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Scantrel


I particularly enjoy the Equestria Girls setting and also have a soft spot for the CMC. Thanks for reading!

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The day had finally come. A day Rainbow Dash had waited for three years, 358 days, and a handful of hours to arrive.



Jersey? Check!
Football? Check!
Game Face? Check!
Getting interrupted from watching The. Most. Important. Thing. on television? Double Check!

But Rainbow Dash won't let that stop her, nothing is going to stand in her way of celebrating the return of the Beautiful Game!

(One-shot written to honor the 2014 World Cup)

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The Superbowl is not for another few months

Cool story bro.

When I was younger, my father took me to Cloudsdale to watch the Equestria Games, and I think I had my nose buried in a book almost the entire time.

Okay, that raises two questions with the same basis: who thought hosting the Games in Cloudsdale was a good idea, and how did Sunset get up there? Yes, cloud-walking spells are a thing, but for two-thirds of the spectators?

Aside from that, a very nice bit of friendshipping. Thank you for it. :twilightsmile:

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Glad you liked it ! :pinkiehappy:

This was a cute little story! I love reading a good EqG and Friendshipping fic. Great job!:twilightsmile:

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Thanks a ton, glad you enjoyed!

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Thanks a ton :) Been caught up all weekend watching games!

Comment posted by trapcity deleted Jun 30th, 2014

That resolution was handled far too quickly, I feel.

Other than that, though, I enjoyed the story. Except for the first paragraph. I think you overdid it just a bit.

"Dammit Rainbow I said not to touch anything!" Sunset then gave her friend a few smacks upside the head with her gold coin sack for good measure.
I really enjoyed how you captured Sunset Shimmer's timid (reluctance to overstep her bounds) demeanor that was particularly evident in Rainbow Rocks, and how Dash tries so hard to resist temptation and quickly/predictably fails. I think we all can agree Sunset didn't come to the human world empty handed, but I really liked your filling in the blanks. I also liked that Sunset didn't live in some fancy house, since if I had to choose, I'd also imagine her in some ghetto. And another thing! Good integration with the comics! (I didn't read them, but I've seen that exact page before.)
Silly Rainbow, she WOULD have to set her alarm to wake up before 2 in the afternoon. I kind of feel bad for Sunset that Rainbow didn't think to ask her...

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