When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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NNNNNNNNOOOOOOO!! I can never watch "Hurricane Fluttershy" the same way again!
NOOOOOOOOOOOo
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
...Rape?
Beautiful.
oh god, this made me physically sick to read... good job
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Yet another one turned.
Like Flitter, Spike is being violated by Rarity.
Please let someone appear out of nowhere and kill this asshole.
2990513 yeah, thanks a lot! I always knew that bastard was pretending to be sick, but now I know what that fucker was doing.
You do realize that a dragon's 'equipment' has two right?
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Funny, when I saw that part of the episode my first reaction to him is he's a lying, lazy a-hole. No one else really seemed to think so, but it's good to know that I'm not the only one out there.
Oh, did I just give away why he's my scapegoat? Whoops...
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This... this reaction is a little too perfect.
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Yeah, I've seen that idea used in a few stories. I've thought about implementing that into my stories but decided against it. There's not much of any practical reason for it that I can see (besides being able to double penetrate by themselves), but it's easier to write him with one.
Well when Spike does wake up. Raribitch and Thunderlane are dead. Because a pissed off dragon=REALLY BAD.
2990568 yes you did.
YES! A FIMFIC NETORARE!!!!
I am gonna kill thunderlane
This chapter felt kinda pointless. I came here for Rarity, not Thunderlane.
a very appropriate title I hope his torture is long and gruesome
NOOOOOOO! She a virgin! There will be a blood trail. Literally!
I'm hoping Spike finds out and kick his and Rarity's asses.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Thunderlane is not only scum, is retard scum:
-Making durable evidence of her crime.
-Raping the marefriend of a dragon who has once proven to turn kinda... unpleasant, given the right circunstances.
Thunderlane is so dead...
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Awww yes, time for some sweet /ss/.
OK.......jail is not enough for these two, even if one of them is a (former) Element of Harmony.........I see the Sad tag, it is well founded at this point, as Dark as it is, surprisingly I hope it doesn't need a Tragedy tag in the future.....that could possibly take me away from it.
Oh yeah, have to confirm: The way these ponies are described, especially w/clothes and panties, etc., I have to wonder--are they just ponies that just so happen to have dresses like at the GGG, or are they anthro, where they would have clothes all the time.
As horrible and terrifying as what is going to happen to Flitter, I have to imagine that Spike's apparent rape is gonna be twice as worse. I say again, I think somepony *******cough, Cloudchaser, Twilight, anypony please!!, cough********either accidentally or by sheer circumstance, save these two innocent creatures from their salatiously evil counterparts....
Can't wait for the end of this story where these characters get their comeuppance. On a different note - RARITY AND THUNDERLANE HAD BETTER PAY FOR WHAT THEY'RE PULLING.
She's a virgin!? DUDE, STOP THIS NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How much money do I have to pay to have Flitter not raped!
Please!
This is just so sad
Great writing and such, but man... man....
Spike, you better wake up and do something. Or someone has to walk in and see this happening.
All of my want.
MOAR.
To you who are complaining about the rape, did you realy expect anything else from the author of 'The fire in her eyes'? To be honest i sure didn't.
This is was what was going through my mind while reading.
SPIKE! BY SUNBUTT'S CAKE WAKE UP DAMN IT!
Can't wait for the next chap by the way.
Just so you know.... There is murder in my eyes.
yes..yes... Flitter's going to be ruined for sure. Just a large virile squirt and she'll be at risk carrying foals... Do it Thunderlane.... Make Flitter a mommy
If you didn't see this coming, what were you doing in the chapters leading up to this?
Thinking that all would be perfect, and that some happenstance things would save them? Normal people aren't that lucky
Like I said, This is just a Fanfic, BUUUUT!
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Ya got me.
Oh god, why did you have to write the rape scene?
Ya could've just left it to our imagination!
But nooooooo, instead I had to read that disturbing shit
The title got me hooked but...I did not expect that
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To those who aren't familiar with Camel's work: SURPRISE!!
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You know me so well.
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Um... surprise? And the best part is there's still room for plenty more rapey goodness.
*cocks shotgun**
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I you like an author enough to stalk them you should know their usual MO right?
WERE IN BLOODY HELL IS MY CHAIN SWORD I'M GONNA KILL THESE BICHES
Thunderlane, not only are you a rapist, but you're a dumbass as well. Does Lord Vader have to choke a bitch?
Damnit, is this one of those stories where rapist gets away with it? GOD, CELESTIA, and ARCEUS, DAMNIT!!!
I will now kill thunderlane first chance I get in both my stories as well as rarity.
Well, my opinion of Thunderlane has changed drastically. This might have an effect on PonyxSis...Nonetheless, I want Spike to rip his dick off and feed it to timberwolves. Okay that was a little harsh, I'll settle for a complete castration.
Well, my opinion of Thunderlane has changed drastically. This might have an effect on PonyxSis...Nonetheless, I want Spike to rip his dick off and feed it to timberwolves. Okay that was a little harsh, I'll settle for a complete castration.