Will you also post your Author's notes from pastebin?

Gotta love that update speed.

Well, this was fun. A lot of work, but fun. Reading all your guesses as to the 4th Nightmare's identity gave a me a good chuckle or two, and I hope I was able to make you laugh a little in return.

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Probably not, as I doubt they'd mean much to people here.

This whole story was fucking insane and I loved every chapter.

And it makes sense that asses are Anon's fetish. I mean, how would boobs have worked?

Ahhhh my heart, the ending is too sweet and heart warming you know what would be good now.... a sequel but this is a great ending there probably wont be a sequel but I will still hope

Well, I liked it.
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I don't really know what else to say here.

Ok.

Wow.

This was utterly fantastic...I just.

I do not have words.

This is the greatest MLP Fan-Fiction I have ever read, and I've read a lot. This story as a whole was extremely sweet, hilarious and had a fantastic plot(Both kinds of Plot, mind you ) I cannot think of a better way it could have ended.

It was beautiful.

Thank you.

Dat ending...

I don't comment much on stories, but I must say... I power read through these chapters like it was my goddamn job. I choked up on laughter at specific parts, I'll admit, and you were able to add excellent character development to form a wonderful story that, in all honesty, made me smile and tickle my anus in ways that make me feel fuzzy inside. As well, I didn't hate the ending... you ended the story perfectly. I commend you for that.

Excellent work, good sir. Well fucking done!

That last part about the moon. HILARIOUS. Sucks that it has to end though. Maybe a sequel isin the works?

Aww was hoping for a final clop scene or an epilogue. Oh we'll, it was a great ride over all.

Great story! One of the funniest I've read in a while, with some good feels, adventures, and plot all around! The jokes were perfect, the storyline was great, and it had an all around good feel to it. Well worth the read.

uummm they'll be more right? right? a squeal? or something alike? please??

3904448 I'm trying to figure out if you meant "Tickle my Anus" literally, or if I'm just stupid and that's slang for something else these days.

Heh, that was a great story. I wish I could thumbs up this more...

3904558 Oh that's definitely what the kids are doing nowadays. Tickling anuses and calling each other Samantha.

Lol actually it's just a phrase my friends and I use to describe something that brings us great joy haha

3904562 That made me laugh harder than it should have.

I appreciate you clearing up this extremely important matter for me

3904572 Hahaha not a problem, good sir! Now if you'll excuse me I must continue writing my own works of equine-fiction

3904578 And I shall return to writing mine

My brain hurts. I read this at two in the morning. And contradictory feels.

Boosh. My brain is dead. Thanks. It was a nusen- fuurrr loskee muaaast

Well that was fun.

Honestly didn't expect this to be good at first, but I quickly fell in love with this story.

Damn you... This story has heart me almost as much as Past Sins, The Life and Times of a Winning Pony, The Diary of Diddy Discord, and The Keepers of Discord. I have laughed (a lot) and clutched my chest in undeniable pain from the feels threatening to end my life on the spot. I would like to believe there is a slight chance of a sequel but... Anyways I'm pretty sure whatever you (may) have planned for future stories it will hopefully be just as amazing. (An added note... I'll be billing you for my time in the hospital... and yes I now have diabetes)

I'm gonna be honest, when I started reading this I thought it was just some clopfic. However as I continued to read things began to gain levels of depth I wasn't expecting and I suddenly found myself entranced by the story. The jokes were never out of place, the emotional scenes drew me in, and the ending did not disappoint. Bravo to you for taking an idea that sounds like a complete joke and turning it into a meaningful story that had me hanging on every word.

3904315 Probably could've been possible with the addition of the crotchboobs you see so often i clop, but the idea just bothers me

Seriously though that ending made me laugh so incredibly hard it wasn't healthy
(I am not attuned to the emotions I am currently feeling!)

Laughing my head off at the Celestia's a cunt joke Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

... I'm depressed now, I wanted to see more of this story

Awesome, well written and hilarious. What a gem.

Best way to end a story, use an ancient prank to piss off the princess of the sun and get away with it. In public. With many eyes looking at said prank and be in shock and probably awe. The best.

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You have no idea how fucking much I have kept myself from posting in the comments section. Could you imagine if I ruined the surprise at the end for all these people? Oh man kids would have raged.

I can't wait for more of your pastebin.

I was also a delight to read a "deluxe" version of your story.

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This was great. Looking forward to more stuff from you.

Can we have an epilogue please? I threw money at the screen, but nothing happened...

Evil palace on moon + dope-ass armor + stupid teenager =...

Having said that, this was a great ending to one of the most unusual and entertaining stories I've seen on here. Well done!

I... I don't really have much words to this but... Insane... Very Funny... Fast (The Updates)... and I'm very sure I will never forget this story for a long while like the story (Slash Novel) "Past Sins". This story kept my focus every time I read the first hundred words and I love every chapter I read. There I go again. I can't keep my mind to stay quiet and calm when I do this kind of stuff. There goes 'I don't really have much words to this'. but other then that, Great Job.

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If you guys liked this one, you'll love his next story! Well, if you like Anon/Celly pairings that is...

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>Anon/Celestia

OOOOOH SHIT!

These gotta be a sequel. Please. PLEASE

Sequel? Please? My brain needs more badass Anon for a balanced diet

its over? Noooo!

Utterly fantastic, thank you so much

3905697 I know

Not bad. Not bad at all. I wouldn't mind seeing a follow up story.

Damn,this story has come far from the one where anon's pelvis was pounded into paste. I salute you sir.

I feel sorry for Anon...he has to deal with 4 ponies jumping on his dick. If Applejack wasn't bad enough...imagine Luna.

Foreword:
This is something of an oddity, I could have sworn that I've seen this EXACT background/character in a story before, but much more poorly done. Unfortunately, it all tends to blend together when there are literally thousands of stories with a main character named "Anon" or "Anonymous". It was really Fluttershy trying to guess Anon's fetish that clinched it for me. I mean, I don't really know if that was your thing and someone nicked it from you, or if your story is a AU of someone else's story. I guess until corrected I'm just going to assume it's the latter; if that is NOT the case then I apologize for the confusion.
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When I first found out that one of my least favorite HiE stories had a spin-off I nearly passed it up, in the end it was my curiosity with the "Romance" tag that drew me in. How could there be romance in a story about a surly average-joe named Anon and the mares that sexually harass him? Still, somehow, someway, you managed to pull it off. You managed to stay true to the feel of the original story without repeating it's mistakes (and I still don't know just how you managed to pull THAT one off...), all the while slowly twisting it until the story became something completely unrecognizable, yet still resembling the original story.

If I'm sending you mixed signals I apologize, let me just make one thing clear, I like this story. I never really expected to like this story, and initially wondered if I even could, but in the end I was glad I stuck it out. What you've managed to do was take a story that I was all but determined to dislike and turn it into an enjoyable experience that I look back on fondly, and that is no mean feat. The humor was generous without being totally overbearing and made me burst out laughing more than once, the romance was genuinely sweet, perhaps a little fast-paced, but nothing too crazy, and the action was both more prevalent then I thought and more interesting than I expected. All in all you have a good story here, and I applaud you for writing it.

There are no words. Absolutely fantastic.

Bravo mate! Awesome story.

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This was an amazing journey you've taken us on sir. Thank you for it.

I laughed too hard at the end, my friend is looking at me funny.

But hell, with a prank like that, it's worth it! Anyways, I was quite disappointed at the fact that I didn't get the meaning of what Anon did with the foot stop neigh etc etc. Cannot wait for the sequel if there is!