When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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Rarity needs to calm her titties.
Well... Rarity is a bit of a slut
Rarity just got about 20% more jelly.
Ok, my prediction, this is not going well
AWESOME
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Eh. Maybe. I am pretty certain that is the way this is going to go next chapter.
Oh crap, bunny boiler, bunny boiler!! Someone stop this bitch before it's too late!
Well Rarity's losing it. And I get the feeling Spike's just going to piss her off even more now.
Getting Spike drunk? Really, Rarity? You do realize that it could easily make it harder for him to fall for you and probably will be pass out by the time you get back.
2971321 Yeah, I can totally see Cloudchaser and Flitter tag teaming and kicking Rarity's ass.
If I didn't know already that Rarity's just being jealous of Flitter, I would say that heat season has come in quite early for the fashionista, and we all know that if a mare is in heat, it's a 70-30 proposition if the male is gonna resist being seduced by said mare.....and that percentage decreases rapidly, especially if there is some way to skid the rails, so to speak.
At least Spike is somewhat immune to alcohol.....right? If Rarity's trying to get Spike drunk enough to have his way with her, she needs to use some sort of gemstone like quartz.
Jesus Christ, I'm dreading the next chapter, for lots of reasons, wink-wink. (Seriously, why isn't there a winking emoticon yet? )
2971544 there is
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Raven: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pUz2nK8ZOZo
2971560 That's a wink? I always thought that was just her smiling. WHAT THE FU-
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Raven: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K0QHw7iy1Rg
Dr. X: Well, I suppose it all goes down to say that whenever the greedy Rarity seeks something, she claims it as hers, one way or another.
Rarity you dumb slut. Don't know what you got until you lose it, and now you're a slut.
This is going down a weirder path than I thought it would.
Basically the theme song of this story
She's gone from desperate mode to masochist mode.
The story is very interesting so far, a little fast paced and kinda abrupt with Rarity's jealousy pretty much wrecking her character, but it still works and keeps you intrigued.
So yeah, that dark tag does have its place and its really the height of the story, I just hope it doesn't devolve into needless gore; now the sex warning, on the other hand, has had an interesting buildup, so far being the one aspect that doesn't seem rushed, so whatever happens to that, be full intercourse (consensual or not) or just more graphic teasing, I'm really looking forward to it,
It's really been a while since I last read a dark story, more so since I last finished one, so I hope this one manages to drag me back into that genre once again
I really do hope that rarity doesn't just seduce spike and then they have sex. I think it would be funnier and more entertaining if rarity kept trying and trying to get spikes attention yet he just stayed blunt through it all.
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I can say for sure that there will be no gore.
Oh, this can NOT end well. Or at least, not well for everybody...
Oh, well, fudge...this won't turn out well....haha, it would be hilarious if Flitter actually arrived when Rarity and Spike were doing...uhh, their business
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Awesome!
Now, one thing, back there you said in regards of how long the story could be: "A) I run out of ideas or B) as long as the readers want it to", as an advise, do not use either of those, time and again I have seen stories that due to lack of planing and/or pressure from the reader base devolve into a blended mess of inconsistencies, plot holes, characters disappearing or popping out of nowhere, or the worst offenders: either an OC becoming the main character suddenly and overshadowing everyone else (What Princesses Need), or the Doctor popping up to solve everything due to the author writing himself into a wall (The Golden Armor).
So yeah, I don't what to see another story burn itself to death, so please, plan and ending and work whatever number of chapters you what around it, that way the story can either keep its initial quality or improve with each passing chapter
That bitch be tripping HARD!
Spike may have to give her the back of his claw by the end of this.
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You lose, Rares.
Damn it Rainbow Dash! No wonder I've labeled you as the 2nd dumbest of the mane 6! You should've noticed by now that Rarity hates Flitter! Also, I'm predicting in the next chapter, that Flitter asks Twilight where Spike is & when she makes it to the boutique, some cliché will occur! RARIBITCH!!!
Let me put it this way: before, I was worried about her. Now, I'm terrified of her. I'll just start now while I'm ahead and bow:
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Spike is in deep trouble. I was expecting Rarity to lock him in her basement. The only one that knows that something is wrong is Flitter and she with a crack commando squad comprised of Donut Joe, Ted the Mule and Choppy the beaver foreman go to rescue Spike.
Months later while Rarity is in prison, Spike writes a book about his ordeal and it gets made into a made for TV movie.
You know, I would be very happy if a girl would go this far to have me, but Spike is way too young to have his mind broken like this!
He could barely hold his own against teenage dragons!
I sure hope Spike can escape the clutches of this Femme fatale Rarity!
I mean damn! Normally I'm all for this ship, but given the circumstances I hope to see homewrecker Rarity crash and burn (O_o)
The worst part is ...I can actually see this happening.
Rarity is the most emotionally unbalanced character in the show and her going insane over this seems......canon, almost
'Nough of that, loved the chapter, love the story and love how chapters are posted DAILY!!
She slipped Spike a roofie! He's Being raped RIGHT NOW!
for the 22nd time spike turn off ur swag before it gets u cover in more then just mares....
Words cannot express how happy I am that this fic is getting updated so fast but thank you.
On a second note not that I really give a fuck but where was the cat in all of this?
2973845 my guess, the cat bit the dust by a manniquinn (I hope I spelled that right). I am really starting to get worried for spike. He is just dating someone his age and is in a lovely, budding relationship and some crazy bitch who just uses him is now trying to destroy that relationship because she now has feelings for him. WHAT THE FUCK, RARITY?! I MISS MY EX AS WELL, BUT I AM NOT TRYING TO DESTROY HER RELATIONSHIP!
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BITCHEZ BE CRAYZAY!
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.... Oh S^%$
Damn, Rarity's jealous! I wonder if Spike's doing this on purpose...
On another note, I think Rarity would really like this song:
rarity is nuts,
she teased the fuck out of spike while never returning his affections but as soon as he gets a girl friend she goes full psycho...
rarity in this reminds me a alot of my ex.
yeesh.
faved
2971255 ok thats a little harsh
to the author i love this so far MOAR!!! please...
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Always glad to hear someone likes my
sometimesalways questionable work.Forgot to mention, this story will update a bit more frequently as I'm working on this one while at work. Or at least, I'll try to get it updated frequently.
2976049 i cant wait for the next chapter, i am falling in love with this story!!
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Same here. Which is bad... I still have another story that needs finishing. I'm working on it now, but holy hell I'm having trouble resisting the urge to say 'fuck it' and put it on hiatus while I go back to this.
2976063 i understand where your coming from... i have my newest story One last party: when laughter ends going, and i have another idea in my head right now. it sucks XD