When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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The diamond prison reminds me of the phatom zone
Well, a cruel punishment to a cruel pony, even worse than death actually, so I couldn't be happier!
The ride is over, I can finally get off
Also, that other ending is highly, very cop-out, not to mention cliche as fuck (it only needed the doctor to be "perfect"), so I'm disregarding it as fanfiction within fanfiction.
Just wondering but why didn't spike know? Also how can she tell that everyone is happy if she can't use any of her sense? Not to be a dick just thought I should point them out.
I will admit that it is creative and a pretty nice punishment. Though I'm on the fence of whether or not erasing everyone's memories of her is a good thing or not. Oh well. On to the next chapter.
Yes! Fuck you Rarity! FUCK YOU!!!
Celestia has some bucked up idea's for punishment. Serious! I think I would have asked for death.
Oh well! On to the next chapter.
Apart from the whole punishment, I'm more worried about how are the Princesses going to memory blast everyone? Like a massive reverse Spirit Bomb? Scary...
So...Equestria confirmed for Orwellvian state with a tyrannical leader who not only passes summery punishments without trial, but also mindrapes her other co-leaders.
That's more [Grimdark] then the and I must scream punishment. Great punishment by the way, Celestia. Because Rarity definitely won't be driven hopelessly insane and become an omnicidal maniac after fifty years of immobility.
Wow....well it had to be done, Rarity had to answer for her crimes and I think this is a just punishment.
Suffer Rarity.
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3153818 I know right.
3153861 It's like the Saw movies. Being locked away somewhere forever.
3153865 Hell yeah!
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3154361 It had to be done.
Woah, that's even more awesome than sending her to the moon.
I APPROVE OF THIS
Okay... fifty years later... Nightmare Rarity.
Yes!! A fitting punishment! This is a very nice serving of justice
I like this idea of punishment for Rarity, seems fitting. At least justice has been served and I can rest easy knowing Spike and Flitter are happy together and Rarity will suffer!
Although, this does raise a question, since their memories of Rarity are gone, who will become the new Element of Generosity? I vote for Flitter, I think she's a perfect candidate! Anypony else agree with me?
Very nice story overall with an ending I can live with! (Yay!)
Wow. I wasn't expecting that punishment. If I were Rarity, I probably would have just asked for death. Then again, death would have been the easy way out, and I can't argue against this punishment. The only thing I might have a problem with is the memory-erase thing, since it's not giving the people who are getting mind-wiped the opportunity to move on from Rarity by themselves.
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Not gonna happen, the minute she starts to show symptoms of Nightmare Rarity, Celestia will give Rarity the needle or a one-way trip to the sun and be done with it. And nopony else would know.
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If that happened, I think that Spike would be the new Element of Generosity, and it would be even more approps since he earned it from successfully quelling his on instinctual draconic nature to be greedy by giving generously (the fire ruby and helping everypony out are good examples)
And now for my own somewhat original comment: The punishment is quite fitting for Rarity--sending to prison, but not just any prison--a prison of diamonds! How ironic, her one most precious items (other than Spike's affection) were her jewels, only for her to be imprisoned in a gigantic one. And I do enjoy the fact that Rarity is forced to have to view and see everything that will happen to Equestria during the 50 years she will magically vanish, and that there is nothing she can do without it. I wonder: let's say she is by a one trillion in a chance way that she is released from her prison sentence and she's still the same as far as looks and all, how would that work? How would she live? Would she make friends? What about special someponies? What if by a cruel twist of fate, Rarity actually gets a crush on a dragon, or even better a kirin? And then to twist the knife more, that dragon or kirin is a descendent of Spike and Flitter??
That actually gives me a idea for a story......hmmmm.....but then again....
I was waiting for this chapter since the beginning. The anticipation welling inside me when I saw my favorite's had 2 new chapters of this fiction. But now that I'm finally here...there's only one thing to say. I'm sorry too, Rarity.
P.S HELL YEAH! ENJOY YOU'RE 50 YEARS OF USELESS HORSE CRAP! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Yes, I like this ending.
It's over, it's finally over...
I've been waiting for this. Can't wait to read.
Edit: Wow. Reading next chapter anyways.
I approve of her punishment.
But that's the way, it had to be.
They locked her up and threw away the key.
Well I can't take pity on mares of her kind, even though she now takes it in the behind.
[You win a cookie if you know what I'm referecing ]
If Rarity is imprisoned in the gem and the resident of Ponyville wouldn't remember her, wouldn't they notice a giant diamond with a pony in it ?
...
Well...
...damn.
I would of chosen a much more harsher punishment, where she is forced to be a Diamond Dog Slave. She is unable to use her magic, she is chained to the floor, and the Diamond Dogs take turns raping her for the next fifty years. I am one sick bastard.
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Lol but you forget.....
They are all dead or captured now.
Ah, a fitting punishment, to be forgotten by everyone.
EXECUTION! Tis the only way for her to serve her Just punishment! She has harmed Spike the Brave and Glorious, the RIGHTFULLY heir to EQUESTRIA! Or else she deals with Pinkamena Diane Pie...
Well ain't that a cruel punishment. Being incased in diamond for 50 years, fully conscious and aware of her surroundings. Death would probably be preferable. I'd say it's rather severe, but part of me believes she deserves it.
All of this could've been avoided if Rarity wasn't a cruel, heartless pony. But she let her jealously take over because of a prank she pulled on Spike, but now she's gonna spend 50 years and will be treated like she never existed
While I agree that Rarity had to be punished, I think that having everyone’s memory of her erased was going too far. But that’s just my opinion