Bwahahahaha! Payback is a bitch huh Rarity?. I am loving this story bro.

awww man this is going to turn into a chick fight soon.

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noooo just from reading the description im worried something bad's gonna happen to flitter and i love ships involving her or cloud chaser

Oh yeah.....it's about to go down....

I haven't even read the first two chapters and I'm like, "....oh sh*t......here we go. Rarity finally reveals the purge within her."

Call Pinkamena Diane Pie, It's about to get insane.

I sense a cat fight. CAT FIGHT!? The plot thickens!

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Grahh! I can't decide if I should favorite this or not! I'm liking it so far, but the description if preventing my mouse from clicking without regrets!

Well....

Color me interested.

I say Rarity's mother was a changeling!

Rarity be crazy jealous yo. Just as long as she doesn't pull a Lorena Bobbitt than I'm fine with whatever happens.

Oh okay, you've earned a favourite, I wish to see where this goes, and how far Rarity's madness will go.
I just don't want anything to happen to Flitter.

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you sure?

cant wait for more chapters, keep it up friend.

Well, doesn't take a genius to figure out where this is going. I's weird, 'cause I like the premise, but given that it's already been revealed that Spike and Rarity aren't going to get together and given the Sad and Dark tags, I have a feeling this might go places I'm not too sure about wanting to follow.

I have a feeling this might be Rarity in this fic sooner or later.
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perfect characterization and set up for this story, particularly this chapter. This scene seems (to me) to show Rarity"s mind perfectly:

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Just say that this is Rarity's mind at work, the blue pill is Rarity accepting what is happening and everypony goes off happy, and the red one is Rarity not liking what she sees and resolves to do something about it

I think we all know what is going to happen next, the question is, does Rarity take the freeway or does she take surface streets. (If you don't know my analogy, I pity for you.)

This sounds like it could be one of those darker Vanilla stories. In any case, I'm IMMEDIATELY hooked! Well done!

i have to say i am now very interested in where this story is going. i request another within a reasonable amount of time sir

I am liking this fic I really am!
I really can't wait for the next chap.
But I don't think Rarity will go Pinkanema, maybe minor yandere.

Rarity,
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Hurt Flitter. Go on. I'll be waiting

Also, here's simple proof of how you never realize the value of something/someone until they're taken from you. Lesson learned, Rarity? xD

Well I have mixed feelings so far about the story. I think I've seen a story like this, and it was about fluttershy, big mac and cheerilee but it was a bit more gore filled at the get go.

I do like the characterization of rarity, the only real grip I have is Flitter just seem to be toss in there, I would like a POV of spike or flitter about details on how they got together other then.

"spike ran out had a boner ran into flitter and they just began to date" that how it came cross to me.

Wth that said, It's you story so tell it how you want too. I just think some more details on the Spike and flitter ordeal would be nice. If noting more then flavor text

Hmm. I'm all about letting people ship who they want, but this seems incredibly shallow of Rarity. Spike's had a massive crush on Rarity since he came to Ponyville, but now that he's found somepony different, NOW Rarity starts to have feelings for Spike? And not just feelings, the "murder the other girl"-type feelings. Then again, you have 98 likes to 6 dislikes, so this must be a well-written story regardless.

Shit
This is beautiful

I have to say, Flitter was an interesting choice to pair with Spike. I've never seen it before.

Ooooh how I love stories like this
Here's a like and fav, I'l be monitoring this closely

I'm going to go out on a limb here and say someone's gonna die.

Let's just hope it's Rarity

this is good and I think I heard a twig snap when Flitter's and Spike's lips touched and again when Flitter licked the "piece of strawberry" off his lips.

Keep bringing them want to see how you mentally change Rarity!

i love this,
i hate to admit but this is classic for some women, they tease the shit out of you but it is only when you finally start dating someone they show any interest at any -.-...

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Patience, young padawan...

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One of the reasons I chose her.

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Because while yes it is a public library it is also a pony's house, plus pony customs can be different than human customs so there is really no way to know what is polite and what is polite but not needed

Just so I know, this is a FlitterSpike story, right?

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Eh.... kinda?

There will be Flitter x Spike stuff, but mainly it will focus on Rarity.

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Yeah, I do understand that. Just wondering if it was going to start as Spike x Flitter and then change to Spike x Rarity or stay Spike x Flitter.

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Can't spoil anything now, can I?

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Nope, I was just going to add it to my group 'Obscure Shippings'.

Even though it is early on and to early to assume anything, I get a strong feeling of Rarity doing something to Flitter to get her out of the way or to Spike either one.

I'm pretty sure this shipping started after Flitter asked Spike what the anemometer does in the episode: Hurricane Fluttershy!
Also, Raribitch!

2962456 Not saying that this story is bad, but just because a story has a bunch of likes doesn't necessarily mean it's good or well written. It's more just the story is popular with the public than anything.

2963153 Well, that escalated quickly.

2963101 Is braeburn about to get raped?

2962566 My god. That picture. It is as adorable as multiple bronies picture. I can't even HNG because the adorable is lodged in my throat holes.

Why do I have the distinct feeling that things are going to look like this in the future?
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2962456 People do weird things for love. She probably just got used to Spike always being there with her, but I do not think this would happen in canon, but this isn't canon. It is supposed to be at least slightly closer to how people would react, hence the grinding and licking of heads of all shapes and sized.

2962137 I see that you've read this too.

2962324 mud.

2962096 I thought that was an orange with ears.

2962046 The twilight glitter?

2961823 Completely safe for Woona. Here, take this paper hat with bunny ears. It'll raise your adorableness by over . HNNNNNNNNNNNNG
Woona: I has teh powuws now. I wiw use dem fow EVIW!!!!
*Takes bunny ears off of hat*
Woona: Mistew! What happened?!
Me: I declare these ears; NSFW.

That is NFSW.