When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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3020403
Step 1: Take your favorite pony and/or the most innocent one you can think of and cast her as the star.
Step 2: Make the reader fall in love with her. Hell, fall in love with her yourself.
Step 3: Utterly and completely destroy her. Torture her. Make her cry.
Step 4: Make her cry some more.
Step 5: Make it fappable.
3020488 Hot damn.
this is so fucked up but I cant stop reading it. I feel so sorry for flitter, I almost started crying. I hope rarity is hurled into the sun
FEELS EVERYWHERE
Rarity is probably gonna whore out Flitter no matter what she does anyway. I think the fact that Rarity's Element was not only cracked but it was black as well should have clued Twilight in on something. Does Rarity really think that after all this Spike will wanna be with her? That ship sailed when she just used his crush on her for free labor.
3020474Hello Rarity, please go to WWW (dot) fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/072/e/8/you_suck_logo_by_urbinator17-d4sld2j.png
(dot) COM. Meanwhile, we're gonna be watching from narwhaler.com/original/lz/x/wtf-face-mother-of-god-lzxg2m.jpg
Island. So...enjoy your trip.
Well. *cracks neck* I do believe it's time to put Rarity the Bitch to bed. Hurt her, destroy her. But never kill her. There's no way she deserves that mercy.
Eh...the whole Rarity being a whole whirlwind of horrible jealous terror is really just...well I wouldn't say getting old since that is the premise of the story, but it's just getting to the point where it's kind of meh... I all but skip it and read the rest, and for some reason I feel like either she won't get punished at all, or it won't be as satisfying as people are hoping. Hopefully I'm wrong. Wait a minute...Shouldn't Luna have been keeping track of their dreams? Surely the individuals at the center of all this should be having some dreams that tell her something isn't right. ESPECIALLY Rarity, or Thunderlane considering he probably is cursing Rarity for doing him in and is dreaming of getting revenge of some sort...
I hope Flitter kicks Rarity ' s ass.
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Knowing Twilight, she's going to examine the elements and see what brought about the change.
Determining whom caused it all.
3020474 How come princess Luna has'nt peered into the minds of Flitter, Spike , Rarity
and Thunderlane. It would be logical to root out the problem.
3020546
I hope rarity gets raped with rusty knives
As much as I love this story, I'm really surprise this doesn't get more dislikes.
were did I put that flaming chainsaw?
Spike better go DEATHWING on Rarity's ass when he wakes up and gets wing of this.
Getting bored of the story, the whole Rarity being jealous is being played out (love the extremity by the way, good job on pushing it!), but I'm sticking around to see Spike walk in, fuck shit up, and slap the taste out of Rarity's mouth. Please, don't keep this up; have Spike (or anyone, really) either catch Rarity in the act, or intervene in some way.
yes... Yes... Flitter's slowly being corrupted... Let the corruption begin...
3020474
Stop it, just stop it! Please!! I don't know if the pay off is going to be worth it anymore and I can't take reading this any longer!! Make it stop! I want to get off the ride!!
Only my morbid curiosity and my need to see justice be done here is what's kept me going but I can't go on! My jimmies have been rustled too much!
I am full of disgust, hatred, anger, desperation, and utterly nauseated by what I am reading here. The world you've created would benefit greatly by Rarity's nonexistence, I swear to all that is Holy that if you let the She-Devil-Psychotic-Bitch get away with this in anyway I'll- I-LL-.....
Don't even think to put that image in my Head!
Please!! If I have to go on just please make the pay off in the end worth it. If she is going to pay don't let it be all at once like a Disney villain falling to their death or any kind of sudden end at all.
If she dies, make it so that I feel as though the journey to get there was worth it and if is going to live then make sure whatever suffering she goes through is ten fold what she is doing to this Loli (And don't deny it, you're not fooling anyone by saying she's not, we all know how old she's really suppose to be and how you're representing her).
And don't make the victory Hollow, if you do just know that there will be someone out there who will utter dispise your existence to the day he dies. Shit like this you can't forget and stuff like this you can't forgive.
The up side Rarity will get caught and possibly sent to the moon.
The down side without Rarity, the Elements of Harmony would leave Equestria totally defenseless.
3020616
Did you read Ch 9: Unforgiveable?
3020627 yes I missed the part in this chapter where she finds the pics
Give me all the hate you want but TO THE MOON
Its nice that you keep updating this but this is turning into something repetitive and boring. Its just more and more of the same, and flitter is being stupid as hell. Author, do something to make this more interesting, and soon.
Well keep it going
This is a good story and all, but.... I think it's overstaying its welcome. The whole "I'm jealous so I'm gonna do something" thing is getting.... Not old, but repetitive. Please, do something else with this story, or I'm gonna have to stop reading....
