• Member Since 4th Dec, 2013
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generalsnaz


Amateur illustrator and MLP fan from West Virginia. Obviously my favorite food is hamburgers. And obviously Applejack is best pony.

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This story is a sequel to Fritter Jacked


Since the events of Fritter Jacked, Apple Fritter has been happily having a sexy, secret, and taboo relationship with her cousin Applejack. But on the day of the Pet Center Fundraiser, Fritter can't resist bringing a new furry companion into their lives.

But Applejack has no love for dam-building, field flooding, crop ruining beavers! Can Apple Fritter choose between her new pet, Gnawty Bits, and her lover!? Or will she convince AJ to keep the loveable rodent!?

FIND OUT, RIGHT NOW, THROUGH THE MIRACLE OF WORDS:

(Don't read if you have any decency left)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

3993130
With how big the apple family is, they likely just say cousin to simplify things. Likely she is a cousin so far removed that the incest isn't too much of an issue and they just think it is.

3993363 That... actually makes sense. It's still incest, but it makes sense. Not gonna read it though.

Good grief, you two. You only have to worry about family relations when it's a mare and a stallion. There's nothing those two can do that'd do anything besides offend some oversensitive snoots.

3993130
Suit yourself. You're welcome to have your own opinions, preferences, and beliefs just like everyone else. :pinkiesmile:

3993363
For the sake of convenience, they are first cousins in my story. Granny Smith is Apple Fritter's grandmother too. Her staying at Sweet Apple Acres makes more sense that way.

3997046
Yep. Although, if you're responsible about the 'having kids' issue, I don't see anything wrong with hetero family relationships either.

Sequel!? Sequel!

I'm so happy! I'm so ha-

in which they were mareitime whale hunters

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mareitime

You're dead to me.

Oh Fritter, you're such a silly pony.

They won't be able to play for more than thirty secods at a time with that safe word.

Usually I detest comedies that frequently break the fourth wall, describe cartoon physics, and feature a dirty-minded OC (background horse, but still), but this one was legitimately funny. I am glad that you went back to it after all these years.

10982159
Thanks! I don't usually get many compliments on my comedy, so I really appreciate it!

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