Chapter One: Coming Out...Sorta
Of Stars and Hearts
Chapter One: Coming Out...Sorta
Written by Dragon Genesis
Edited by Auramane
Cadence smiled lazily at the feeling of familiar warmth against her body. She giggled softly, burying her muzzle further into the pony-pillow, receiving a tired giggle in response. It felt nice to be able to sleep in a bed with her love once again and not pretend to be something she is not.
"Good morning, Caddy." said Twilight groggily as she rolled over, flashing a smile at the pink alicorn. The lavender mares head was lit up by the sun coming in from the window at the far end of the room, in front of the window. Despite her massive bed head, the mare's appearance was able to stun Cadence still. Smiling, the alicorn moved forward and planted a quick, passionate kiss on her lips, the first in a long while.
"Good morning to you too, beautiful." she said once she broke away. Twilight giggled and nuzzled the mares chest, enjoying the warmth of the mare as the alicorn's wing embraced her. It was these rare moments between meetings that they enjoyed their slight taboo relationship. Twilight never got why nobles looked down at lesbians so much.
The couple was so focused on the warmth of the other that they failed to hear the bedroom door unlock by a golden glow then push open. Celestia blinked as she saw Cadence in the room, for the pink alicorn was turned away from the door. She cocked her head and approached closer, careful not to disturb the slumbering alicorn. She froze as she heard a familiar giggle.
"Careful with those things, Caddy. You know I'm ticklish." said Twilight, who Celestia realized was on the other side of the bed. Cadence grinned.
"Ticklish? Oh, so if I do this... ". Twilight gasped as Cadence's feathers ran up her sides, causing her to giggle uncontrollably, earning a smirk from Cadence just before she captured her mouth in hers. Celestia blinked as she watched Twilight melt into the kiss, causing her to smirk.
"So, this is the mare you have been secretly dating for three years?" Asked Celestia, causing the two lovers to yelp. Celestia giggled at their reactions, shaking her head. I came to apologize to Twilight but I guess Cadence decided to first." The pink alicorn blushed and hid her face behind the purple bed sheets while the unicorn behind her hid behind her marefriend.
"Auntie, why can't you learn to knock?" Asked Cadence, peeking a lavender eye out from underneath the sheets. Celestia giggled and lightly shook her head at the alicorn.
"I wasn't expecting my niece in my student's bed. Now, shouldn't you be in bed with Shining?" Asked the goddess. Cadence winced and Twilight ducked further behind her lover. Celestia blinked, realization dawning on her. "He didn't..."
"Right after I called her 'love'." said Cadence with a nod. "He was furious, but he said he will keep it to himself and that he will file for a divorce the second all this is worked out. I decided it would be better to give him some room." Celestia sighed and rubbed her temples.
"Well, that simplifies things." said Celestia. Twilight popped her head out from under one of Cadence's wings, causing the mare to gasp in shock, staring at Celestia in confusion.
"What do you mean it 'simplifies things'?" Asked Twilight.
"Simple." said Celestia. "You tell the other elements of your relationship."
"What?!" Shouted the couple in unison, causing Celestia's ears to splay back in annoyance to the loud volume. She glared at them for a second before the ringing in her ears finally died down enough to allow her to talk.
"Now, if you'll let me explain, you will understand that you will need a few more allies in this upcoming battle of ours, if you would." said the Sun goddess, her ears still flicking in annoyance as a slight ring held in her ears.
"So you want us to tell the other elements to try and get this settled out?" Asked Twilight. Celestia nodded.
"More or less as extra measures for your cause. The more ponies we have behind us on this matter, the easier we will be able to get this matter settled." said Celestia with a nod. Twilight had another question on her mind, one that had been eating at her since Cadence's original explanation.
"Princess, why are you helping us, despite the obvious family issue?" Asked the lavender mare. Cadence looked back at her marefriend then at her aunt, equally curious. Their curiosity spiked as a shade of crimson added itself to her cheeks.
"Well, um...."
"You're gay too, aren't you?" Asked Cadence, shocking the other two mares. Celestia blinked before nodding.
"A bit bisexual, but yes." she confirmed, her cheeks becoming solid crimson. Twilight saw this and smirked.
