You're about to go and put your life on the line for the fate of all Equestria.
Why would you not tell Luna how you feel about her before doing this. ?
Maybe that'll happen in the next chapter.
I'm probably going to shed a tear when this story ends, it's become my new favorite story I have read on this site and the feels it gives me are so....feely.
Also, Still rooting for Anon to hook up with Luna.
I wasn't expecting Nightmare Moon to return either.
3898386 I just wanted him to say "I'll save you" or "I love you" or "everything is going to be fine" but noooo... He HAS TO BE IN LOVE WITH OTHER MARES.
Alright so first off awesome chapter, but then second off, why is Luna always so weak in every story and even in the show, she is depicted as the lesser of Celestia. But think about it. Celestia 'moves the sun' which mean that she spins the planet around and around, which is an amazing feat, but then there's Luna, the goddess of the night sky, she just moves the moon and makes pretty pictures with little dots.... right? Fuckin nope..... Those dots are other stars which most of them are most likely hundreds of times larger than the sun they orbit, and are probably thousands if not millions of light years away.... and she just flings them around until they look pretty. She makes art out of the factories of the universe. The things that create everything in the universe, are her play-toys.... think about that for a second. That would take such an exponentially larger amount of power than it takes to spin a little rock with some carbon on it. So I ask, why is she always the weak one. Comparing Celestia's power to hers would be like comparing the amount of energy made by a bicycle generator to the amount of energy shot out in a super nova. Sorry, that's just something that has always annoyed me.... (pardon my rant and any thing I might have gotten wrong either from science or the show)
*edit* I would like to note that she is not shown to be weaker than Celestia in this particular story, just the fact that she is being hurt by the sun (which is just another star), and that she can't just will nightmare moon to be nothingness, or a pile of sawdust, irks me.
3899312 first, Luna is best pony. Second. We are talking about a cartoon here. Celestia actually moves the actual sun and Luna moves the moon. Sun is bigger than moon. I get what you are saying with the whole 'stars are just far away suns, so in reality Luna isn't as weak as she is made out to be. You forget though that Celestia had to do her job for 1000 years. That's twice the effort. Celestia is a pansy, and a prick, and an ass hole. But she is the older one and therefore the more powerful
my favorite story I've read so far on fimfiction! I love the idea that the mane six are all after anon, and that scene where he neighs at luna and fluttershy actually made e laugh. that game they played at the barn was downright creative, and i think you captured the element of dreaming quite well. All these factors make one hell of a story, i cant stop reading it, onward to chapter 6!
3898490 And don't forget a Ghost, a Scorpion, the Covenant Battleship, some plasma pistols, an assault rifle, some Spartan armour, a necromorph (Scratch that, a few necromorphs), a sonic screwdriver, some kool-aid (No reason), a can of Bonk!, the atomizer, force of nature, a guitar (In case the atomizer breaks), and a dead mouse, bitches love Deadmau5.
3900647 And Just in case, Maybe the Fat man Aka the Mini nuke Launcher. If she is weak to the sun and the Sun is just a big ball of Nuclear fire, then some good old Manufactured Nuclear fire should work too.
3899502 Yeah I know its a cartoon, and I know Celestia is older but its just annoying. I mean come on, everyone should know Luna is best pony. She should have just stared at Chrysalis and obliterated her. I don't its just always bugged me.
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNN IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTT T_T WHY LUNA?!?! THERE IS NO WORD TO DESCRIBE THE RAGE I AM FEELING RIGHT NOW!
Awk, wee bit cliche, eh? Bah, him and his three lovers are the only ones going to the moon? Bah ha ha ha, I wonder why... I don't actually, it's pretty obvious.
ALright , listen up! You're all about to head on straight on to the moon palace! Even trough there is only one threat , you must take this notes : -The threat is Nightmare Moon -Alicorn , making her OP -Evil enchantress -You're on the moon , on her palace , she has advantage , overconfidence will lead you to your downfall. -Dont think it will also be easy to put a bullet on her head , remember above The following things will be issued to the agents , they also can carry what they want with them before they go = LOL , LOW PRESUPUEST , I THINK NOTHING WILL BE ISSUED. CHEERS - The following persons will go in this mission = Anonymous Orangedavid A rainbow maned horse with wings A yellow pegasus that wants to ravish the first.
