I Anon the last Nightmare? That would be kind of interesting to see if anyone could bring themselves to attack him or really do anything when they found out
First off... I had to make an emergency trip to the hospital for the feels. Secondly this story has made my day each and every chapter I read from this. You set up all of these relationships with the others and Anon, that it's going to pain me whenever the story ends. Unless of course there's a sequel but I doubt chances of that are high. Anyways... great as always, and can't wait for the next chapters.
You gaze wistfully at the disco fragments wafting through the air for a few seconds before answering, “80's metal always trumps 80's disco, Twilight. Always.”
At first, I thought they were going to do Slayer (Raining Blood), but then again, why not?
No, it's probably something even more predictable like... The Nightmare was just taking shelter in him after getting destroyed, but he is Mary Sue enough that he could take five of them (or whatever) but six puts him over the edge. And then he has magic/is transformed into an alicorn, but then concurs it by himself after having a struggle with EoH, but beating them. Probably about 'not wanting to hurt his friends... And Fluttershy.'
You know what would be totally awesome? Nightmare Chrysalis or Sombra.
Chrysalis could've been sneaking around at the time trying to gather intel on the elements when the Nightmare got her; transforming her into. Super changeling-Alicorn.
Sombra, on the other hand, could've made or had something that would forcibly attract a Nightmare so he could gain even more power. Quid uber-badass Sombra with wings.
Great chapter l, only problem is thAT LUNA SHOULD BE WITH ANON FOREVER WHY IS HE DOIN ROMANTIC $H!T WITH OTHER MARES I ONLY LIKE HIM AND LUNA!!!!! GODDDDDDDDD
Ah'm simply loving this story. So glad Ah finally got to read this after wanting to all week but not being able to because of work and overtime.
That being said, as soon as Ah saw a link for music at the very beginning Ah almost hoped it would be the song Ah was thinking...and dammit man you didn't disappoint! That song from Double Dragon Neon is just...the most awesome and totally worked perfectly with that scene. Hopefully Ah can read more later and find out who the final Nightmare is but for now Ah've got mah own writing to deal with!
Awk, ain't that just fucking lovely? Hmm... Strangest sense of Deja Vu... Anyway, he's gonna fuck 'em all it seems. Greatest Harem of all time? Only time will tell...
I'm starting to think Rainbow is the only sane one left. I like Luna but she's been doing a lot of trolling. Ok, I understand we're supposed to be sympathetic to Fluttershy, but after the stunts she's pulled it's hard to feel for her. Hopefully Rainbow comes out on top she deserves it more than anyone.
where do I start. a checklist. - 80s disco Cheerilee. righteous. - Cheerilee and Rarity duel, with rubix cube pieces and disco lights / lasers everywhere. seizure. - the 80s disco fighting the 80s metal. rocking. - all the other things.
“Princess, Princess, wake up! It's party time~!” Pinkie yells as shakes the alicorn awake. When she opens her eyes to see the pink pony's face mere inches from her own she screams and does an admittedly really fucking impressive backflip off the couch.
“Laughter?! You-you nearly frightened us into the grave!”
You pat Luna on the head as you walk past her. “Welcome to my life.”
maybe I'm reading too much into it, what I'm seeing here is that Luna might have thought PP was one of the cartoons on the channel that TV was on, that came into their reality and was inches from touching her face with a wide grin. Of course Anon would understand that, since he had the same happen in reverse, or at least, that's how I interpreted this. Again, probably overthinking it. or it could just be the startling experience of an element of rape-mony.
ok. that's enough thinking. Now that this chapter is concluded, it seems only 2 ponies are left for the counting. Really good stuff though, as usual, I'm finding myself easier to follow the threads, but that was still pretty surprising what Rainbow Dash wanted and, again, very heartfelt, probably more so than the rest? that's up for debate, but anyway, I like that. but I can't keep bleeding out emotions, my heart is fragile after all.. I'll just enjoy it more quietly. :D
“Three or more ponies gathering in a specific place at a specific time?! If I didn't know any better, it sounds like you might be planning something. Some sort of event. C'mon Pinkie Pie, what's the word for it...?”
OH God no pinkie
She hops off your shoulder and turns to face the three of you. “Oh yeah, that's right... A PARTY~!” A bunch of streamers and confetti explode from behind her as she stands on her hind hooves, beaming.
There must be 20 or 30 of them being thrown per second and it goes on for a full minute, with not a single shot missed. Damn, how many of Rubik's cubes did she take apart to get so many pieces in the first place?!
The math comes out to just over 66.6. Not kidding either.
Poor Anon. Now he has to deal with nightmare nonsense.
Luna.
What are you doing trying to hook all these ponies up with Anon.
First you give AJ hopes.
Then Flutters.
and Now Rainbow has her hopes up.
I wonder if there'll be like a big "come to jesus" sort of talk with Anon and all the ponies in the final chapter.
Oh well, I'm still rooting for him to hook up with Luna and I shall continue to root for that until the very end
I Anon the last Nightmare? That would be kind of interesting to see if anyone could bring themselves to attack him or really do anything when they found out
Great...this next chapter or the one after it is going to be a tear jerker isn't it?
First off... I had to make an emergency trip to the hospital for the feels. Secondly this story has made my day each and every chapter I read from this. You set up all of these relationships with the others and Anon, that it's going to pain me whenever the story ends. Unless of course there's a sequel but I doubt chances of that are high. Anyways... great as always, and can't wait for the next chapters.
4th nightmare = Anon, or Luna. Can't decide which one I want more.
I...can't...believe...you...USED THAT SONG!!!
Goddamnit, I was listenin' to that earlier today!
Fuckin' great track.
