When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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Geez dude. There's a Moral Event Horizon, then there's shit like this.
But please, do continue.
Fu(burp)ck......Raraataay.....yo bi(burp)tch ass is gonna get it like it's 2012.
Fuck you rarity
That is all.
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Go home pony ye drunk
you are too far gone Rarity
when I saw the words diamond dogs, I had to stop reading and look away for a few minutes. after I finished I realized something... the moon is too much of a comfort to rarity, she deserves to be sent to the sun at a unbelievably slow rate; that way she can slowly melt... until she is no more.
I can't wait to see the Mane 6's reactions to the things Rarity did to Flitter. Well that, and Rarity's punishment. It's gonna be awesome!
Because Rarity doesn't have Spike masturbating to pics of her showering; she has kidnapped and sold Spike's virgin girlfriend to the Diamond Dogs, made her own friends shun Twilight for trying to help but couldn't because of laws, and a crazy Sister that wants her dead, AND have a bunch of guards hunt her down and banish her... Rarity is such a cunt, dood.
First comment I've made so far.
Rarity....
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Rarity, you are fucking stupid. You gave her to the diamond dogs. The diamond dogs are fucking stupid. She will escape and find her way back to Ponyville. Going back to Ponyville is fucking stupid. Of course everyone would look for you if Flitter was last seen with you.
Seriously. Get. Your. Shit. Together! Unless you're planning on taking Equestria's second Lunar expedition.
Your friends will defend you, minus Twilight. Hell, you could even manipulate Spike into siding with you if you spin a yarn about how Flitter was really just using him all along. Use your imagination!
And oh, I hope that and attack Luna. Please God let them attack Luna, and let Rarity be the one to instigate it. The drama would be off-the-scale.
Rarity, believe me, if I find you ¡I'm going to KILL YOU!
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Okay, girls, there's loyalty and then there's blind fucking STUPIDITY! This isn't some villain you have to save Rarity from, it isn't like she's being held prisoner, she DRUGGED a FILLY and nearly got her RAPED! Oh, and she also drugged your other friend Spike and almost got him killed, but I guess HIS friendship doesn't matter as much, huh? Or the life of the kidnapped filly? Oh, no, it will al be alright as long as the PONY who is OUR friend is alright, damn to hell anyone else.
Just let me ask you something...
IS YOU HEAD UP YOUR ASS FOR THE WARMTH!? OR HAVE YOU JUST COME TO ENJOY THE SMELL OF SHIT AFTER SPEWING SO MUCH OF IT?
3032072 All that is true, but really Twilight is just being a bitch. Laws or not, her other friends care. I mean, in this context Twilight is right, of course, but she doesn't know that. Effectively she's given up the magic of friendship because she's Celestia's bitch, and it really pisses me off.
It really says something when the other four BREAK THE LAW to help their friend, and Twilight doesn't even stick up to Luna verbally in her defence. In terms of villainy here we have Rarity, then we have Twilight right below her, followed by Thunderlane. That's how much I hate her right now.
That's it, I really want to see rarity.....
Okay, I gotta stop reading this for awhile, It's not like I'm starting to hate it, it just when I see the word "Diamond Dog", Rarity got me REALLY PISS OFF! I don't care if sending rarity to the moon is a harsh thing, nor twilight's friends try to defend rarity, SHE DESERVE TO BE SENT TOO THE MOON, OR, again.
Oh man, I hope the dogs don't take her virginity. If they really take her virginity, I'm gonna stop reading this. I know it's sounds stupid, I'm sorry! T_T
Theres less then nothing of Rarity to save at this point.
i knew it!!! The moment I saw the whole "dark hole in the ground" thing, I KNEW the diamond dogs were going to get involved. I had respect for Rarity at some point. But seeing her like this is just fucking crazy. AND I LOVE IT!!!
3032113 Dude. Her friend got an underage chick drugged and nearly raped while trying to make her life a living hell because the kid she led on for quite some time before she broke his heart decided to move on.
There's being friends and then there's "fuck you you POS I don't give a fuck who you are to me you need to die"
Were the others dropped on their heads on the way over, didn't the princess's not explain to them what Rarity was doing to Flitter and all what's happened so far. And yet here they are acting like Rarity's some how the victim and Spike's and Flitter's and Cloudchasers' feelings don't matter... what the flying blue bucking hell is wrong with them
I ain't even gonna touch the subject of the scum formally known as Rarity, she ain't even worthy of being mentioned by name
3032113 are you reading the same story everyone else is?
I'm actually mad at Twilight's friends. After everything they were told and what has happened, they aren't against Rarity
Screw all of you! Luna, banish them all!!!
This is so many.....scratch that. This is 100% FUCKED UP!
I'm not even reading this for the clop scene anymore. Actually had to stop that at the rape seen.
Now I just want to see Rarity get the shit kicked out of her......and maybe gangbang as a generous offer to get the elements back to normal.
And shame on the other girls for not thinking of poor Flitter! Hell Applejack is a big sister, that could have easily been Applebloom.
me:... Hey Pinkie, change in plans. We're sending the dog into deep space. I want to give it a close up view of a sun turning into a black hole
Pinkie: It will take a bit longer but I should have it done in a chapter or two.
me: Good now it you'll excuse me I got to find some jumper cables and a car battery.
Maybe that isn't Rarity.
Still hoping at the end of this fic we have a decapacitated Rairty's head in Spike's arms with him wearing a scowl-smile (Kratos from God of War) of utter badassness
I... Don't know where this story is going anymore...
Poor Flitter.
Rarity better be happy that Semper Pie ain't in her neck of the woods. That would be a very bad day for her indeed.