"And who is the special somepony?" Asked the lavender pony. Celestia was turning such a solid red that even Big Macintosh would be impressed. The white goddess shifted and lowered her head a bit.
"Ramph..." muttered Celestia, causing Twilight to grin along with Cadence.
"I didn't hear you~" said the unicorn in a singsong voice.
"Rarifm...."
"One more time?"
"Rarity!" Blurted out the blushing alicorn, causing the bed's occupants to fall off, trying and failing to hide their amusement. Celestia glared as Twilight and Cadence rolled on the floor in laughter.
"Wh-when d-did you m-manage to turn h-her gay?" Asked Twilight between gasps for breath and her own laughter. Celestia squirmed a bit, well aware of her furiously burning cheeks, before she began. However, a knock on the door cut her off.
Rarity stuck her head in the doorway and examined the scene before her. A pink alicorn and a lavender unicorn occupied the floor while a heavily blushing Celestia sat a ways away from them. It took her a moment to figure out what was going on.
"You told them?" Asked Rarity, staring at her marefriend.
"About to tell them how I was able to get you to prefer mares, actually." said Celestia with a smirk. Rarity rolled her eyes as she entered, closing the door behind her.
"Tia, dear, that's hardly an interesting tale. Our first date, however, is very, very amusing." Celestia groaned and slumped to the ground.
"I still don't know how I burned a sandwich. A sandwhich! Plain daisy sandwhich and I somehow burn it!" Exclaimed the goddess, rolling on her back and throwing her hooves in the air, causing the other mares in the room to giggle.
"If it makes you feel better, I set cereal on fire once." admitted Twilight, causing the others to laugh.
"And that, my dear, is why all meals are cooked by me." said Cadence, bopping Twilight on her nose. The mare scrunched up her muzzle before sticking her tongue out at her, only to have it encased by the others lips as she closed the gap.
"I heard of Cadence's preference. I wasn't expecting Twilight to be her mare of choice, however." commented Rarity as the couple's lips parted, leaving a slightly dazed Twilight and a very satisfied Cadence in its wake.
"And is something wrong with the mare I chose to love?" Asked Cadence, cocking an eyebrow at the mare. Rarity realized her mistake and shook her head.
"Oh no, of course not! It was just a bit unexpected, is all. I never saw Twilight as the one to have time for relationships, to put it in her own words." Twilight shook her head to clear it of thoughts of Cadence before turning to the conversation at hand just in time to hear Rarity finish. "Though, I have to wonder, when exactly did you start this? I hope it wasn't when she was still just a filly."
"Oh no no no!" Said Twilight and Cadence together, shaking their heads. "It was actually a year before I left for Ponyville. We are telling the others, apparently," Twilight threw a look Celestia's way. "So we will clarify then."
"Should I mention both your families will be joining us?" Asked Celestia with a sheepish smile.
"You're inviting my parents?!" Exclaimed Twilight.
"You invited that pompous ass?!" Shouted Cadence. Both Celestia and Rarity found themselves holding their ears to try and rid themselves of the ringing brought on by the raised volume.
"I did, and for good reason. We need noble votes on this, if it means some backlash from the Sprakle and Blueblood households to get it, then we will work through it." said Celestia,care moving her hooves from her ears. Rarity nodded.
"As much as I would rather get the love drained out of me by changelings rather than sit in the same room as Blueblood, I agree we will need his vote on this. He does hold plenty of influence in the noble circle." said the alabaster unicorn, flipping her purple mane out of her eyes.
"Fine." groaned Twilight. "Though, I'm not too eager to face Shining today. He wasn't exactly happy when we told him." Rarity winced.
"Didn't take it well, I assume?"
"Very badly." said Cadence with a nod. "I should have never waited." Cadence sighed and placed her head in her hooves. Twilight scooted up to her and wrapped her hooves around her. Cadence leaned into the embrace as the group sat there. Finally, Celestia stood, Rarity following.
"We’ll leave you two alone for now. The meeting will be this evening at seven, we hope to see you then." said Celestia, turning towards the door. "I will make sure we win this battle, that I can assure you." The two left the room, leaving Twilight and Cadence in each other's hooves. Twilight eventually let go of her marefriend and gave her a peck on a cheek.
