The Demon

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There once was a filly. She looked for her special talent with her friends in the form of crusading.

Then came a horrible, disgusting demon.

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Manaphy

Manaphy #1 · Nov 7th, 2014 · 3 · ·

Simple, but sweet. I enjoyed reading this and could sympathize with Scootaloo, and seeing her friends again put a nice smile on my face and warmed my heart. Have an upvote and a favorite! Even if this is the last fic you post on here, I hope you continue to write, whether you share it or not, as you do have talent. Great job!

Dustin Lange

Dustin Lange #2 · Nov 7th, 2014 · 2 · ·

A wonderful story indeed.

I loved it!

Actually leaving now

Actually leaving now #3 · Nov 9th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Beautiful.

Dragonfist

Dragonfist #4 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

Extremely well written; bravo.

Sassy Ned

Sassy Ned #5 · Nov 17th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Excellent story: short and to the point. I liked the perspective you bring through with this thing. There were a few grammatical errors through the piece that could be ironed out with some editing, but overall, terrific.

Secret Septus

Secret Septus #6 · Oct 20th, 2015 · · ·

Story IS good, but... Not in my taste.
I mean it's just too nice, something in there feels wrong, like.
I have no words for this. It's too good, and it makes this bad.

TheCrimsonDragon