When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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I'm interested. Here's a thumbs up. I am worried for Rarity's sanity and if she's gonna do any physical or emotional harm to Flitter. Not to mention how Spike is gonna deal with this.
This is certainly going to be an interesting story. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of this as it is written. Keep it up!
should be interesting, i did find it a bit quick or slightly rushed, but i like how you choose an uncommon character for spikes love interest
As long Spike is happy at the end I really don't care, after what Rarity did to Spike I really don't care what happens to her. Karma is almost as much of a bitch as you huh Rarity.
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For multi-part stories I tend to have short 1st chapters, mostly to test the waters and see how receptive people are to it.
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2959856 Thank you, thank you, I'll be here all week.
Another story!? Someone's on a roll lately. Great start so far, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
hmm,interesting story so far...I really hope you continue writing soon! The first chapter was great!
My only gripe? Why is Rarity knocking on the doors of a public library.
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Because... um.... look, a wild mustache appears!
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It's going to be the piece I work on while at work. Normally I type up a story on Word and then C+P it onto here, but I figured I'd give typing up something on this website a try.
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Good stuff. Like I said, can;t wait for more. I enjoy your projects, even if some are a bit twisted.
Wow, liking it so far, I shall fave
AAAAAAAnd the shitstorm has only begun i really love this story so far
2962568 That name does not got with that picture bro.
Aren't Flitter and Cloudchaser twin sisters?
2964026 shhh
2959702 Personally, I would kill to get into a situation like that
"...and then he went running out the door! Haha! It was the cutest little run, the poor thing almost tripped over his own... ahem, well, you know." Rarity said, giggling like a school-filly.
Wow, Rarity. Just...wow.
For some reason this fic makes me think Rarity lost it far before Spike got a date.
That Subtle part at the end about seperating the two rolls of colors with a white one was so eyebrow raising for me! And Rarity! What the hell girl! Poor Well endowed Spike! making him run outside crying with His Hidden Dragon Flip floping everywhere! Think about the children!
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I'm sure it was eyebrow raising for you........as well as other things
and +1 for the subtlety.
cloudchaser.....I heard that name before....
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great start mate cant wait to continue reading the rest of this story.
also I strongly dislike Sparity just because I've seen so many stories of that ship that it has gotten to the point of being unoriginal and besides Rarity doesn't get Spike any respect at all.
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Come here, Flitter. I have something to show you.
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Hmmm hmmm hmmm
Finally, someone taking their relationship in the direction I imagine. This is going to be good, I can tell.
How old is spike supposed to be? And is he still his small size or larger?
I like it...
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Jesus Christ, how horrifying......
Nope I didn't need sleep tonight at all.
I also didn't need to breathe either....
Awesome first chapter man
You get a thumbs up
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4617574 Yeah, regardless of how old he actually was, getting into a relationship with a grown mare would be awkward if he was still his "baby" size. It would be much more comfortable for all parties if he was bigger at that point, maybe with a pair of wings too, I imagine Pegasus would love those.
How long have Spike and Flitter known each other? A date out of the blue is a bit of a stretch.
Rarity's going to have to learn the hard way that Spike's found someone who takes his feelings seriously. She would've had a chance if she didn't play that prank on him, the poor little dragon.