Man. I thought the dark hole in the ground was the mirror pool and Rarity was going there to make a duplicate of herself to get captured by the guards. That would be a smart idea. Of course, she has no clue the others are on to her yet. Maybe once she does she can use the mirror pool to get her duplicate captured instead of herself? This is what I love about MLP. There are just soooo many possibilities, it's endless!
I can't wait for the reactions from and after hearing what did
The past 12 chapters have been nothing but Flitter abuse! What did she ever do to anyone?! She had like two lines in one whole episode
I've lost hope... at this point I wouldn't be surprised if Rarity managed to escape justice somehow.
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Rarity just signed the Diamond dogs Execution order, at least once Spike finds out where Flitter is.
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My thoughts exactly...
PLEASE DEAR GOD RESCUE THAT POOR PONY AND KILL THE BITCH!!!! MY HEART IS ON EDGE HERE!!!!
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Hell yes brother! But I think that should be altered... Instead of "Moon" It should be "Sun" She deserves to die a long, painful death!
I really want to see the conclusion now. Stop teasing us!
I swear to God this story is blacker than any black hole in the universe! Rarity gives THEM a fuck toy in exchange for gems and the rest of the Mane 6 act as if nothing is wrong with her and she's the fu*king victim here! I hope Spike and Cloudchaser beat the fu*k out of herand then let Celestia and Luna send her rotten corpse to the center of the fu*king sun no matter what Twilight's friends say!!!
God damn it! Please end the abuse of Flitter and give her the justice she deserves!
cannot wait for flitter to have her virginity taken away by a filthy diamond dog
Well... that was even better than I had hoped this late in the game. Flitter, that fucking moron, gets ruined in an interspecies gangrape, and as soon as Hagity gets back to town, her game is over, too. This is just deliciously dark... Now all it needs is for Cloudchaser to have some "alone time" with Rarity before anyone else finds her...
God I literally have to stop at certain points to recollect myself before I just break down. I have never read any fanfic that made me do that.
Rarity is too far gone.
We all know just how stupid those dogs are. All Flitter got to do is whine.
Rrrraaaaarrrriittyyyyyyyyy!! dude! You are doing a REALLY good job of making her a villain in this story...I hate her so much right now that...that...
What the hell is that red spot on the screen?
Oh sorry, it was just the murder in my eyes
Okay, now I'm wondering if Rarity will get away with this...please don't let that happen...
Goodness, I hope Flitter will somehow still stay pure...and not have her virginity taken away...please?
Woo boy. Okay, the rest of Twilight's friends? Congratulations, they just basically declared their intent to aid a wanted criminal. So now Luna/Celestia/Twilight can order those four detained. And RD is lecturing Twilight about oyalty? How about their loyalty as protectors of their fellow ponies? Where's the loyalty to Spike, who's marefriend was sexually abused and foalnapped? How about loyalty to their damn princesses?
Fuck that bitch! I WANNA GUT THAT COW AND MAKE HER BLEED SLOWLY TO DEATH! THEN GIVE HER A BLOOD TRANS, BRING HER BACK TO LIFE AND DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN!......... Sorry was that over reacting?
Wow, did they really just ignore everything they just heard about Rarity's acts?
I know that it is important to stick by friends but really come on!
That is not loyalty that is that is mother bucking ignorance!
Plus how in sam hill does Rarity think that this can still end in her favor, she has left evidence trail so big that she can use it as a path straight to the moon when this is over!
I'm guessing no one still knows the full extent as to why Rarity drugged the two and then kidnapped Flitter, going by the reactions of everyone. Going to be interesting to see what they will make of what she's done.
As much as Rarity has to pay for her crimes, Applejack has a great point. What happened to innocent until proven guilty? (Oh wait, she's already guilty )
Well anyway, I have to side with Applejack on one point. Sure, it's pretty much a foregone conclusion, but there should still be a significant attempt to actually get in touch w/Rarity. At some point, she has to come clean to everyone: The other elements, Spike, and Cloudchaser.
She has to admit that she led Spike on all this time with teasing him and ironically made him friendzone her once Spike started going steady with Flitter. Remember that Spike may be a baby dragon, but he's still a dragon. But in a sickingly believable way, I could see Spike actually forgive her for everything she's done. Yeah, despite the fact that he has a marefriend now, his crush for Rarity is still going to be strong.
She also has to admit to her best friends that she allowed her jealousy in a completely "What the Hell, Hero?!" manner to explicitly try to break up Spike and Flitter just so that Spike will just be a good friend to her and only her. Obviously Twilight in this story is too caught up in the banishment of Rarity w/o even finding out why she's being banned, or breaking the Elements, and that her friends haven't been told why. I can understand how they feel. Would it kill them for the Princesses to let the others know what Rarity did? At that point I think they would help.
Finally, she has to admit to Cloudchaser that because she was so envious of Flitter when Spike began going steady with her, she started plotting and using her jealousy and greed to force Flitter into psychological harm as well as physical. From the way Cloud acted in the last few chapters, I think that she would literally kill Rarity if she found her. And that's completely justified, but then I could see the Princesses actually jail Cloudchaser for it (I know, it doesn't make sense except that Cloudchaser would break the law by assaulting Rarity like that).
Of course, once Rarity does confess, then IT'S MOON TIME!!!
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This the Kanji for death, as in death to Raribitch!
3032223 I certainly hope so :S I just find Twilight's lack of faith in her friend to be really disconcerting. I mean, we the readers obviously know that Rarity is actually guilty, but Twilight and the others have no idea what really happened, and have been presented no solid evidence thus far, so when she's the only one not to give Rarity the benefit of the doubt just because the Princesses said she was guilty it really grates on my nerves.
Yes, I know, I'm focusing on Twilight's friendship issues instead of Flitter who's once again about to be raped, but it's sorta becoming the norm with her now