"You should go find Shining, ponies believe you're married, remember?" Twilight sighed.
"We are married, Twilight. It feels like I'm cheating on him even though I don't love him that way." said the alicorn, her ears splaying back. Twilight but her lip and brought the mare into a deep kiss, holding it there for a few seconds.
"It's okay, Caddy." said Twilight softly as she broke apart. "You couldn't predict it would all turn out this way, but it did. Now, head on over to Shining, I have some things I want to get done before tonight."
Cadence stood outside of the doors that led into her and Shining Armour's room, her throat closing up as she thought about the night before and how he reacted to the news. She didn't know how bad of a grudge he held, but she hoped it wasn't too major.
Knocking on the door, Cadence took a deep breath as she prepared for what could happen next. Finally, the sound of hoofsteps approaching the door could be heard as a rose aura encased the handle.
Shining Armour looked like he just recently got out of the bed. His two toned blue mane tossed a bit from sleep and his eye lids still heavy. The unicorn blinked before opening the door for her to enter.
"I'm guessing we weren't the only ones having trouble sleeping last night." said Cadence as she walked. Shining grunted as he walked over to the bed and sat down, staring at Cadence as she sat across from him. There was an awkward silence between the two before Shining spoke.
"Do you truly love her?" Asked the stallion, keeping his stare on the mare. Cadence blinked in surprise at the question, not expecting it that early.
"O-of course I do! I don't fake these things." said Cadence. Shining glared at her. "Okay, not counting the last week. But still, I love her and always will, if that's what you are worried about." Shining sighed and shook his head.
"I just wanted to know if you were true about your feelings. I'm protective of my sister and I don't want to see her hurt." said the white stallion. "Now that I know they are true, I will give you blessing." Cadence blinked.
"Wait, really?" She asked, confused. Shining nodded and stood with a grunt, making his way towards the bathroom.
"While I am hurt to learn my love was never returned, or at least how I wished it to be returned, I have to set that aside and get along with you for the sake of my sister." He casted a smile back at her. "A new start if you would." Cadence gave a small smile back. She gave a small cough and straightened her posture.
"Greetings, dear Gentlecolt, my name is Princess Mi Amor Cadenza. May I ask yours?" Asked Cadence with a little curtsy. Her face remained blank, but on the inside she was holding back her laughter. Shining chuckled before straightening his posture.
"Prince Shining Armour, at your service, my lady." said Shining with a small bow. The two held their positions for a few seconds before delving into full hysterics. Cadence had to keep herself from falling to her side while the still somewhat sleepy Shining Armour had to fight not to pass out.
"Heh, glad to see things starting to resemble normal." said Shining as he regained himself. Cadence nodded from her spot on the ground before rolling to her belly.
"Yep. I didn't want to spend the day with Grumpy Armour anyways." said the pink alicorn with a wink, causing the stallion to blush lightly and Cadence to break into laughter.
"Aren't you supposed to save your flirting for Twily?" Asked the stallion, trying to calm his blush. Cadence let out a happy sigh before shaking her head at him.
"She wouldn't care. Besides, we're married. I'm expected to flirt with you. Ponies will get suspicious if I only flirted with Twilight and not you." said Cadence with a roll of her eyes. Shining's face suddenly grew serious.
"How are you two handling this marriage?" He regretted asking as Cadence winced. It obviously was a very sore topic.
"Decent, I suppose. But...I feel like I'm cheating, Shining. A bit on you since I am married to you, but mostly to Twilight." She bit her lip. "There are provinces in Equestria where same sex marriage is allowed. We were planning on going to one of those places this year after breaking the news to our friends and family. Of course, the nobles had other plans."
"Is that all you two plan on doing in the future?" Asked Shining, sitting down across from the mare. Cadence blushed.
"We were thinking of foals sometime down the road." admitted Cadence. Shining blinked.
"Wait, how does that even work? You are both mares!" Cadence turned a deep crimson.
"Do you know the term hermaphodite?"
"Yeah. It's when a female has both a vagina and...a...dick....oh." Shining blushed.