Flitter is so naive, which is why it hurts me so much that Rarity does all this. She is young and innocent and Rarity just takes it all away and turns it something so sick and wrong.
Sadly though, I'm starting to fear that "The Great Chapter of Justice" won't do all this justice. You do plan on having that chapter right?
Because if not, I might as well spare myself further feelings of anger.
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+1
I think is enough of "morbid" chapters. This looks like an unnecessary extension of the story. I hope to see soon a real progress in the story (because is a great story) please.
bye bye!
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Flitter must have down syndrome, its the only logical conclusion:
>Hey, you don't want to have this pictures shown right?
>Well, put that horrible dress once again and follow me back to the rape-y club from last night
>Also if you scream I will show those pictures
>Also you will be raped as well
God dammit kid what the hell are you doing?
This is getting really dull. It's the exact same formula every chapter with Rarity just getting more extreme, like from a slap>fist>kick>club thing. The feelings of anger or disgust ended a few chapters ago and now all I'm feeling is "oh, it's this again." The emotions you primarily wanted to bring out are now just shoved to the side with the curiosity over everything not involving Flitter's torture being prevalent.
You might want to wrap it up soon. It's stretching on without any substance now.
Hehehe. ahh torture and black mail at it's best. but also my favorite is when the threat of black mail back fires and you end up completely compromised by the superior strategist in the social game. However flitter is too simple and not to mention unbearably stupid for constantly going back to rarity, she should have gon to luna at the first sign of Rarity being other than her element. And whats worse Twi is being blinded from the obvious.
3020617
Um technically the element of harmony can find another pony to bind with since rairty is more like the element of greed, and number of thing I can't type here.
I wonder if Luna's ability to interact with the dreams of others will come into play.
Sooo.... anyone else thinging of painful things that could happen to this Rarity? Cause after this one I think I can come up with a lot since this is the most mess up and evil B***** in existence in the pony universe (including an female version of pony villians).
I just lost all respect for rarity.
MOAR
Dude please I'm at the verge of tears!
I don't know how much more I can take I was already yelling in my mind NONONONO at "let's play dress up"!dude please just please....
...justice?
I just cant wait for this to backfire on her face!
I have a few words for this story, now that Rarity using Flitter is kinda getting old now...
Luna: (in Spike's head) Spike... WAKE THE FU*K UP DUDE!!!! FLITTER NEEDS YOU NOW!!!!
3020885
You and me both! I want Spike, Cloudchaser and the rest of the Mane 6 to see Rarity's atrocities so she pays for them dearly!
THESE KIND OF ACTS DON'T DESERVE THE MOON, TO THE SUN WITH YOU MARSHMELLOW!!
3020846
I have the perfect torture for her. Celestia would let her hover above the sun until she catches fire and she burns until she is a crispy brown. Perfect way to roast a marshmallow.
3020975 What you said and using Tia like that made me think of this
3020998
Nah I some how feel it's not painful enough. She need to go through both mental and physical torture to pay for the sick Sh** she's done. The kind that literally breaks you I mean look at what she doing.
3021002
Well put my friend!
Now let's wait for the perfect time and place where Rarity slips up or Flitter escapes. Guaranteed one or both will happen.
3021011
I know. Rarity needs to suffer for the rest of her life for pulling this unspeakable sh*t off to poor Flitter all over Spike?! Seriously, WTF?! Why can't she be happy for them? Maybe be dipped in acid? Salt in her wounds? You have any ideas?
3020975
Ya the only and I mean only! urge that I have right now that is stronger than seeing(reading? lol) that bitch face justice is my trigger finger.
3021035
Yeah, same here dude. Mine's itchy also, and she's in my sights. Just let me line up a good shot and let me get her at the right moment.
3021033
Well all I can accurately say is to describe a perfect torture for her would be to let her experience that everything that Flitter went through, but only be completely aware of it and not be able to stop it, and have her repeated the experience over and over. Only making her think that she's going to be saved only to crush her hopes by making her realize that no one is coming to save her but only to make her experience more painful.
Also to anyone else who's sees this in my defense I'm been holding in my opinion about rarity in the fic from the start plus you see what she is doing. Considering what she done tell me you don't feel the same way.
P.s. I've strangely never writing a gore story or any story on the site. So if you write stories this could make for nice addition to a gore one.
3021063
Ah, perfect idea my friend. You and I think alike. How about she's in Flitter's position now and Spike and Flitter walk her around with that outfit on, plus a large dildo in her ass to make it all the more painful for Rarity. So she'd be their 'pet.' And they do this for maybe a few months continuously until Rarity finally cracks like what she is doing to Flitter now.