Nopony knew what it was. But one thing was for sure; it was deadly, and nopony knew it started before it was too late.
Now the rest of the bearers of the Elements are seperated, each of them trying desperately to survive in the harsh climate of what seems to be the end of the world.
However, if Twilight can find a cure to the infection, she could possibly end the outbreak and return everything to the way it once was before.
But will she be able to survive, physically and mentally, what lurks in the darkness and shrieks into the ears of the frightened? And will she be able to find answers, before it is too late?
ACT 1 of 2: Twilight and the rest of the Element Bearers try to reunite as one, but they are scattered across the land of Equestria. Twilight needs to find them and fast, before more death can be spread.
Note: This is set before the events of Season 3 of MLP. There is no Twilicorn or Tirek or crazy stuff like that.
Note 2: This was first started a while ago when I was still a novice, so the first few chapters are terribly written.
Changelings vs Zombies!!
Let do this!
*Charges towards a group of zombies*
YAAAAaa....aaa....
*Slows down when he notices the small group is actually a few hundred zombies*
Hmmmm, nevermind.....
*Turns around and goes back home*
I like this.
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I'm glad you do!
Alright.
You asked for criticism....
But I really can't find anything! This is a really good story so far! You managed to keep a good level of tension and be realistic!
The only criticism is this:
It's more slowly. But that's it! This is an amazing fic so far!
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Thanks a bunch! Makes me so happy that my stuff is appreciated!
3501445 I've been listening to the band Hollywood Undead whilst reading this...very fitting
Ch 1:
Sentence Fragment. Consider revising.
Ch 2:
Remove the comma.
I see many problems with the storyline. Ponies can eat grass. They cannot live off a diet of meat alone or they will starve. If ponies start eating other ponies, that makes the demand for flora even smaller, so I imagine that plants would grow wild.
Other than that, this seems like an interesting survival horror story. Unless you have a brilliant new story concept that would blow my mind, this seems like a pretty solid story thus far. I like your writing style and look forward to seeing where this story will go.
I can't even touch the first chapter until that description is touched up.
First off, no. Try "An infection had befallen Equestria, and nopony expected it until it was too late."
Second: No comma.
Third. You only reference Twilight Sparkle so it should be "she" and not "they"
Oh my god, if i did a CinemaSins review on thid fic, i would get over 9000 sins in dis storeh.
Noffense though.
Quick question can pegasus zombies fly and can zombicorns use magic
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You, my sir, have given me an idea.
Who was patient zero? Aka the first infected.
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Ideas...
They're filling inside my brain...
Stop with the ideas!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
So when do you think the next chapter will be out
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As of yet, I don't know. I haven't updated this story in a while.
I'm staring at this story with a mix of despair and desire.
I really want to read it, and enjoy it. But at the same time, I don't know if it'll actually update often enough to make reading it worth it. I dislike never knowing the end of cool stories, after all.
Oh, buck it. I'll read it. I just hope you update more...
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I understand your concern. But that was because there was a lot of stuff going on in my life, I just had to stop for a while. But I will tell you that I am revitalized and ready to work, so you don't need to worry about it.
How many acts will this story have?
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I plan to have two acts. The first act is just to set up the story. The second act is where it will be the middle and subsequent end of the story.
The first act I hope to have thirteen chapters or slightly longer. Same with the second act.