"Oh, indeed. All alicorns are." said Cadence, her blush refusing to leave. "I may have asked Tia this when I became one. It's...disturbing when you suddenly have a cock hanging between your legs."
"And does Twilight know?" Asked Shining. He regretted asking by the devilish smirk on the alicorns face.
"She is very acquainted with it, yes." said Cadence, grinning. Shining groaned.
"I didn't need to know you rutted my sister." Complained Shining, burying his head in his hooves as Cadence broke out in laughter.
"Hey, you wanted to know if she knew I was a shemale, and I told you" said Cadence defensively. Shining rolled his eyes.
"Yes, but you didn't have to explain to me that she had it shoved somewhere."
"Mouth. Still have a cherry to pop." said Cadence with a wink. She laughed as a pillow rammed into her face.
"Was there a certain reason why you wanted to see me besides to explain me your sex life?" Asked Shining, his face a deep crimson. Cadence chuckled a bit before sitting up.
"Yes, actually. We are married so I have to follow you around. Oh, and we are meeting with both our families this evening." said Cadence.
"Why?"
"What was our conversation last night?" Shining paled.
"You are explaining to my parents and your cousin that not only are you gay and got married to somepony you don't love, but are in a very serious relationship with my sister?" Asked Shining.
"The other elements will be there, too, along with Tia, Lulu, and their dates. Poor homophobe Bluey is going to get a huge slap of lesbian this evening." said Cadence, shaking her head while surpress king her giggles. Shining rolled his eyes and stood up.
"Well, I'm going to take a shower and take care of the other work that needs to be done. You can hangout with Twily until the meeting." said the stallion, walking into the bathroom.
"Shining?" Said stallion stopped, looking back to find Cadence walking over to him. She gave him a quick peck on the cheek. "Thank you for understanding."
"I thought you didn't like stallions that way." said Shining, blushing madly. Cadence chuckled.
"I don't. It's just a sign of appreciation, so you can put your sword back in its sheath" said Cadence, trotting over to the door. Shining blinked a looked down. He blushed before running into the bathroom and slamming the door behind him, drowning out the laughter of his wife.
Twilight fidgeted with her hooves as she waited in the dining hall of the castle. Cadence sat next to her with Shining on the otherside of the alicorn. Said alicorn had a wing around the unicorn in an attempt to calm her as they waited for the remainder of their guests.
Celestia cleared her throat from her position at the head of the table, Luna other right. On her call a gaurd walked in, shared a few quick words with the goddess, and left back out into the hall once again.
"Our guests will be arriving shortly. I've been told they have been picked up from their rooms and are on their way." said Celestia in a cheery tone despite being nervous herself. What was discussed in this room would affect their proceedings on getting gay relationships in noble ranks accepted.
For another ten minutes the five ponies sat in relative silence, waiting for what might come with bated breathes. Twilight could feel sweat form on her brow, only to have it wiped away with a pink feather. She looked up to see Cadence smiling down at her.
Just then, the door slammed open, giving hardly no time for Cadence to remove her wing from around Twilight as Blueblood strutted in with his head held high. From behind him strode in a pair of unicorns, each rolling their eyes at the white stallions antics, and finally by six mares and a small drake, Rarity looking like she was ready to rip off the Prince's head.
Blueblood took a seat at the other end of the table, across from Celestia, causing the regal alicorn's eye to twitch. Twilight and Shining's parents located themselves in front of the trio while the elements and Spike filled in the rest of the seats, Rarity choosing a seat next to Celestia with a neutral expression.
Once all seats were taken, a silence hung over the table as they waited for someone to start the conversation on why they were there. Celestia chewed her lip as she searched for what to say, only to have Blueblood break the silence with the most obvious question.
"Well, Auntie, what did you want to see all of us about?" Asked the pompous unicorn as he examined his hoof in a nonchalant manner. Celestia's eye twitched before she took in a breath and spoke.
"Now, I want to start off our meeting on a small...political note that the nobles have brought up to us three princesses as of recent." started Celestia, grabbing the full attention of Blueblood. "As the Sparkle household is obviously aware, the nobles have enacted an old decree that neither me or my sister have seen in over a millennia. As it states, all of those in nobility, minor or princess, must be married. Of course, there are some complications in this."