That aside...Nawwww, Dashie
thanks for the update, its hilarious
Last nightmare is Anon, calling it now
The additional content is quite visible in this chapter, nice job!
In before someone notices the hidden title drop too.
Let me guess, its anon...
During the guitar scene I imagined Pinkie playing Through Fire And Brimstone while blindfolded and needless to say it was pretty freakin awesome.
Nightmare Discord
Hmm…Nightmare Cheese?
Anon.........'Nuff said
3895580 nightmare pinkie
Oh god that's enough to give me nightmares
Wait… no… no… you're going to choose a foal aren't you
I forsee...Nightmre Cake. Celestia help her huband.
Also, Anon must not run out of underwear. That's just cruel and unusual punishment for something not done.
I sincerely hope Anon isn't the final Nightmare. That outcome is simply too easy and predictable. I have my fingers crossed for a plot twist.
Man I am in total and complete disagreement with applejack and fluttershy hooking up with them for all they done, but that's just my opinion.
At first, I thought they were going to do Slayer (Raining Blood), but then again, why not?
This fic was awesome but now that you used Dio, it is pure epicness
I'm so confused... Luna likes Chuckles, but... Is trying to set him up with his friends? Ponies are so weird.
3895956
No, it's probably something even more predictable like... The Nightmare was just taking shelter in him after getting destroyed, but he is Mary Sue enough that he could take five of them (or whatever) but six puts him over the edge. And then he has magic/is transformed into an alicorn, but then concurs it by himself after having a struggle with EoH, but beating them. Probably about 'not wanting to hurt his friends... And Fluttershy.'
...
It's predictable to me at least.
very freaking nice
You know what would be totally awesome? Nightmare Chrysalis or Sombra.
Chrysalis could've been sneaking around at the time trying to gather intel on the elements when the Nightmare got her; transforming her into. Super changeling-Alicorn.
Sombra, on the other hand, could've made or had something that would forcibly attract a Nightmare so he could gain even more power. Quid uber-badass Sombra with wings.
3896104 ok I thought Anon would be the last Nightmare too . . . suspicion . . . . .
Great chapter l, only problem is thAT LUNA SHOULD BE WITH ANON FOREVER WHY IS HE DOIN ROMANTIC $H!T WITH OTHER MARES I ONLY LIKE HIM AND LUNA!!!!! GODDDDDDDDD
3894484 why are there not more people with this opinion? LUNA X ANON FOREVES
The last one? Who will be powered up by NM?
The CMC. Weapon-grade cute + natural ability to wreck everything + can't hurt a kid = fun.
Or its Pinkie.. being slightly more random than usual. The party never stops. Reality weeps. Wreck the party? Pinkamina wreck you back.
If Anon, well.. frustrated human + human knowledge of warfare/trope/genre savvy + probably "sane" enough to use it = hard fight.
3898305
Ah'm simply loving this story. So glad Ah finally got to read this after wanting to all week but not being able to because of work and overtime.
That being said, as soon as Ah saw a link for music at the very beginning Ah almost hoped it would be the song Ah was thinking...and dammit man you didn't disappoint! That song from Double Dragon Neon is just...the most awesome and totally worked perfectly with that scene.
Hopefully Ah can read more later and find out who the final Nightmare is but for now Ah've got mah own writing to deal with!
Loving the work man!
dan dan dann
Awk, ain't that just fucking lovely? Hmm... Strangest sense of Deja Vu... Anyway, he's gonna fuck 'em all it seems. Greatest Harem of all time? Only time will tell...
Why do I feel like its gonna be anon?
I wonder if Anons the last of the nightmares...
No.
Light blue.
Yes.
4048657
greatest harem of all time would be:
Luna
Fluttershy
Celestia
Cadence
Rainbow
twilight
Nightmare Moon
Chrysalis.
I'm starting to think Rainbow is the only sane one left. I like Luna but she's been doing a lot of trolling. Ok, I understand we're supposed to be sympathetic to Fluttershy, but after the stunts she's pulled it's hard to feel for her.
Hopefully Rainbow comes out on top she deserves it more than anyone.
i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/577/893/bae.png
Neverending stoooryyyyy...
Oh right, this is one of the last chapters. I just wanted to make a 80s joke
Hmm... I'm going to guess that it's either Luna, herself or Twilight.
For once I like Rainbow Dash, and as always I hate Fluttershy, crazy stalker.
I see your Dio, Anon, and raise you...
Black Sabbath
where do I start. a checklist.
- 80s disco Cheerilee. righteous.
- Cheerilee and Rarity duel, with rubix cube pieces and disco lights / lasers everywhere. seizure.
- the 80s disco fighting the 80s metal. rocking.
- all the other things.
maybe I'm reading too much into it, what I'm seeing here is that Luna might have thought PP was one of the cartoons on the channel that TV was on, that came into their reality and was inches from touching her face with a wide grin. Of course Anon would understand that, since he had the same happen in reverse, or at least, that's how I interpreted this. Again, probably overthinking it.
or it could just be the startling experience of an element of rape-mony.
ok. that's enough thinking. Now that this chapter is concluded, it seems only 2 ponies are left for the counting. Really good stuff though, as usual, I'm finding myself easier to follow the threads, but that was still pretty surprising what Rainbow Dash wanted and, again, very heartfelt, probably more so than the rest? that's up for debate, but anyway, I like that. but I can't keep bleeding out emotions, my heart is fragile after all.. I'll just enjoy it more quietly. :D
OH God no pinkie
oh that's what you were going to say
Not a dis to Dio, but I would've sung this:
The end leaves me puzzeld. Funny how this madness becomes pretty standard with time...
I wonder if all Stallion have the same problems as Anon
I think "World" would have been better
The math comes out to just over 66.6. Not kidding either.