When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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And shit is about to go down
You either die a hero...
or live long enough to see yourself become the villain.
If Rarity's connection to her element is broken then, what will happen to the elements of harmony? Will a new element user be needed? If so, I suggest Sweetie Belle. Or even better, Derpy Hooves!
I thought the fire ruby broke at first, but it was her element! I hope no ancient villain pops out of nowhere or Equestria is fucked
For the upcoming days there is just one question: What is the Camel planning?
She has no one to blame but herself.
I don't think I can go on, too sad for me.
AWAAAAAYYYYY
The end of chapter 3 was a shocker! Let's hope she soon learns to except them as a couple, like how I've learned to except the new Cartoon Network show: Uncle Grandpa.
Wait, Element of Generosity cracked? GO FUCKING NUTS DISCORD!!!
It would probably be best if you concluded it at the best point possible soon. sall I can say otherwise this will drag out and loose reader interest. No drama.
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That...that quote was so powerful, I can feel it emanating through my computer screen. *sniff
2965395 Reminds me of the time my Best friend told me his theory about Batman being so good as a hero, that he could eventually, become equally as good as a villain!
Well shit, that can't be a good sign. Is it wrong for me to enjoy Rarity slowly losing it?
Rarity, sweetie, I think you need to see a therapist. In the meantime:
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What's DoaM? I wanna read it!
I liked that Flitter's story explains that it was Rarity's fault and she's too ignorant to admit that.
Also I kinda want to see Flitter go all Rambo on Rarity after sticking her with the pin.
"She drew first blood, not me."
2966454 I think DoaM is short for Diaries of a Madman by whatmustido. Pretty good fic in my opinion. Really long too like one of the longest stories on this site.
Awwwww amnA, I like these parts in a story...when they finally crack...(pun intended)
I am now imagining Raraity sneaking into cloudchaser's house with a large bag, and sneaking otu with flitter.
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Hm, thinking about it, the fire ruby breaking probably would have had a bigger impact of "Oh shit" on us readers. Ah love. Such a pure emotion.
Shame that purity doesn't automatically translate into something good.
Why didn't I see that coming? Well, I kinda did... Whatever.
2966691 it truly is a shame my friend.
I look forward to reading more chapters in the future.
You brought this on yourself. Now keep writing!
I wish to see more of this. It's caught my attention, as well as the attention of many others. Well-deserved attention, if you ask me.
Oh geez, I can't even imagine what Rarity is going to do next. All I know is that its going to be scandalous
Regardless I cannot wait to watch the drama unfold...
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OH MY CELESTIA! I was yelling at my screen telling her not to leave her sister alone in there with HER! Screw the food she's probably going to bust a silence of the lambs on this poor filly! And the EoH cracked? oh damn...
To quote Han Solo about future chapters, "I have a bad feeling about this..." I think he's right...
Though I am anxious to see what happens next. Love this series dude!
I think the Element of Generosity might end up having a new bearer.....another one that deals with purple.... and it's not Twilight.....
I was expecting a crack on the fire ruby--you know, a literal image of a heart breaking--but this is better and darker. Even more so than being all by Discord. So is this a permanent trip to the dark side, or is there hope that Rarity gets back to being.....well, her, again??
Edit: Take a look at Flitter's thoughts here, specifically the bold statement:
Boy, talk about a slap to the face!! If things start going more south than I think it could be, we are potentially going to see a pretty cool mare fight between Cloudchaser and Rarity! ..........what? you thought that Flitter is gonna fight somepony? I bet Cloudchaser is the type of sister that is a bit of a tomboy, meaning that she will kick you ass and then gloat about it......and I believe that if Flitter is hurt in any way, there is gonna be hell to pay.
I hope it doesn't turn into a gorefic. Jealous Rarity always seems to be a fan favorite for dismembering ponies in love with Spikey-Wikey.
Well I always did like yandere
I will watch out for this story
Who needs Discord to make Rarity selfish?
Seriously though, this is getting pretty damn tense, I love it
2965395 That's very deep... I may just have to use that...
and release the crazy
Rarity seems to have a fondness of throwing her objects at the closest wall :D
Great start, really enjoying it all.
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Rarity's crazy
Well that fixed my issue with the story so do go on
oh snap as in rarity has finally went cukocuko!!
2965719 I had recently saw that ad. And I had only reaction.. "What the hell is that?"
When Rarity snaps all I could think of were the MLP: FiM comics.
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Nightmare Rarity
2967488 Now that you mention it, this brings up a question - why is Rarity keeping her Element with her other jewelry in the first place? Safety measure after they couldn't get to the Elements in "A Canterlot Wedding"?
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ha couldnt handle your pictur4e
IT.IS.BEGIN.
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That is an excellent point! If anything, I thought that if the Elements were not in Canterlot, it would be in Ponyville, at Twilight and Spike's library. And that thanks to said unadorkable unicorn, they possibly have some sort of fail-safe to make sure that it couldn't be damaged.
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Last I recall, Celestia never got the Elements back after Fluttershy reformed Discord. Plus with Twilight now having her crown with her as a princess, I would think the others now keep their elements with them