"And what of that do you mean, Tia?" Asked Blueblood. Celestia cast a gaze towards the side of the table holding her sister, Twilight, Cadence, and Shining, each nodding at her. She turned back towards the rest of the group before continuing.
"When putting down guidelines, you not only made it so that we must marry inside nobility, but we are, in fact, keeping a strict ban on gay marriages in the noble houses. One, if I must say, strips one of rank, am I right?" Asked Celestia. Blueblood nodded. "Then there, Blueblood, is the issue."
"Explain to me how it is." said Blueblood, leaning forward. Celestia was about to amswer when Cadence cut her off.
"Because me and Twilight have been dating for the last three years." A heavy silence fell over the room as everypony in the room stared at them in shock, excluding a few who already knew. Blueblood growled and slammed his hooves on the table.
"Anypony else not telling the truth about their sexuality?" Asked the stallion. Rarity moved closer to Celestia, Rainbow Dash looked away as she wrapped a wing around Fluttershy, brining the mare closer. Blueblood turned his attention towards Luna.
"So what, are you the only straight princess?" Asked Blueblood. Luna went to answer just as the doors were thrown open, an azure mare rushing in. She stopped in front of the staring crowd as she attempted to catch her breath.
"T-the Great and p-Powerful Trixie has....Celestia, third pony is difficult when winded. Cadence smiled as she figured why the mare had been called. Meanwhile, five of the elements of harmony were just realizing who entered.
"What the hay are you doing here?!" Shouted Dash, breaking everyone out of their shock. Trixie yelped as she suddenly had Rainbow up against her face.
"I do believe I was invited." said Trixie, pushing the rainbow maned Pegasus away.
"And who in tarnation would do that?" Asked AJ, narrowing her eyes at Trixie. The clearing of a throat brought everyone's attention to Luna, who had kept a rather neutral expression the entire time.
"I did, in fact. Trixie." Luna motioned for the mare to take the empty chair that Luna had kept between her and Twilight. As Trixie made her way over to her seat, Luna focused back on her nephew.
"Now, I believe you were asking if I was the only straight princess, am I right?" Asked the goddess, recieving a nod in return. "Yes, well, to answer that." Luna quickly moved and captured the unaware Trixie in a kiss, almost causing her to fall over on top of Twilight.
The azure mare blinked before she leaned into the kiss, holding it for a few seconds before Luna broke it off. Trixie blushed and took her seat once again. Luna smiled dumbly before turning to her dumbfounded nephew.
"I don't believe there to be any straight monarchs in this castle besides you, Blueblood." said Luna, gaining a giggle from a few of the couples and a chuckle from Shining Armour. Blueblood stammered before pointing a hoof at Shining.
"W-what about the wedding?!" He asked.
"It was real. I loved, or rather thought I loved Cadence, and we actually got married. It wasn't until during the reception when I caught these two," He pointed a hoof at the lavender and pink couple who just started whistling innocently. ",almost kissing. It was then that I learned of their relationship, Cadence's fear of me, and that Twily was left out of the dark of both my knowledge of their relationship and the wedding."
"But then why did you marry him in the first place?" Asked Blueblood. Cadence rolled her eyes.
"Because I was the first picked, dumbass. Oh, and I will still geld you if I catch you trying to hit on Twily or any of her friends." said Cadence with a wink. Blueblood paled visibly at that comment.
"That was you?"
"It was." Silence hung over the table, waiting for someone to start up conversation once again. Finally, it was Bright Light and Dawn Sparkle that spoke.
"Well, if both my children are okay with this...relationship, then I will gladly except it." said Dawn, her husband nodding in agreement. The three siblings gave each other before back at the mare.
"I'm still getting a divorce when this situation is handled." said Shining.
"He is still sleeping in a separate bed." Cadence remarked with smirk.
"I'm just glad this isn't some incestual three-way relationship." said Twilight with a shrug. There was a collective shiver throughout the room as they considered and threw out the idea. All eyes finally settled back on Blueblood, the fate of these relationships weighing on his shoulders. And he was aware of it.
