When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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I was actually hoping for Spike to get killed here, that way Rarity would have to suffer losing what she wanted so much.
Ether way very entertaining...
I await more.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
*sigh* At least he killed those sick bastards.
Let me guess, even after the rest of the Mane 6 find out what Rarity did they'll still side with her and say she's innocent?
Wow, holy shit, Spike. Real rage.
You better have spike beat the shit out of rarity in the next one. She must pay. Seeing as you stated dragon rage and the loss of a treasure, rarity lead to the loss of his treasure.
Yes let the rage flow through you spike, let it become your weapon destroy those who have wronged you.
>Dragon Rage
EYY, JUST LIKE IN MY OWN STORY!
This is what happens when you fuck with a dragon. And now that there's proof, an actual witness, to Rarity's actions, she'd probably better hope Spike doesn't see her, and it's time for the girls to get a reality check.
Thus it begins. While part of me is disappointed that I wasn't able to see Spike as he did all of that, I think that perhaps it's better this way. We see only the results, and thus our minds are free to imagine just how long and how horrible it was for the dogs. And sometimes, it's more effective that way, as is the case here.
I do hope the other four members of the Mane Six wake the fuck up now.
Did Spike just... mutilate the Diamond Dogs?
If you are going to hell for this chapter, I don't want to know were you will go for the rest.
You couldn't have had spike save her just before they did that? Come on man!
Well, I am happy that they got Flitter out, but... a bit too late. But for Spike it was BEAST MODE ACTIVATE! *BOOP!* Way to go Spike on that one!
Rarity must slowly suffer and DIE because of that atrocity the DDs did to her!
Aww, man, this is getting so awesome
C'mon, one on one standoff between Spike and Rarity, c'mon, C'MON!!
Justice is served! Good job Spike now all there is left is to stop Rarity!
FLITTER!!!!!!!
But on the plus side, KILL EVERYTHING SPIKE!!!
Wow, the Author of this story is correct! He is going to hell!
if spike gets in trouble for this... he better murder everypony.
A rapist getting his dick cut off and shoved in his own mouth. Justice served at last! and to top it off 3 rapists at once.
Mision 1 Accomplished: Destroy the Diamond Dogs.
Mision 2 Accomplished: Rescue Flitter.
Mision 3 Pending: DESTROY RARITY
3044669 Me too.
3044685 More than likely.
The very second Flitter regains consciousness and tells them what Rarity did to her,
they will be singing a different tune. Not to mention the testimony from the captured Diamond dogs.
3044689 It's something at least.
3044973 I'll gladly aid him.
3044943 Best way to dispose of a rapist.
3044837 More like the Incredible Hulk.
To be fair the diamond dog Still didn't cum inside Flitter so Spike can still have that first time. anyway Hell would require that Flitter died as well and that rarity Got away.
3044973 I highly doubt spike will get in trouble for this.
Now that the Diamond Dogs have been taken care of, time to find Rarity. Now, hopefully, she can answer for her crimes.
me after reading this chapter.
poor Flitter.
3045100 trust me dude, there are a lot of spike fics where he ate meat and they kicked him out of equestria, so If a baby dragon can get so mad, he murders a large majority of diamond dogs; what do you think will happen if he went Godzilla and was mad? the ponies would see spike as a threat.
If this was rape, then Spike has every right to kill everything that has stolen something from him. I hope rarity dies for what she has done to Spike and Flitter.
Wait, ponies have magic! Can't Twilight just repair the damage the Diamond Dogs did to Flitter, giving Spike his treasure back? I mean, this is Equestria. I would like this to have a nice ending and have this occur.
While I'm sad we didn't get to see Spikezilla I'm happy that he and Flitter are back together again. Now all that's left is to deal with an evil bitch and one way trip to the sun.
3045194 Dude, it's virginity. Once you've had sex for the first time then it's gone forever. Rebuilding a hymen (if possible) won't be able to turn back time. Ido agree however that Rarity should be forced into excruciating agony for what she's done.
Kay.
Her virginity is lost, at least the alpha didn't finish at least. The only thing left is rarity to face justice.
3045166 He went Godzilla on ponyville and yet they haven't kicked him out. I doubt it. Only time will tell though.
And thus all my hopes are lost....thanks for making my day....
