :ajbemused: So I'm just gonna make the next chapter I make free for my patrons. Sorry about that, I'll try not to make the same mistake in the future

Wow princess Luna AND vinylscratch just wow lucky

I never got a chance to admire how beautiful they were and it was then that I realized I wasn't just another booty call for her.

Although, considering that she first referred to you as "sloppy seconds", you could be forgiven for doubting her.

"Oh, is that all? Shoot, that was mighty neighborly of 'ya."

That's Mac, the classic gentleman! Difficult as it is, he's always willing to play hide the apple tree with a needy mare. And her friend that she happens to have over. You know, whatever.

Although there's something odd in this chapter... It's this:

I choked on my words 'cuz she was basically givin' me a booty call in the future. I mean, I didn't wanna be rude and say no. Besides, it'd give me a bit of an outlet so I wouldn't have to take out my eh... Frustrations on Applejack.

Now THAT calls for an explanation. Preferably in graphic detail.

Comment posted by ReturnoftheMac deleted May 15th, 2016

Wow, that last chapter did not disappoint.

The chapter was interesting. Thanks for the great story.

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Now THAT calls for an explanation. Preferably in graphic detail.

You'd like that, wouldn't you? pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw338_small.jpg

I rather enjoyed this story, have plans for a followup?

That was a fun read, although I'm surprised Big Mac was the reserved one compared to Luna. If you write a sequel, I will read it with bated breath. So PLEASE do. :pinkiehappy::trollestia:

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