"Well," he said with a sigh, casting a look at the three supposedly illegal couples. "I can't say I completely approve of these relationships, but you all are, in a sense, family, and I don't betray my family. I will keep my mouth shut, but I'm giving you a year and a half to get around the rules or at least change them. After then, I'm leaking information into the press." said Blueblood in a serious. Despite the hidden threat, there was a collective sigh as he overall accepted it.
"Well, as much as enjoyed this meeting, I think its time for all of us to spend some time with our loved ones before they must leave." said Celestia, standing from her seat. Everyone else followed suit, gave their good byes, and went their own ways for the rest of the night.
"That was...interesting." said Twilight as she and Cadence made their way back to her way. Cadence giggled and nuzzled her marefriend on the cheek.
"Indeed it was. I'm just glad we got that pompous ass to accept us." said Cadence with a roll of her eyes.
"You don't like him that much, do you?" Asked Twilight. Cadence scoffed.
"He was a self-centered plot when we were kids, he is still one now. Not much has changed in the last twenty years except his tactics for picking up mares." said the alicorn. Her ears perked up and she grinned down at Twilight, asking a silent question. The unicorn saw this and chuckled.
"How is it I fell in love with a sex addict?" Asked Twilight, shaking her head. Cadence pouted.
"Hey! I'm not a sex addict. I only stop by the library once a week to rut you." said the mare defensively. Twilight rolled her eyes.
"Yes, and that one night includes anal, blowjobs, 69, amd eating me out within a few hours. I can barely walk the next day!" Said Twilight. Cadence rolled her eyes this time.
"Can you blame me when we live in two separate cities? I mean, seriously. Before we screwed, what, every other night and that was either a quick hoofy or anal. Now I'm so sex deprived I have to milk you!" Complained Cadence as they stopped in front of their room. Twilight looked the doors up and down them at the numerous guards patroling the area. She sighed and pushed the mare inside.
"I'm putting a sound proof bubble around the room and limiting you to one round of each. Finally, you are cleaning the sheets in the morning." said Twilight, climbing on the bed. Cadence grinned as she trotted up to the other mare and locked their lips together, slowly guiding their bodies to the bed. After a few seconds when she was on top, Cadence broke the kiss with a grin.
"Deal."
Futa Cadence, anyone? 
Anywho, because I want to keep this teen, I might do what I did with ECWM and make a Clop Sode Story for all da sexy times I don't want to post in here. Comment your opinions on that topic and enjoy the update!
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Bitches she's queen(princess really but who gives a buck?) she can do whatever the hell she wants! Who cares what some petty nobles think!?
How about Futa Twilight, dood? Or am I the only person on the site that likes writing that?
Haha. Poor Shining Armor. That was not information he needed to know.
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Not the only one. Also, all alicorns are futa, and there is a Twilicorn tag.....it's coming.
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Considering that Character Tags, it will happen.
3921063 the nobles have control over the law making, while the princesses help enforce them. or i think that's how it works.
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In a way, yes. Father Mortivida explained it last chapter, but the noble system gets every law passed and creates them as well. The princesses have to go through the Nobel houses for the sake of not disrupting the system and getting violent backlash because of that. I will explain this more next chapter.
3921122 BUT! She is their ruler so she can't be dethroned for something as silly as that! They ARE her partners, she isn't a president.
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Oh no, she can be overthrown. It's how a healthy government works and if she breaks the ground rules set out, she can be overthrown by either the noble houses or the public or both if serious enough.
3921172 .......WHY!!!!??? King Sombra ruled with an iron hoof and HE was able to stay on the throne?!
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He was a tyrant, not a true King or Queen of a healthy government as Celestia, Luna and Cadence are.
3921188 He may have magic on his side but hey, we are arguing over something I could easily stop right now but I won't.
I'da thought Blueballs would be the main opponent... oh well.
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Throwin ya a curve ball.
I like this sexy Cadance.
What about Spike, I mean he was RIGHT THERE MAN! A little reaction would have been appreciatted...........or is he with somepony already?
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Heh...we won't know until we make it to Ponyville next chapter.
well forgive me for this for i must go laugh until i die
Go 'head. Not nearly enough Twidence on Fimfiction.
