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Ok... So I'm a little confused. Safer is supposed to be Sephiroth correct? Because so far I feel I'm seeing someone who likes to jerk people's chains and be kind of a jerk rather than the somewhat twisted and Machiavellian character he seems to resemble in his own story.
Not a bad story if you ignore that point however.
Forget my opinion from earlier... this story doesn't even make sense anymore. What was supposed to happen exactly? Was it an excuse to write biblical things?
Seriously, I'm just lost.
This story is freakin' AWESOMELY EPIC!!!
3684678 Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it.
One Winged Angel played in my head as I read this.
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There is a bit of an explanation. I mean, part of it was clearly the author cranking the silliness up to eleven - you can see that from the 'banana' meme. But there are two major non-pony elements to the story - Final Fantasy 7 and Judaism - and there is actually a connection, however slight.
There is a fairly esoteric bit of religious or mystical philosophy of Jewish origin called Kabbalah, which is in this fic called Qlappalah. Briefly, Kabbalah describes several sephiroth-- attributes or manifestations of God-- which together are sometimes called the Tree of Life. These are the different qualities that Luna attributes to the ponies channeling energy for the final confrontation.
So Sephiroth was beaten by the sephiroth.
...I think that was the entire point of this fic, and I can picture the author giggling madly as he wrote it.
Interesting idea, but not very good written. I can't nor upvote nor downvote.
One winged pony, one winged pony...one winged angel?
Me: lololololololololol (x9001)
You foretold the future!
What evil have I here stumbled across?
You've caught my interest, consarnit
Looking forward to reading the rest, mate
Don't forget to credit Nowacking
Then again, veeeery memorable
Soosim - סוסים
At first I was thinking WTB, what is this?, but then I saw your explanation and now I'm like Oh yes. Oh so much yes
I know where you got that. It's hard to hear, but it's actually I'm the P to the inkie, to the P to I to E
Though this-
-is the best and only likeable part of Sakkakumon's letter
Nice and fuzzy feely
But this was great
I'mma suckah for religion /)
Is Qlappalic supposed to be Kabbalah?
A legend is born.
You have my attention
It's on now!
It's reading time
Chapter One: Where Celestia is not permitted to finish a single sentence
Okay, okay, I'm sorry but I just can't. I just cannot.
I tried again. It didn't work.
oh dear...Nicely done, and enjoying the final pun.
7826006 I'm so embarrassed right now.
And every moment that I remember this exists.
Your mother's a whore
7938295 ...so that's what she was doing working the overnight shift at the "hospital".
7938300
Oh she was working, alright.
Working someone's shaft.
7938304 I was about to use my usual stock response until I realized how awful that would have come out.
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I'll come out your shaft
7938705 Hot.
Also why are you using this story to communicate with me. You know my soul dies a little bit every time I see this―
Oh.
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Because I can say whatever the fuck I want and know you'll never show it to anybody ever.
And that makes me laugh.
7938722 Man, I've certainly come a long way from three years ago, haven't I?
I went from writing this shit to stuff people actually like, as well as not make my stomach turn upon being reminded that it exists.
Insanity Percentage: 36%
This story made me pause and simply ask just what the hell happened. I don't know who Sephiroth is, nor do I understand why the hell Rarity was... "soosi"? Why was she Jewish? That was important for the ending, but it seemed like one of the most random plot points ever...
By God, I won't be surviving the 10 story challenge.
It cleans it with WUBS! (Intense dubstep music playing)
Sephiroth is dealing with being a pony as well as I expected...
He still is an egotistical jerk though... which is fine
Blue Blue!
This seems... off... like, despite the fact that I like the premise, there's just not enough substance to the story itself. The chapters are over much too quickly and feel like they're filled with some sort of joke that I don't seem to understand. I may finish the story but I was kind of expecting more... well... more
So, finished the story... well... I believe that if you did happen to do a rewrite or even just expand on the chapters here it could be quite a bit better... the roughness definitely shows on this one since I got to the end and I felt the same as when I finished watching FLCL
"What... The fuck?
"
And that about sums up my feelings there.
Estuans interius
Ira vehementi
Estuans interius
Ira vehementi
SEPHIROTH!