When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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Well...shit.
rainbow dash is going to win hooves down o_o
enhanced strength
enhanced durability
black belt in karate
unrivaled speed
weather control
cloudchaser really doesnt know who shes bucking with does she....
ohhhhh shiiittttt
Rainbow!!!! You stupid bitch...
Damn it all Rainbow Dash.
Well, here we go... And Spike made it to the show, too, so the prospect of him bitin' it in the middle of this mess is still on the table.
Dont forget the sonic rainboom>>3038796
I cant wait till they find out the truth
yes...yes... Delay her delay her... let the dogs do the job good. Give them time to squirt all that stringy sperm filled pup batter into Flitter's young womb. Let her impregnation be complete.
3038906 The feeling is mutual.
Although I am keeping it bottled up.
*Currenty punching wall as hard as possible*
"Bottled up"
Oh, man, reading that dialogue at the end felt good
I knew Spike would find her first however, it seems like that Rarity's travelling down a water body of excrement without means of Propulsion
God damn it Rainbow! You're in denial about Rarity and protecting somepony who should die a very, very, very, (1,000,000 times later) very, very slow and painful death here! Let Cloudchaser beat the living FUCK out of Rarity! She doesn't deserve one nanogram of mercy!
Here are my thoughts on the story and what has happened now and has been dragging on now for, I think, too long. OH COME ON!!!!
Please Celestia and Luna, whatever you do, PLEASE LET RARITY DIE!!!!
Also, I've endured an ending I didn't like in another story of the author's, I don't want another bad one here!
Yeah Spike better help CC stop RD
3038880>>3038906... Well, both sides of the spectrum ladies and gentle-men!
I would ride CC here with a freakin lance and finish the job before RD collides with us...I can't wait for this horrible masterpiece to come to an end...very well done sir...very well done....
Anyway I'm predicting Dpike helps CC beat RD, Rarity tries to escape but is stopped by Twilight
Of course Rainbow would deny the claims made by Cloudchaser! Who wants to believe their friend is capable of these heinous actions? I'm sure this will end in such a way that its a lose-lose, to give it more impact.
Welp, the Flitterrrape continues non-stop as pointlessly as before, Rarity is still a horrendous character showing no remorse nor logic whatsoever, and now RD has been dragged into this clusterfuck for nothing but to delay the climax of the story further, to add more pointless drama, and above all, to keep raping Flitter relentlessly until either she dies or finally losses her virginity in the most horrible way possible.
TheCamel, you just reminded me of why I stopped reading dark fics a long time ago, and here I thought this was going to be different...
Well, she is the Element of Loyalty....
...
God damn it.
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I get the feeling the commotion from CC and RD will draw the attention of the Diamond Dogs.
Rover like the idiot his kind are known for, might bring up about 'deal' he and Rarity had made.
He is likely dig Rarity's grave an additional 6ft, saying something like :
" I see you brought additional sex slaves for Spot and Fido. How kind of you. "
This will cause Rainbow Dash and Spike to question, ' what kind of deal Rarity has made and why
the Diamond Dogs of all people? '
The second Rover says ' Pegasus ', Cloudchaser goes berserk.
WOULD SOMEPONY JUST BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF RARITY! I FUCKING HATE THAT CUNT NOW!
Gonna try to go a chapter without posting anything controversial, but to all the people saying RD is stupid for attacking her, I'm sure you'd probably do the same if someone went after one of your friends with the intent to kill them.
Ok while BLU Sniper is away sleeping I'm here laughing my ass off at this. Let me tell ya something, we may be killers of the highest degrees but we never resort to lying (except scout). We also have higher moral standards then most psychopath (except medic). We also never attack another for personal matters...........ok maybe except the bouts between scout and spy but that's besides the point.
DUMBASS! Dumbass, dumbass, dumbass, dumbass! How much of a dumbass are you?! In fact, if you look up "dumbass" in the dictionary, you'll find a picture of... fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/210/5/a/tommy_wiseau_shrug_by_verycoolguy-d423gxl.png
Well it should be you in there!
oh my god! if rover fully rapes flitter and gets her pregnant... I will go to build a bear workshop, make a rarity doll for a little girl, give it to her, see the joy in her eyes getting one of her favorite ponies... only for me to rip off it's head in front of her face! here mother come sup and yells "why did you do that to my daughter?!"
I'll shrug, "blame thecamel."
Like I said last time, if the dogs gonna take flitter's virginity, I'm gonna stop reading it, I know it sounds stupid, I'm sorry. To me, This Fic has a BIG focus in this, which is her virginity. I know if some of you and you camel don't agree, but still.
The feeling I'm getting while reading is like seeing Zero and X for the first time which in this case is Cloudchaser and Rainbow Dash but I'll let you guys figure out who's who.
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Oh, they finally find Raribitch, now we get to see RD & CloudChaser duke it out in the next Chapter! The others better find Flitter with the dogs!
I'm still waiting for greed growth Spike to destroy Rarity and the Diamond Dogs.
Just when I think I'm done with this story, you suck me back in!
#stopflitterabuse
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3039366 I'm with this. Instead of reading a dark tale, I just feel like I'm reading rape porn and that's it.
3039625
That will be AWESOME
I cant help but feel a bit glad that rainbow did what she did. Sure most of us want rarity to be punnished in the most inhumane way possible with out death, but i feel like even if all of this happened rainbow and rarity have been friends for a long time (dont really know how long). And im sure most people would rush to their friends aid knowing someone else wanted to hurt your best friend.(even if they went psyco bitch)
Also an absolutely amazing chapter and my favorite one so far. Keep up the great work
3039652 Alright! Let's get this smack down started!
On your left corner, made it into the Wonderbolts, and ready to protect her friend,
Rainbow Dash!
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And on your right, the very ticked off lady who would actually kill somebody in your own home,
Cloudchaser!
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FIGHT!!
BITCH FIGHT!!
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Now it's starting to drag. Kinda glad I skimmed this.
The title for this chapter is all wrong.
Please continue.
Yeah, the whole "Flitter being sexually violated" thing has dragged on waaaay too long.
3040312 never tried to break anyone psychologically to the point intimacy would no longer be capable for them have you.
study up on it,ole flitter is in a very real sense less than half broken. rares wants her fully broken so even if in the end she loses spike and flitter still would never have peace.
Rainbow needs a super bitch slap so her brain can be useful again...
*Sigh* I understand that Rainbow is the element of loyalty but come on. Now I wish Cloudchaser would take it to the extreme and stomp a mudhole in both Rarity and Rainbow Dash. Please show some brutality on Rarity's punishment.
3039625 Honestly, that sounds like something that would happen and NEEDS to happen. Make Spike go Godzilla on all their asses!
For a while I've been skimming each chapter hoping the final confrontation and payoff will occur. Unfortunately I'm skimming more out of boredom than anything else. I mean you can only "break the cutie" so long before the conflict starts to lose it's meaning :/
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BreakTheCutie
Are you almost done with this?
I gotta say this is technically dark but I can tell it won't go where it's been hinted at repeadetely. I would be very suprised if Flitter is actually penetrated by anyone but Spike. Once Thunderlane didn't get there I knew she was safe for the rest of the story. I would bet Spike saves her seconds from being used by the Diamond Dog. Doesn't feel as dark as other stories especially by the same author. If somekind of 360 happens and Spike is killed trying to save her and the Diamond Dog actually does get her......well I would do a slow applause and rave about this story.
Ya know, I don't understand why everyone is suddenly not liking this story. Keep up the good work TheCamel.