I particularly enjoy the Equestria Girls setting and also have a soft spot for the CMC. Thanks for reading!
A story set in the Equestria Girls universe.
In the weeks following the Fall Formal, Rainbow Dash finds herself dwelling more and more on that night and the extraordinary things that happened. Now that things are back to "normal", she realizes that she longs for something she experienced, a thrill like none other she has ever had before.
My first fiction, set to occur during the end of the Fall Semester of Canterlot High School.
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I like it. You describe everything with care and enought detail. I can see pictures in my head when I read this. Keep up the good work.
Can't wait for more.
I was thinking about an idea similar to this, it's a good story idea, and it was well written. I think I'm going to follow this story.
This seems to be off to a good start!
Also:
I see what you did there.
I was drinking when I read this. Thanks for making me choke.
3056690 maybe 'shipping' in next chapter?
3057433 Hmm?
Applejack must think Dash is SO selfish right now....
Great cliffhanger.
The next chapter!! Please keep going, you made a good start and now it just feels kinda short.
Buuuuuutt its missing something. Liiiiike
btw, I didn't see any real grammar issues or anything like that soooo awesome job. Keep it up.
Thanks everyone for the feedback so far! There's definitely more on the way.
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I just couldn't resist a little inside joke. I'm one of "those guys" that just has to make a pun even when it's not always the best choice.
It's 5am as I'm writing this, drinking coffee and having an internal conversation in my head with Applejack about plot points. Is this what writing fan fiction leads to?
3060100 Yeah, I do that sometimes too.
Huh, discussing plot points with internal simulations of the characters? That actually seems like a decent way of developing ideas...
Before I read this , I was like,"This is gonna be soo funny" And after reading this I was like "I know that feeling sis"
When I read the description i was like: you and me both. And now that i read it i am like: you're lucky you ever had any wings!
Also, you're an evil witch and can magic me up some wings. Riiiiight?
3079374 Right.
I can imagine everything actually happening.
I loved the pranks with Pinkie, and the volleyball match was very interesting. Not much going on in this chapter, but the character interactions were great.
Also, why do I have a feeling that that penny experiment is going to come back to bite her in the butt later on?
3079374 Definitely.
Very good. Glad to see that the ball is still rolling on this story.
Good Job on Pinkie's prank lol
Aye well then that makes me think of two things 1 scootaloo is the ony girl that wore pants... 2
3131641 didn't apple bloom have pants? Or we're thy shorts?
Not much happened in this chapter, but I'm guessing the means bat something epic is in store. Im really enjoying the way you're writing this, the character interactions and descriptions.
If you wanted, you could write some awesome stories for EqG... I seem to enjoy yor style the best.
Nice chapter. :) Towards the end, oddly enough I was listening to one of my favorite anime openings and the song seemed to fit with the end of this chapter. Enjoy.
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That's a great song, and yeah, I can see Rainbow cranking that up
Here's the actual video that I was listening to as I was writing the end of the chapter:
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Writing fanfics are definitely a new stretch for me, and the next chapter should stir the pot a little more.
Thanks for the kind words!
It's nice to see a story that looks at the aftermath of the movie from the other side's perspective. Far too many people are willing to file the film under "Never Happened." Plus, you've definitely set up something intriguing with the pseudo-cutie mark. I look forward to more.
We can only hope it's not cancer.
Haha! I like Rainbow and Scoot's relationship. This was a cute chapter
Awesome.
Aww, nice moves! Those two are adorable in any universe. And she has some really good advice for Dashie, too.
Hmm. While Scootaloo's shot of perspective was nice, that dream seems to imply there's something weird approaching. We'll just have to see...
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Sometimes you just have to tell someone you really admire "Get over yourself!"
And I have to admit, I wanted to feature these two in an Equestria Girls story, mainly because in the movie Rainbow Dash's dialogue was basically very flat, mostly just "I'm awesome" or "This is awesome" and they didn't give anything to the CMC. So this is my (selfish) way of letting those two characters have a bit more of a voice then they had in the film.
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To misquote Freud, sometimes a dream is just a dream
Though this is Rainbow Dash we're talking about...who knows? I would guess that Vice-Principal Luna is lucky she can't peek in this universe.
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Or can she?
Their birth marks are turning into their cutie marks? *Twitch* *Twitch* *Twitch*
Noooooo it can't be over
I need to know what's up with the "birth marks"
Y U leave us hangin'
. Seriously though if your ending this please say you'll make a sequel
Haha, I enjoyed RD's YouTube comment to Apple Bloom.
I'm sad that its over, but was a good read.
Good ending and cliff hanger. Nuff said.
This was very well done, and it's only your first story. I can't wait for the sequel! (please tell me there WILL be a sequel, or at least a continuation) The was a really great fic, possibly one of my favorite Equestria Girls stories ever! And by the whole birthmark/Cutie Mark foreshadowing thing(y), I know that you won't fail to disappoint me.
Forget typing, I can't even get my ideas for a fanfic on paper without derping it up!
Glad and sad to see this come to an end. Sad bc it was a good read but glad bc it wasn't dragged and drawn out
Cool, glad that RD got to feel the air again. Also laughed a bit at the "Applebloom, any pics show up on youtube, I'm gonna kill you."
I also laughed a bit at the AJ hanging RD bit. Would have been messed up if she said that was the plan the whole time, but I doubt you would have went that route in this story.
Awesome Work, and great job.
Thanks everyone for the kind words and encouragement. Today is a bit of the "Morning After" syndrome, so you reflect a bit on what you did or said, and then decide where to go from here.
I really enjoyed writing this, and I guess I'm starting to develop a headcanon of sorts about the Equestria Girls universe. That said, I am certain I will want to write more stories for the "High Five" as they come to me. Keep calm and scribble on as it were.
This was great! You've achieved a very good balance between the pony atmosphere of Equestria and the mundane setting of the human world. Rainbow Dash's ambitions are entirely in character for her, and the relationship between her and Scootaloo is adorable. This was a good ending, but I'd love to see where it goes next, too!
Awesome!
no. no. NNNNOOOOO!!!!!! I NEED MOOOOAAARRR!!!!!!
pwease?
Wait, that's it? But you barely got started! This chapter introduced more questions than it answered! I hope you've got plans for a sequel, because if you don't, I may just have to come up with something myself.
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(Note: I have far too many irons in the fire as it is. Please don't make me throw in another one.
3186611 (And others)
I do plan to continue to write stories for Equestria Girls, and will certainly revisit the little threads I've dangled starting here. So yes, these characters (and the others!) will have more stories told.
I'm actually turning to two different characters for my next work, the idea came to me today and now I'm invested in fleshing it out. But yep, there will be more forthcoming and I'll be touching on things that this first story prompted. That said, of course I welcome anyone that wants to pick up elements from this for their own tales to go for it. The more we all write and enjoy the better, right?
Wait... is the jagged birthmark on her hip her cutie mark
Ugh, my head hurts
Well that was cute
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I have a birth mark looks like autralia with a small hole in the upper corner
3201032 I don't doubt that at al,l I just find it cliche and weird due to the fact that their birthmarks are changing into something else.
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I know... I know...