When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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FIRST and good chapter
well... Rarity is fucked
OOOOOOO DAMN RARITY YOU GONNA GET IT NOW BITCH MMMMMMMMMMM THAT SWEET TASTE OF JUSTICE IS SO CLOSE!
This is getting pretty interesting.
I know that this isn't gonna end well, but I want it to. And I also hope Rarity gets caught. That bitch really needs to pay.
Ahhh she breaking all the points of friendship one by one.
This is awful. Not the writing or the storytelling, but the character you've chosen to create for Rarity is delicious and vile.
I LOVE IT.
rarity is so screwed
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Assuming the blood test is for some manner of truth spell, she may be planning some way to rig it that'll take Loyalty out next....
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Rarity, face it, you're screwed, now give up before you end the freakin' world you horrid, insufferable whorse.
Element of Kindess....destroyed...and the others don't have a single clue of what's going on. I just bet that Rainbow Dash's element if going to disappear from the experience Rarity went through.
Spike...hope you can figure this out buddy...because someone is going to die!
Rarity and Thunderlane both should be banished to Tartarus, right after been blasted with the friendship beam and tar-and-feathered
Okay, a question that's bugging me. I know Twilight has her hooves full and all, keeping an angry big sister from alternatively wanting to go kill a son-of-a-bitch and tearing down walls to see her sister, on top of the worry about what happened to Spike. But why didn't AJ show up first thing in the morning with the Element of Honesty in hand to show her what happened to it? I think that'd be a pretty big deal. I hope Fluttershy at least takes the Element of Kindness to Twi right away.
MARES BE CRAY CRAY!
This is why Rarity is my least favorite pony. So much for being 'generous'... She has caused much harm and nearly got Flitter and Spike killed! I hope she pays for her crimes, the truth will come out one way or another.
Other than that, nice chapter.
i hate this fic but its soood goood
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Well put my friend. The pic and your comment sum this story up pretty much so.
I can smell the justice! I can feel the justice! I can TASTE the Justice!!!!!
"Rarity felt the color drain from her face." Is that even possible?
Omg. Rarity, give it up. Tell the truth.
So now justice is going to be finally dealt to Rarity oh I can't wait!
Damn!!!!!!!!!!! that is all
Wow, Rarity... Hospitalizing two kids, then continuing on your sick quest.
Really good story, but I hate Rarity now.
Holy cow man, how the hell do you do this?!? You told us this wasn't planned, that this was supposed to be a short story, yet each passing chapter is enriching and making the story even MORE interesting!
Keep the great work you magnificent bastard, and lets see where you will take us.
Ohhh Flitter is still a virgin, you give me a great new today
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I honestly don't know. I thought it was still a short story until you posted this.
11 chapters.
WHEN DA FACK DID WE GET TO 11???
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uh... shit
See, this is why I love it when people comment. Helps me fix the holes I miss.
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But seriously Rarity! Your part of your plan hospitalize spike and flitter, just give up and tell the truth!
Edit:So the element's breaking when rarity going ungenerosity? Is that like your head canon or something? I don't know
tomorrow? really? I know you're building tension, but proper procedure would say that they need to do it immediately because some version of Rohypnol (roofie) pills get flushed from the body in less than 8 hours, especially in low enough quantities that doesn't put the mare to sleep...
but again, I know what you're doing, but I can't help but see it from the standpoint of reality
Well, Rarity... You've fucked up. Although really all you'd have to do is take a minuscule amount of hoofies a few hours before the test to show that you were 'drugged by him' too.
Since you've earned enough unbelievable bastard points already, I'm going to stop hating you and respect you as a villain, because it's gonna be a sweet ride up until you get busted. So good luck murdering that bitch that stole your man... stallion... dragon... whatever.
In other news, Rarity is on an Element breaking streak by demonstrating the polar opposites of their attributes. I have only one thing to say to this: "Good luck breaking the Element of Magic, you stupid bitch." >:D
I hope Rarity feels bad,not only did she drug Spike and Flitter out of her jealousy,but because of that,Flitter and Cloud is now crying a river,Spike is in the hospital,AND she still going after breaking them apart.
Thank god this is a fanfic. I have never felt so ANGRY at a character before.
If Rarity finds someway to cheat that blood test, I will eat my socks.
Justice is coming Rarity....there is no escape.
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They're lazy?
No, I thought about using a realistic timeline, but the next chapter wouldn't work with a realistic one. Plus we can always just use the excuse of hoofies last longer in the bloodstream.
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Emotional manipulation at its best.
Totally logical. Come back to take a blood test AFTER it would have worked its way out of her system.
Can't wait for all of this to come back and brutally rape Rarity to death in her ass.
Oh FUU(burp)ck......
It's over. It's over. Rarity, you are totally FU(burp)cked on this one.
There is no possible way you can escape this one. Element of Generosity my as-(burp).
3003995 yeah, but the first thing I thought of when I heard they were giving her a day was that she could have enough time to get another pill and take just enough that it's in her system... then I though about how long the stuff stays in, and the longest I found is about 3-4 days at high doses
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Well, Spike and Flitter had a total of 4 crushed hoofies, so I would think that 4 of those pills would last in their bodies for a day or two. Plus they have magic.
So yeah... magic.
(not really.)
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Hahaha, this really has been a wild ride for everyone included
>I WANT TO GET OFF MR. THECAMEL' WILD RIDE!
>IT NEVER ENDS
3004112 I know that (and that amount could've been lethal to them) but I was talking about Rarity, they don't know how much of the drug could've been in her (Rarity) and since they're giving her time until the test to find out if she has any in her, she could get more and put some in herself (Rarity) to 'pass' the test (and wave suspicion) but I digress, keep up the good work
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But what other ride has griffons raping RD, Rarity completely losing it and plotting to drug other ponies, and RD and Daring Do lezzing out?
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Smart guy/gal...
3004151 I'm a guy
and that was just my thoughts while reading from:
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I.... don't know, I just want to get off
But seriously though this is awesome, in a dark, kinda wrong way but still awesome, I will be waiting excitedly for more!
3003276 the drug test is for seeing the roofies in rarity's body; if there are no drugs, the guards would wonder why thunderlane would drug two out of three people.
Wonder how much Rarity'll be screwed when the next chapter comes out...
let's see how she gets herself out of this one
This is......insane