If all alicorns are fully hermaphrodites, then for legal purposes is it even possible for them to engage in a technically gay relationship? After all, they can provide evidence of the proper equipment for either gender, and can sire and/or bear children.
Of course, from another, more antagonistic point of view, it could be argued that there is no possible way for them to engage in a straight relationship either. Except maybe with another alicorn.
Oh, and for the record, Twidance is just the cutest thing ever! *squee*
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Well in truth with all monarchy. the Prince, Princess, Queen, King, ect. are actually manily used as figure heads and spokes persons. The real power always lies in the noble house's for they have the backing of the peoples pocket's and ideas at their finger tips. Something Royalty does not
3921872 Ah! But what if the ruler has a very creative imagination, or is a child?
No offence but I think you need a better editor, I found lots of mistakes including spelling errors and missing words which damaged the sentences they were in and stopped them making sense which is a shame as I am liking this fic
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Auramane is mainly a prereader more than a editor. He is all OEE could give me at the time but he does his job.
You know, I am surprised no one brings up Twilight's relationship with Cadance as to being how she figured out there was something wrong to begin with while Chrysalis was impersonating her.
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I'm surprised as well. It should have been obvious for Twilight since, when Chrysalis was impersonating her, Cadence didn't show much recgonization to Twilight and more affection to. Shining despite being a lesbian. The first few seconds of seeing her was an obvious give away for Twi.
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Well Twilight probably wouldn't say anything since her and Cadence have been keeping it secret for 3 years. While she could have told everyone how she knew something was wrong it would be giving up their secret then. But no one mentioning it now as how Twilight knew just seems odd.
wait, if there both sexes then no matter who Cadence marriage meaning she corld of got out of the wedding
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Not exactly. She was originally a mare and all three of them have dominate female genes, even if they have a package. Having a dick doesn't automatically make you both a stallion and a mare.
3922676 oh ok X3
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even then the system runs as usual. History has proven this many times over
I really hope to see Shining keep his prince title... And find a better mare as apparently the mane 6, the diarchy and Cadence are all lesbians... But I am losing hope on this idea happening.
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i love both stories...i dont want to miss on the exrtras!!!!!!
This is now one of my favourite lines of all time.
As for the clop I say go for it.
3921907 I know. He brushes it of like him and cadence were not married! I mean it's like oh yeah I know your in love with me and we got married but I don't feel the same way and have been dating your sister. If I was Shining I would be pissed
. Or perhaps he's pretending to be okay with it so no one suspects him when they are discovered dead
. Slutlight sparkunt and Cuntdence should have bruises from shining freaking out and hitting them
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My Faith humanity has gone when said something like that.
This like Complex situation and you cut with chainsaw and murder with it.(Do feel like hero yet, Spec ops the line show this clear an bad thing)
Also this Actions are most illogical
Well, it's official, I found a story, I like more then Her Royal Suitors.
So Alicorns are shemales... I mean, I knew that alicorns share physical attributes of all three races... but both genders? That's something new. I'm not really a big fan of shemales, bur fic overall is interesting, so I'm waiting for next chapters.
I'm all for where this story is going. Futanari effects to all the alicorn princesses has always been my head canon and I have really started to enjoy the Cadence Sparkle ship.
Keep up the good work.
I want more
More please !!!!!!
Please do a clop side story and update this one please
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Can haz update soon?
3969097 There more then just two genders friend.
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I know that. It was just a new concept for me for the fanfiction based on MLP, where you see only two of them. That's why I wrote "both of them". If anyone got offended, I'm sorry :c
Hey! Turns out Cadance never loved Shining and manipulated him wholeheartedly, and even though he's in love with her, she never loved him. But, it's okay, because she loves his sister, who also betrayed him, so he's going to forget all his feelings of betrayal and bitterness because he's loyal to his sister, even though he should probably be just as, if not more, bitter at his sister for this.
What a completely unbelievably tame reaction from him, and like so many stories that have the guy get over it too fast, it's pretty disrespectful to his feelings to make them disappear like this because they're inconvenient to the story... And there are a ton of good ways to handle it, but it would involve actually building out his conflict with his ex-wife and Twilight.