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The Ponyspawn have invaded Equestria, and it is up to the newest addition to the Grey Wardens, Twilight Sparkle, to find the means to drive them back! With her friends and allies at her side, can Twilight defeat the evil tide before all of Equestria is devoured?

The Sequel, Pony Age: Catalyst, is available.

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Excellent story you have here, but you may want to proofread it again at some points. There were some pretty obvious typos that could be distracting, especially in the few cases of missing words making a sentence fragment. Still a great beginning, but make sure to proofread before you post.

Hey would you mind if I made a side story using your Pony Age world as the base? My characters may or may not meet yours, and it may actually never get finished or even started, but I thought I would get permission first.

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Certainly. The world of Pony Age (and Dragon Age) is big enough for everypony. I am now interested in what story you would like to share.

It will probably have to wait until after you finish the unicorn tower, because I don't want there to be collisions, but I am writing up to a safe point so that they won't clash.

What (if any) DLC will make a appearance in the story?

This is one of the more interesting fics out there, I'm really curious about how you are fusing MLP and Dragon Age together, rather than just replacing characters with ponies.

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Of all the DLC that will be added, The Stone Prisoner is a go. Shale is just too amusing to write. Return to Ostagar (in this case, Ostequus), will also be featured. Witch Hunt will also have a place, though not as folks know it. Leliana's Song (Fluttershy's song) is still being debated, and will likely be a interlude or a side story. Golems of Amgarrak is still being debated on, as well as Warden's Keep . Darkspawn Chronicles is right out.

I'm very happy with the positive response from ponies across the 'net. Thank you, and I hope you'll stick around for this ride. It's a doozy.

1269 As long as you keep on writing, I'll keep on reading/lurking!

You have inspired me to write a Baldur's Gate MLP fanfic.

Its kind of hard to think up these pony puns

Ten chapters later and I'm still at it.

Hope everypony has been enjoying this story. I've enjoyed writing it, and will continue to do so.

Curiosity though makes me wonder; does anypony who commented when this fic first came onto the EQD scene still follow it? If so, what did you enjoy? If not, what made you stop?

In any event, the story will continue as planned. Stay tuned to chapter 11, coming soon.

Have a good one!

Oh i love the tenth chapter i can't wait til they go to red apple acres! I love reading this series so much!

I've really enjoyed the story so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I love your writing style and the entire unique universe you've created melding Ponies and Dragon Age together.

Indeed, everything is pacing very well and I do like this chapter, it goes well into their own personal backstories and show that they don't come out unscathed in every quest.

I was wondering when you'd work Ditzy into this; having her be willing to do practically anything to protect Dinky is in character.

Also, I like this Shale character; it's about time someone gave the Great and Powerful Trixie a run for her egomaniac money.

Well, just don't have Ditzy go like the other did in DA2, that was too creepy.

Also, how does Shale look and sound? Male or Femmine?

It's a good crossover, however, I thought it was somewhat lacking as a piece of original work. Creativity is sorely lacking in this fic. All this fic does is replace the DA cast with members from the MLP cast, while keeping all of the locations and even the original story the same, even if they were renamed for the sake of making it sound more "MLP".

I would have liked to see more MLP and less DAO in this fic. What if the Ponyspawn invaded Ponyville for real? Instead of a fictional location that doesn't even exist inside Equestria?

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Thank you for your honest comment. I do realize this is a weakness of the work, but I am too far in to the story to divert myself from this path. The best I can ask is to consider the original DAO story the "road map" that I follow. Not everypony in the tale is the same as their DAO counterparts, which is where my biggest focus goes to.

Made some adjustments to the fic with FiMfiction.com's settings.

1) Added Scootaloo, Big Mac, Braeburn, Applebloom and Ditzy

2) Added the Alternate Universe Tag, since it is fitting

3) Changed Rating to "Mature" due to violent and dark content. Will this have an effect? Not really, but it is necessary.

Both Chapter 12 and 13 are the new updates since the two rely on each other. Enjoy!

hmmm, so let me get this straight. This story follows the mage origin story, yes? But I'm not sure whether Twilight is a human mage or an elven mage. See in the opening part I assumed that Earth ponies were human, Pegasi were elves, Donkeys were dwarves, and .... come to think of it there are one too many races in this, so what are Unicorns, or did you just make a slight alteration in saying that mages are a separate race entirely their own?

This is actually my first fic I've read with Trixie in it so congrats or something.
I can't wait to see what Applejack is gonna be like!:ajsmug:

For some reason I find dwarves = donkeys awesome. (I like donkeys, maybe that's it.)

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Unicorns are their own race. There are quite a few races in Pony Age, not including the Buffalo which take the place of the Qunari. Somethings make it past the transition, others do not.