The objective will not be to primary defeat NMM , but at least to distract her so in the ground , Autismo and other horses with a sexual device in theyr foreheads , wich some smartasses say they are called "horns" will (try to) rotate the moon so the palace faces the SUN. Wich is likelly to fail and not to mention that the agents will horribly painfully die. No , before you say anything , i really literally mean to the actual sun , not my son , or her sun , or anyonelese's son.
Anyways , i wish you luck for you to die in a nonpainful and swift death succeed. (Very unlikely(even to the one for you to die swift))
love it
Damn it Anon.
You're about to go and put your life on the line for the fate of all Equestria.
Why would you not tell Luna how you feel about her before doing this. ?
Maybe that'll happen in the next chapter.
I'm probably going to shed a tear when this story ends, it's become my new favorite story I have read on this site and the feels it gives me are so....feely.
Also, Still rooting for Anon to hook up with Luna.
I wasn't expecting Nightmare Moon to return either.
Well played author, well played.
...and maybe a machine gun, some tanks, a battleship, the Enterprise, Strike Freedom...
Ok here we go the feelings are coming I can feel it...ha pun.
Yes! Tis marvelous! Now we play the waiting game for the final chapter...I can wait all day.
Awesome update!
Holy balls this just got badass.
He'd better bring the flashlight.
Well, Nightmare showing up wasn't expected. Makes more sense than Sombra or Chrysalis though, so I commend you for that.
3898490 You're forgetting the Ion Cannon and Thor Orbital Bombardment System!
3898490 ... chuck norris, an atom bomb, b-52, b-2, b-1, a peacekeeper missiles, and.... a partridge in a pear tree.
3898727 Don't forget the beach towel.
FLIPPIN AWESOME CHAPTER!! LIKE BEST SO FAR, BUT STILL EXTREMELY UPSET ABOUT HIM LOVING MARES OTHER THAN LUNA. SERIOUSLY. ONLY LUNA.
3898386 I just wanted him to say "I'll save you" or "I love you" or "everything is going to be fine" but noooo... He HAS TO BE IN LOVE WITH OTHER MARES.
3898718 Also a Gravity Gun and maybe some Forerunner tech for good measure. Just in case.
Alright so first off awesome chapter, but then second off, why is Luna always so weak in every story and even in the show, she is depicted as the lesser of Celestia. But think about it. Celestia 'moves the sun' which mean that she spins the planet around and around, which is an amazing feat, but then there's Luna, the goddess of the night sky, she just moves the moon and makes pretty pictures with little dots.... right? Fuckin nope..... Those dots are other stars which most of them are most likely hundreds of times larger than the sun they orbit, and are probably thousands if not millions of light years away.... and she just flings them around until they look pretty. She makes art out of the factories of the universe. The things that create everything in the universe, are her play-toys.... think about that for a second. That would take such an exponentially larger amount of power than it takes to spin a little rock with some carbon on it. So I ask, why is she always the weak one. Comparing Celestia's power to hers would be like comparing the amount of energy made by a bicycle generator to the amount of energy shot out in a super nova. Sorry, that's just something that has always annoyed me.... (pardon my rant and any thing I might have gotten wrong either from science or the show)
*edit* I would like to note that she is not shown to be weaker than Celestia in this particular story, just the fact that she is being hurt by the sun (which is just another star), and that she can't just will nightmare moon to be nothingness, or a pile of sawdust, irks me.
3898876 and some tequila with those cute little umbrellas
3899312 first, Luna is best pony.
Second. We are talking about a cartoon here. Celestia actually moves the actual sun and Luna moves the moon. Sun is bigger than moon. I get what you are saying with the whole 'stars are just far away suns, so in reality Luna isn't as weak as she is made out to be. You forget though that Celestia had to do her job for 1000 years. That's twice the effort. Celestia is a pansy, and a prick, and an ass hole. But she is the older one and therefore the more powerful
Great chapter loved the wise snails bit
my favorite story I've read so far on fimfiction! I love the idea that the mane six are all after anon, and that scene where he neighs at luna and fluttershy actually made e laugh. that game they played at the barn was downright creative, and i think you captured the element of dreaming quite well. All these factors make one hell of a story, i cant stop reading it, onward to chapter 6!
