When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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*Didnt read last chapters authors note causing his brain to explode....*
Its been one hell of a ride though, I'm a bit sad to see it end honestly.
Oh my god...
BEST ENDING EVER!
The theme song for this chapter:
3153793 I somewhat agree with you. In all honesty I'm not sure to be impressed with this ending or pissed off. Though as long as Spike still ends up with Flitter I'll be happy.
Now bring the tale of Big Macintosh!
Rofl! Ok Camel you get an assload of points for this. Hilarious way to alternate end it. Or actual end, depending on preferences.
That's a downright troll.
But I like it!!!!
What ev. I'll take he last chapter as the true ending to the fic. One I am happy with
Are you saying that this entire story was just really a scenario formulated by Discord?
You fucking evil, brilliant mastermind.
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You know what? I like this ending!
Not how I wanted I to end, but still called it right.
TROLLED THE FUCK OUT OF THIS!
Nice job!
slightly confused but i think i follwed
so basically that enitire story was one big "what if" by Discord to Celestia and none of it really happened?
my poor brain
Camel you evil genius
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Amazing parody of an amazing vid. Thank you for that.
... Oww my brain! Goddamn aneurysm from the sheer insanity of it all!!! I think I just had a mental breakdown... And no I dont know what to believe in anymore!*BANG*
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*hands Trixie 600 bits* I can't believe you called it.
Trixie: *Counts her newly made bits*
I happen to like this ending more than the other one.
That was the best story I've read in a long time.
kinda had feelin it was going to be a what if type of story but it was still one hell of a story
talk about a roller coaster. I couldn't pull myself away from it every time I was forced away I wanted to kill someone. not the ending I had thought on either account but still a really good story none the less. now if you will excuse me I must go and hit something.
All hail the God of Trolls!!!
Okay, I'll admit, not really what I wanted to happen, and I'm a little sad that Flitter's uselessness and suffering were just an illusion, but I suppose I can live with the butt-hurt all of you pulling for the "happily ever after" ending are radiating now...
3154147i agree all the way. I need to re plaster my wall now.
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Discord...
SpikexFlitter happy end, cool.
Now, Big Mac.Yeap.
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nahbutreally
that was kinda what i was hoping for, but by the 8th chapter rarity had me all fucked up i thought this was gonna be a simple drug'em and rape'em on rarity's part but then it got so real very quickly and needless to say i was pretty worried for the future of ponyville.
don'tjudgeme
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.........It was a good "story" and I liked it.......
Yay, it's finished
And it didn't even happen
You're lucky I started reading this near the end just so I could see how fucked up of a justice system Equestria had (and man, was it fucked up), because pulling the "it didn't really happen" ending would have caused a downvote to be liberally thrown at this thing and a nasty section of a blog post as well.
Don't do it again. I don't care if it was planned form the start. These types of endings waste my time as a reader because it resets the whole thing (thus leaving a bad taste in my mouth and reminding me of what I could have done with my time) and it wastes your time as a writer because it undermines the whole story.
Wait wait wait....so everything up this point was just one big what-if moment??? Well what a twist!
MOTHER FUCKER
To be honest that made for a better ending!
IM SO GLAD THIS FUCKING STORY IS OVER... I DONT KNOW HOW MUCH MORE OF RARITYS SHIT I COULD TAKE!
But at the same time im sad to see it finished..... it was a really good story! loved it all the way through with all the emotions you have put me through! you truly are a fantastic writer and I cannot wait for future stories!
Okay what is this? MADNESS?!
Okay let Asura off the moon?
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I'll be honest, I was kind of expecting this. Well, I was expecting it to be a dream Rarity played out in her subconscious, honestly, but pretty close.
The only part I don't like is that now Spike and Flitter won't get together without some other sort of nudge.
THEY WERE INSIDE THE MATRIX!
I'm not going to lie. I did like how "The Truth?" handled it and the Punishment not so much in all honestly. It was a bit much in my opinion and I would still like to have seen my suggestion for an ending seen. But I can't argue. It is your story after all. But making this one huge What if with Rarity snapping was clever. Now leaves one question. What does Celestia do about it?
So basically, Discord made the whole thing up and decided to see what would happen if Rarity would have gone made? I think I had an Inception moment here. What else will Discord think of?
Well, I'm not scarred from this ending compared to the other one, but still, interesting plot twist.
Awesome, just awesome...thank you! It was truly worth the wait
You... asshole (im joking) You tormented your readers for over a month! Just to pull of the simulator ending?! this made me so angry! I want to punch old ladies in the face! (again, im joking)
Aw. Spike and Flitter never get together now
Celestia damn you....
This is approps:
Okay, I'll admit the punishment was somewhat appropriate for the crime and the fact that they didn't want to kill her (Although no memory of Rarity would make a lot of folks wonder how Discord and Nightmare Moon got beat)
And...Really? You went with the (It was all a dream" ending? I mean, I know you said we wouldn't like the end, but I thought it would end up with Nightmare Rarity bursting out of the gem prison, killing Flitter, hypnotizing Spike and taking over the world.
But this?
Not only is it weak, but it means Thunderlane is still out there doing his sick crap.
WHAT THE FAK DID i JUST READ!
I liked the original better XD
I'll probably get a shit-tonne of hate for saying this, but I actually liked this ending. Yes, I've seen 'It was all a dream' or 'It never really happened' endings before, but I think this one is a little different, and that's why I like it.
How is it different? Well, I'm seeing a lot of comments saying, "So Discord just made it all up?" I don't think that's the case. Personally, I believe that precisely what happened would still have happened, had Discord not already seen such in an alternate reality/the future and warned Celestia.
Anyway, all that aside, roll on the Big Mac sequel :P
Huh, well, that sure was a thing that happened.
We need to go deeper.
I SEE WHAT YO U DID THERE !! its i like that it was all a dream makes me feel better
Great ending I really never expected it all to end like this it's pretty odd ending but I like it. Sad to see it end but bravo great story. even though it was all a bizarre discord story
Bu......wa.....whe......fuck it, I quit.
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But seriously, I liked both endings:
The first one because Raribitch got what she deserved
This one because it was the kind of ending that leaves everyone a little butt-hurt and you LYAO at said butt-hurt.
I know it. I know that no one in this story can be that stupid and because of that I now love this story. You are awesome.
OH MY GOSH I'M LAUGHING SO HARD RIGHT NOW!
And...uh...sequel maybe?
Welp. You win this round, author.