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generalsnaz


Amateur illustrator and MLP fan from West Virginia. Obviously my favorite food is hamburgers. And obviously Applejack is best pony.

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Apple Fritter comes to Sweet Apple Acres to once and for all convince her cousin Applejack that they are meant to be together. Applejack, however constantly misinterprets these confessions, leaving Fritter at a loss. Determined to make her obsessive fantasies a reality, Apple Fritter goes on the offensive. Will she succeed in capturing the loveable farm pony's heart?

Be warned. It's wacky.

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Has the FritterJack couple been done before?

Is it even a thing?

...well it is now! BAM!

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Comments ( 21 )

The buck did I just read? Wait....huh..interesin.

I did at "Ready to hit the hay, Fritter." Besides baby Applejack wanted more Apple Fritter, so she of course would be all over her cousin... :ajsmug: Well at least that was what I thought when I came in to read this.

3610137

Something real silly that I totally didn't put much thought into! :pinkiegasp:

3611144

Oh! It looks like we have a smarty-pants in my classroom! Saw that ending coming from a mile away didja?

Well then, I have one thing to say to you: :derpytongue2:

Aha! Take that!

3611879 I like you.
I like your stuff, too. Indeed, good sir, you have now entertained me twice today, with two good fics. I tip my hat to thee.

3617903

Well shucks Sleeping Kitty, thanks for the compliments! And thanks for the hat tipping, though it must be a tiny hat to fit on that tiny feline head of yours.:applejackconfused:

hey, this was pretty cool! there ought ta be a sequel where we get to see what their relationship puts them through. maybe that's just me that would like that....

3619978

I'm afraid this was just a silly one-shot story. I might write a new story at some point that's a more serious take on this duo, but it won't be related to this one.

...but now that I think about it, doing a sequel to this would be pretty fun... Crap! Now I don't know what to do anymore!
:twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops:

3621108 well, what i always suggest is making a list of ideas you think you want to do, but aren't entirely sure. then you can come back to it later and decide.

3621330

That....list would probably look like this:

Ideas:
1. Twilight goes to Taco Bell.
2. Applejack goes to Taco Bell.
3. Pinkie Pie goes to Taco Bell.
4. Rarity goes to Taco Bell
......

......
176. Snips goes to Taco Bell.
177. Snails goes to Taco Bell.
178. Twilight goes to Burger King.
179. Applejack goes to Burger King.
.....


:facehoof:
But, advice taken, nonetheless!

What the buck did I just read....

I felt like I'v seen this ship before...

Dear Celestia this is weirder than AppleMac... Actually.. No it's not, it's just as weird..

Why am I commenting on this story again..? Right! Almost forgot to mention that I found this story weird, kinda creepy, funny, and awesome. You sir, should keep writing.

3653212

You should've headed my warnings that it was wacky! :derpytongue2: :rainbowwild: :moustache:

Now it's too late! You've been consumed by my insane fiction, and I will use your compliments as fuel to run my caffeine deprived brain!


No force in this universe can save you now.

that was funny

3658706

I am. You are a special person for noticing. I'm quite fond of my awesome. :rainbowdetermined2:

You can't have it by the way. It's my awesome.
Without it... I am just a shell....:pinkiesad2:

3658616

Why thank you! That was the intent! :rainbowwild:

3658929

Psh, screw awesome, super amazingly cool is 20% cooler...

3658929 well then you did a great job with your intent

... I love this.

I just read this for like the 4th time. How is nopony giving this more attention! Seriously, this one never fails to make me chuckle.

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