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This story is a sequel to Solar Child
After the events of Solar Child, the royal family makes some changes that will change the way the public views them, but they don't give a damn! Meanwhile, a group once thought gone rises from the ashes Celestia left it in and plan their attack on the royal family.
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Sequel: Solar Child: Past Demons
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so no sad tag later down the road? just asking.
Hooray for sequels!
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We might see it. For now it is non-existent but it may make an appearance later on.
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can you at least tell us before hand?
It's rare to see a Lunestia where they have a foal, only ever seen it once before in fact. Will the foals be born before the end of this?
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Most likely a chapter or two before the end. This just focuses on the pregnancy, weddings, and a certain cult rising up only to be crushed by a not so happy mother to be.
nice, if you want a prereader, sir...
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Decaprio! I will keep that in mind,
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) like the one before it. It will be sad at times but I might not go as far as Sad tag. For now, its just Romance, Slice of Life, and AU.
It probably will not. This is more Slice of Life (completely forgot the tag.
I am already loving this story, though I think you should add a mane six tag if only because they deserve to be told, and even if Twi and Dashie didn't tell them Pinkie Pie's pinkie sense would and besides shouldn't aunts be told about an incoming foal?
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All these tags I'm forgetting.
I tried to plane an attack once, but it turned out they had a pretty good air force.
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Oh, the spelling fail hurts.
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Have you ever been shot down by an air force led by Marshmallow People? 'Cuz I'm sure that hurts a bit more.
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Damn marshmallow people.
Featured spot on 9/10. Thank you for that. Keep up voting and faveing. Lets see how long it can stay.
I think I'm opting out of this. The story itself is a pinch weak, although eventful, it fails to completely deliver. It could be from the shortness of the chapters, the brevity in how you cover things, or something else. Additionally, the grammatical, structural, tense, capitalization, similar sounding words... errors that are so abundant it's more of a surprise to not see an error every sentence makes it painful to read through. You seriously need to get an editor to clean this stuff up and teach you how to improve your writing.
I'm sorry, but as it stands this just isn't worth the effort to muddle my way through it. While I applaud your writing speed, you need to start focusing on quality, not quantity.
Good luck, both with the story and in the search for an editor.
Definitely an improvement grammar and word wise from the last story.
..Anywhore?
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Ray William Johnson qoute
3186531 As Benjamin Franklin once said, and I quote, "to err is human, to repent divine,to persist devilish."
So long as you own up to your mistake's, and at least try to fix them, then there is nothing more a person can ask of you.
P.S.
If you ever need a proofreader let me know ok.
ok that first chapter was pretty freaking funny
Aaaand, now' I'm following you.
I greatly thank you for blueblood's fate
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Lets just hope he drops the soap.
what an absolute dick Blueblood is. I would not at all be surprised if Celestia has a Dalek she turns on him by the end of this fic. also, can Celestia have a Dalek that utterly incinerates Blueblood? then can they burn the ashes, bake them into batpony food, feed him to the aforementioned batponies, incinerate the droppings, and toss them into the sun?
as is obvious, i absolutely hate Blueblood.
hmmm
Hmm. I like bulebloods response and what happens to him
Great work on the chapter, I loved it.
I am of the opinion that if Blueblood acted like that all the time, then Celestia wouldn't even take him seriously enough to punish his defiance.
3190741 Right in front of Bubba....
BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3190711 Still not as great as the time he ran away from a skirmish in Ponyville and ended up face first in the mud, impaled in a rather...ahem...unfortunate place
Anyways! So Alicorn ascension can happen after you wed?
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Not exactly. you just become immortal along with the alicorn. Shining Armor is married to Cadence and still is a unicorn.
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"Dat ass."
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You two leave Vintagebeef's puppy out of this =P
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Bubba goin' to LOVE him... "Hey pretty boy... forumup.org/images/smiles/Drogar-EvilGrin%28LBG%29.gif You dropped your soap"[youtube=ZO7-QJGVdM4]
...your math is terrible
Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I'm bogged down by finishing up Exie's Contest fic. Now onto the story.
Ok. I have a problem with this, or at least how it's written. You have it as if Twilight deals with the night completely. Which is Luna's Special Talent. The very reason she went Night Mare Moon was that ponies weren't appreciating her night sky. So just because a new constellation popped up wouldn't make her give up her special talent to some pony else. Especially when she draws great joy with painting the night. I can see her being miffed at first, and / or have Twilight assist her with the night sky, bonding with her niece. But not just a step down.
Or is it that Luna raises the moon, and the night sky. Then Twilight adds stars to it? While that doesn't make a lot of sense ... since the stars pop up when Luna raises her night. I guess I can see an AU were the night starts black, and stars pop up afterwards ... but than how did Celestia raise the stars?
I could see the stars staying in the sky and coming out when the sun is lowered. And Luna (now Twilight I guess) touching it up here and there. Or changing it slightly [making brighter, shifting slightly, moving from northern to southern constellations as the seasons change appropriately]. But it just was something that bothered me with how it was written.
It could use some clarification, and clearing up so that it doesn't sound like Luna gave Twilight her night. Unless she's going to go NMM later on again.
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Ok now onto the critique of this chapter.
The opening I'll admit bothered me that it took away a good bit from the opening chapter. Mostly since Luna doesn't care how much power it takes her to do the night sky it's something she ended up imprisoned for a thousand years on the moon because ponies where appreciating her night, although her and Twilight sharing that time together to bond as a family I can see, but this was talked about in detail above so I'll skip this part of the critique.
The relationship point of this chapter. Which honestly this chapter should have focused souly, was rather good. I liked Luna's slip of the tongue, and Rainbow's ribbing was funny. Twilight and Celestia's interactions with the loves of their lives was adorable. And all in all was great. I loved what you did there, and seeing Rainbow Dash as a mother and Tia carry Twilight's sister is going to be magical.
I greatly look forward to reading the next chapter. Congrats on a 95% great start on a great first chapter!
Do you mean rather than? If not what did you mean?
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Yay
! Public indecency. Rainbow wasn't the only one who turned crimson at that comment.
This chapter was full of win!
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I loved what happened to Blue Blood here. Along with Lulu's sex tape and Rainbow Dash wanting it FOR SCIENCE!
Seriously though. Great chapter. I loved reading it.
Once the moon was nearly in the sky, Twilight focused on her magic and pointed her head directly at the sky. Her horn glowed in a rose aura as she channeled her magic. Soon, stars rose from her horn and shot into the sky, exploding in the night sky and painting it. Millions of stars, constellations, and galaxies covered the night sky as the moon journeyed into the sky. The glow around her horn faded and she opened her eyes to view her work.
um....u like the word 'sky', don't u? XD
i also fixed the word 'channeled' in this paragraph.
Ponylovingdragon i got a question why is this story on On Hiatus now and why can't i read 'Chapter Three: Realizations and Second Thoughts'
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Well, Solar Child is under major edit and I can't edit that and write this at the same time. As for the third chapter, it was deleted. I will rewrite it once I finish editing Solar Child.
3203334 ok
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I may break the Haitus just this once and try to throw together chapter three since its a Sunday and I don't have any homework.
3208468 ok
Has any one told you that your stories areMOTHER FUCKINGawesome?
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A few times, yes.
3193537 I love this song
Hmmm... maybe those reanimation spells did work after all...