Oh, and love the gore part, Rarity should have that as well...only more gruesome and painful...
I get the strange feeling that Rarity is going to go out with a *BANG* rather than being captured. I don't know why, or how, but I just feel like she'd rather die than face the humiliation of being imprisoned and eventually launched to the moon in isolation.
She probably won't, but still, food for thought.
On a side note, how is poor Sweetie Belle dealing with this raging shitstorm?
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Funny I had said something similar a couple chapters ago. My immdiate thought went to anal and that author was messing with us but it does appear it was her actual virginity.
The story ended up in a middle ground between the extremes which I hadn't considered. I guess the rest of the story is a trial for Rarity, a makeup with Cloud and Twilight's friends, and finally a hard but emotional closure with Flitter.
What a hell of a way for Twilight to learn the truth!!! Over the course of roughly 24 hours:
# She realizes that Rarity is the reason that the Elements are disabled, and because of how it was accomplished, Rarity has to be banished
# She has to not only witness RD and Cloudchaser almost fight to the bitter end, but has to watch them both get arrested and jailed
# She has discovered what happened to Flitter--sold to the Diamond Dogs
# In that same vein, she discovers that Flitter was brutally raped by said Diamond Dogs, but Spike got to Flitter before Twilight did
# Finally, she learns indirectly from gruesome observation and from Princess Luna that Spike is responsible for Flitter's rescue (the death of at least a dozen of Diamond dogs, including the alphas), but that rescue was at a very heavy price--Flitter's virginity. Also that she has to understand that Spike is at his basest, a dragon--a very dangerous creature if provoked.
There is going to be so much for the Princess of Magic to comprehend---her friends basically turning on her, her assistant/little brother probably going to be banished because of knowing his hidden Dragon Rage, Flitter's well-being, Cloudchaser's incarceration (fuck Rainbow Dash, she can stay locked up ), and the biggest one, capturing Rarity and bringing her to justice.
I expect a tear-jerker of parting speech from Rarity to Twilight before Celestia and Luna administer their punishment (whether it is banishment to the moon, petrification, or something similar). And then that part will be over.
But in another sense, that will not be over. Spike and Flitter are going to have those memories for the rest of their lives, potentially scarred beyond repair. And what if one of the dogs did succeed in impregnating Flitter? Abortion, if possible, would be obvious--but what if that brutal rape irreveparbly damaged Flitter's baby factory so that she could not have foals at all, even thought she never even had relations before then? The emotional trauma could cause her to consider suicide.
Man, it's going to be a dark time, like pre-dawn dark.
I hope Spike AND Flitter will be the ones to punish Rarity...or maybe just Spike....either way I want Rarity to suffer....
I am hating so much right now...
Yep, the author note was correct. You are going to go to Tatarus.
I SENTECE RARITY TO DEATH BY INTERSTATE
I'd like to make a pokemon joke about Dragon Rage but dammit its all too sad.
its a great story, beautiful and sad at the same time.
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You are right on the virginity front. But we have to remember that this is Equestria we are talking about here. I'm pretty sure that there is gonna be a bit of a magical "virginity restore" spell by either Twilight or one of the unicorn doctors use on Flitter, and that afterwards Princess Luna would probably blank that memory from both Spike and Flitter as a way to help the two of them recover. But I feel that even with all that potentially happening, there is still going to be some semblance of that memory deep down. It's like formatting a hard drive: even if you completely erase everything, there is still going to be a image in there that cannot be wiped.
They had that coming, and I'm glad it done.
But the cost was too great.
Well Rarity is next. Fuck banishment! RIP THAT BITCH THROAT OUT!
Save them 1000 years of waiting.
almost made me want to go
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Rooting for this as well. She's been riding the crazy train long enough that a pity ending would be a bit of a let down.
why you do that...
Will you please tell me how much longer you plan to make this story?
... Or make him walk in on Flitter being violated right in front of him, again, and then have him fly into an unstoppable blood rage... Forgive me for ever doubting you, Master Camel.
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In gruesome detail please.
Come to think of it, had Spike snapped on Thunderlane like this, this story would have taken a totally different turn. But then I wouldn't have had the chance to realize how useless Flitter really is, so I guess it's better this way...