When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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So clever, yet so evil.
you conniving mare...
Well.... I knew that would happen. I seriously hope Rarity gets what she deserves.
Now I'm gonna go read some other stuff while I wait for the next Chapter.
Diary. Rarity, you noob. Diary. Diary! Put it back! One of them will realise it's gone, followed by the wine. Put it back, and nopony will have to know! >:D
Rarity really needs to get caught and just mauled for what she put spike and flitter through although i felt a bit for her when spike completely friend zoned her ass.
PS great chapter i hate the cliffhanger even more
Bitch took Flitter's diary. Who dafuq does that? I mean come on.
I have an unnatural bond with this story....
Also, we can add breaking and entering and theft to the list of Rarity's sins.
It's fine, dude. I can't wait for the next chapter by the way. Sounds devious, yet so thrilling!
I hope thuderlane's swimmers got Flitter preggy...
Rarity is gonna get caught. Theres gonna be too much in her blood ttest. Those ponies are dumbshits. They had Rarity wait like 2 days before being tested?
My only problem, is that the guards wouldn't do this. They would immediately do a drug test after questioning her, to prevent her from forging the results.
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I'm sorry, I just like to reply that post with this Forum weapon!
I wonder if they use the Lie Dectector(If they have it on their world) on Rarity if they find her suspicious?
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Yep, took the words right out of my muzzle. Rarity's trying to show that Thunderlane is the sole suspect for drugging Spike and Flitter. I think that the guards might see something else when they sample Rarity's blood, and not just because of the amount. I'm gonna predict that they're gonna deduce that the time of ingestion is too short an interval for Rarity to be a victim of Thunderlane and allow 2 days (roughly) for the stuff to go through their bodies. Once again it's gonna be Wile E. Coyote and the Roadrunner, w/ Rarity as the coyote. And don't even get me started on breaking into Flitter and Cloudchaser's house just to get that wine as well as Flitter's diary.
When this is all over, I'm pretty sure that Rarity is gonna have this as a fashion accessory:
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Flitter's still a virgin, according to the doctor. That's thanks to them repairing the damage Thunderlane did to her while she was drugged. I don't think he was in there long enough to not only have sex with her, but to impregnate her.
At least, I certainly hope not. If he did impregnate Flitter though, I want him to be gelded......w/o any anesthetic or morphine
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'Nuff said.
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That right there is a character I'd love to see ponified.
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Uh the doctors said she Flitter was still a virgin meaning that the scenario you brought up it a highly unlikely one.
So I don't know if anyone already said this (I skipped all of the comments) but RARITY! You didn't have to drug yourself!
"Wait...why doesn't Rarity have any drugs in her system?"
Rarity: "Hmm...maybe...Thunderlane drugged the kids, and he knew I like Spike, so he knew I would take care of him and so both Spike and I would be out of the way! He would pretend to leave (when Rar told Spike that Fitter left) and then he could have his way with Flitter! And he's obviously a madpony, so I don't know if we can trust whatever he says..."
I'm sure there are a few gaps in my "If I were Rarity, this would be my escuse" escuse, but hey! Seems pretty solid for something I came up with off the top of my head.
3008689 This. Seriously, does standard practice not apply here? If this isn't rectified it will be very hard to read on. When common sense and logic are not applied to the law, what is the point in a justice system?
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Next chapter hopefully resolves your issue
She found a way to cheat the blood test....well played TheCamel
ugh, you will have to excuse me while I eat my socks...
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What, no tomato???
they will catch rarity because she is making too many mistakes,
i am surprised none of the mane 6 have come to twilight about the elements cracking.
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It would make am intresting character in the show
3010114 Hey it's magic. Do logic can go f itself
Can I submit an OC for the chief interrogator? I have one preped and waiting
Damnit, I was hoping she wouldn't have found the wine she gave to Flitter & then the narrator would show a flashback as to what happened! Something like Cloud Chaser drinking it & when she woke-up, she knew exactly what has happened!
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Dude... that right there is some dark shit... I like it.
Sadly, abortion is one topic I won't touch. At least, not right now. But I may have a similar conflict planned for later on...
In a formal police investigations they would have made the blood test the same night of the incident. For not talking on the doctors doing their job and asking rarity to have a few investigations just in case she was drugged too.
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They taste like feet!
All the elements are cracking, why haven't the others caught on?
I'm glad Flitter's okay. Poor Spike. Thunderlane is really gonna get his flank handed to him. Rarity's just as guilty for putting them both in danger with those hoofies.