Rarity as Morrigan, freakin awesome. Ya' know I saw it coming but still something about Rarity being Morrigan just doesn't feel right, like their characters don't synch well or something. I can't wait to see who Sten is going to be, and I bet Dash is Zevran. I'ma read some more before bed.:twistnerd:

So when the next chapter coming I was ecstatic when I found out this had been updated :D

:pinkiegasp::fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry: <My reaction at the end, and I knew what was going to happen

I'm sorry, I just can;t get over the fact that Pinkie Pie is playing the role of Sten. Now that is a stark contrast if ever there was one.

I also loved the little Wizard of Oz refernce you threw in there.

Saw this on EQD.. Read up to Chap 15 when it came out, just found it on FiMFiction :pinkiehappy:
Waiting for those updates with bated breath :raritywink:

I'd read this, but I dont want to spoil origins for when I play it.

Not to be the typical sequel hound and go "hurr this is good you should do a dagron age origins 2 durr" but I do want to see what you would make of Kirkwall and the Hawke/Pie family. With the Mane 6 and my favoritest secondary pony already in FereldEquestria you'd have to dig into the background ponies for the characters but you still have the Doo's and you can take some liberties with Scootaloo (I might have missed her in the story so far, but I think she'd make a good Merrill despite being very different from my favorite mage).

The only question is how the Pies would work around the fact that none of them are unicorns... Plus the possibility that you would have to write Awakening first for some things to make sense...

Hoo lawdy, sounds like fun. :applejackconfused:

(and yes I did mean to misspell dragon. Homestar Runner FTW!)

Pinkie Pie replacing Sten?

As Sten would deadpan; "Equestria is doomed."

Bear-Rarity?! Bearity?!?!
Also, I agree with the previous poster.. A sequel is preferable! (But let's not get ahead of ourselves :twilightsheepish:)

Oh my Celestia are you going to do pony age 2? I would love you that is the best game evar (besides elder scrolls) :rainbowkiss:

Hey, one question. Is there going to be romance in this story?

Let me first say thank you for the feedback and comments, they all put a smile on my face.

To answer a few questions:

1) I would love to continue Pony Age into Dragon Age 2, and have made several references to Pinkie as Hawke to set this up. Considering Origins is rather huge though, and I still want to go through Awakening, this will have to wait a good while. Needless to say, it is in the primordial stages where I dance ideas in my head.

2) Pinkie taking the place of Sten. Whoda thunk it? Still, it was either change Pinkie or lose Sten. I made my choice.

3) To answer Paxtofettel's question, I have no plans to include any shipping. This time around. Maybe in 2. Maybe.

Look forward to chapter 17 coming soon!

Speaking as a fan of bioware games like dragon age...well done...this is one of the best crossovers I've read after Fallout Equestria. Keep up the good work.

That was the LAST thing I expected to happen, Pinkie Pie as Sten WTF man:rainbowderp:. Great way to go about it, true, just unexpected. She's a master herbalist and poison maker :pinkiesick: to boot, too bad she doesn't use a greatsword though, would'a been pretty cool. I'm guessing that Sten's no bullshit attitude and strange ideals aren't included.

In truth Probably so, since most mages are taken from birth I would think that mages are not neccesarily viewed as either humans or elves but as Mages

At least that's what I think, so far so good :3

I loled so hard when Dinky said Enchantmen :rainbowlaugh::derpyderp2:

You know I'm beginning to think that maybe Pinkie is a good choice to play Sten. I especially liked how in the fight her hair straitened out cause when Pinkie's hair gets straight you'd best start runnin.

Twilight's really gonna have to toughen up if she's planning on getting anywhere in Ferelden. When she freaked out after killing that assassin chick my thoughts were "aww her first kill", cause Darkspawn (Ponyspawn or whatever) don't count, they're already dead, killing them would be like killing zombies; meaning you can do it and not get all sentimental about it cause it doesn't matter they're already dead, and anyone who says otherwise is a dumbass.

I'm wondering how you're gonna pull this off, if I recall you said there would be no shipping in this story, so that said is Twilight going to die in the final battle because the only way she would live is if Rarity got pregnant. (Now that I think about it it would have to be Applejack who did it too so she's a girl now)

Love it! but you knew that already :P

I hadn't realized the extra layer of conflict that Spike brought to the table until this chapter. :moustache:

Loving this so much, and I'm really liking how your handling Twilight and Spike's relationship :pinkiehappy:

Ruh roh, a high dragon.

Will they let it sleep, or will Pinkie accidentally awaken it? xD

Literal cliffhanger? :pinkiegasp: NO I MUST HAVE MOAR

yay, I love this game.

So rare for a good game that you get tons of spell choices as a mage.

Oh and ponies

Throughout the chapter, I was pondering who would play Sten as I already knew who would be Lelianna. When I saw it was Pinkie Pie, I lol'd.

This is gonna be awesome.

Is it wrong that I'm finding this story more... exciting, than the original game? :twilightsheepish:

Omega here, and from all those here who work to bring you all Pony Age: Origins, we wish you a Happy Hearthswarming Eve, and may all your new years wishes come true!

Celestia and Luna light your ways to harmony and happiness!

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