Anon = badass hairless ape with a stick
very nice! very nice indeed! i cant believe how thick the plots is in thisdenver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw5061_small.jpg
One o' these days, Applejack. BAM! ZOOM!! Straight to the Moon!
3899589 You think this is good? He's got a greentext with Celestia that will knock your fucking socks off.
Their faces when Luna tells them what to do.
SHIT JUST GOT REAL
And I guessed wrong: I had thought that Nightmare would do a Hail Mary by reposessing Luna. Well.... kinda?
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And don't forget a Ghost, a Scorpion, the Covenant Battleship, some plasma pistols, an assault rifle, some Spartan armour, a necromorph (Scratch that, a few necromorphs), a sonic screwdriver, some kool-aid (No reason), a can of Bonk!, the atomizer, force of nature, a guitar (In case the atomizer breaks), and a dead mouse, bitches love Deadmau5.
welp i didn't expect THAT this is even better than i imagined it would be
3900647 And Just in case, Maybe the Fat man Aka the Mini nuke Launcher. If she is weak to the sun and the Sun is just a big ball of Nuclear fire, then some good old Manufactured Nuclear fire should work too.
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How about some allied Mutants, deathclaws, or ghouls? and some bottle caps just in case.
3900822 Better yet, Just put some Party time Mentats in some Sparkle Cola and watch the fireworks.
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Good enough. But we still need everything that we have said XD
Just in case Bruce Willis appears and decides to be the BA here.
3899502 Yeah I know its a cartoon, and I know Celestia is older but its just annoying. I mean come on, everyone should know Luna is best pony. She should have just stared at Chrysalis and obliterated her. I don't its just always bugged me.
THE BAT ! ANON NEEDS THE BAT ! beat the shit out of evil like the badass anon is !
Great chapter! Although, I was kinda hoping that Anon would break her hind legs with the branch before going after the horn.
likey likey
This went from avoiding constant horserape to saving the world.
I never would have guessed this story had an actual plot after reading the first chapter.
I am pleasently surprised.
3901376 LunaisbestponyLunaisbestponyLunaisbestponyLunaisbestpony
Now whoever is reading this comment is thinking about how much luna is best pony.
Right?
You'd better.
Luna is best.
Muffins...
3903097 there's tons of plot what are you talking about? from chapter one there's tons of plot. Jeez did you like skip every 5 paragraphs?
My god i hate these horrid puns
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNN IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTT
T_T WHY LUNA?!?! THERE IS NO WORD TO DESCRIBE THE RAGE I AM FEELING RIGHT NOW!
Snails's nightmare ability was the spookiest of 'em all. Lovecraftian even when you think bout it.
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3903195 yush, luna is best pony but there isn't a luna sticker
lol dan dan dann
Awk, wee bit cliche, eh? Bah, him and his three lovers are the only ones going to the moon? Bah ha ha ha, I wonder why... I don't actually, it's pretty obvious.
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And chips, don't forget the chips.
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Why didn't Rarity and Pinkie come?
Don't forget your Solar Flare flashlight. Never leave home to fight an evil night goddess without it
ALright , listen up! You're all about to head on straight on to the moon palace!
Even trough there is only one threat , you must take this notes :
-The threat is Nightmare Moon
-Alicorn , making her OP
-Evil enchantress
-You're on the moon , on her palace , she has advantage , overconfidence will lead you to your downfall.
-Dont think it will also be easy to put a bullet on her head , remember above
The following things will be issued to the agents , they also can carry what they want with them before they go =
LOL , LOW PRESUPUEST , I THINK NOTHING WILL BE ISSUED. CHEERS -
The following persons will go in this mission =
Anonymous
Orangedavid
A rainbow maned horse with wings
A yellow pegasus that wants to ravish the first.
The objective will not be to primary defeat NMM , but at least to distract her so in the ground , Autismo and other horses with a sexual device in theyr foreheads , wich some smartasses say they are called "horns" will (try to) rotate the moon so the palace faces the SUN. Wich is likelly to fail and not to mention that the agents will horribly painfully die.
No , before you say anything , i really literally mean to the actual sun , not my son , or her sun , or anyonelese's son.
Anyways , i wish you luck for you to
die in a nonpainful and swift deathsucceed. (Very unlikely(even to the one for you to die swift))Dismissed.
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remember when Luna said she chose them? Fs. A. Aj. Yea...