When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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Luna's on the case now, hopefully she'll expose Rarity and some how restore the Elements(if that's even possible).
Speaking of the Elements why haven't the others come to Twilight about their's cracking, I gotta believe Applejack, Fluttershy, and now Pinkie Pie wouldn't just brush it aside since they're the number defense for Equestria.
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All in good time... I have big plans for that...
oh my god! I hate rarity so fucking much right now! because of this fic, she is going to die a horrible death in mine: and that's a promise.
Damn it, I had a feeling that Pinkie's was next. Still, with what she just did I think Rarity just put herself one step closer to having all of her plans crash down around her. And when I say "crash down around her", I mean "lynch mob beating the ever-loving hell out of her". Friendship is magic, perhaps. But in this case, I'm waiting for the magic of sweet, sweet vengeance to kick in.
first queston what sentence are you talking about
i cant explain my fellings for this story thats how good it is but love to see how it ends
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Part of a sentence in one of the first 4 paragraphs.
But like I said, I'll assume that everyone's rage made them pass over it.
Poor Flitter, just because Rarity can't accept the fact that Spike is in love with another mare she is putting in shame Flitter.
Celestia.- Rarity, for your actions of drugging Spike, Flitter, dragging Thunderlane into this, and publically humiliating Flitter, you are stripped from the element of Generosity.
She's going to let her get raped again!?!?
3013991 LOL
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If at first you don't succeed, try, try again!
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3013989 im not really mad at the story of at her im very happy some ship Flitter with spike im just sad shes in this heartbroken state it kills me and whats her age because they can drink but she doesn't know munch about anything
Am I actually the only one who wants Rarity to succeed in all this? No, it's not because I'm a sadistic bastard (well, maybe a little), but because I think the majority of people here are expecting a good ending, or at least one that ends with justice.
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Well, she's not as young as the CMC but she's younger than the mane 6 and Cloudchaser. In our age, I would put here somewhere between 16-21... I mean 18, she's definitely of age. Well, you get the idea...
In short, she's a young adult. Old enough to be done school and have a job, but still young and naive enough to not know much about... certain things. Plus I may have envisioned her being sheltered by her sister while growing up.
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Promise me Camel, promise me one thing.
Revenge must be taken!
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Right as I'm happy they're fine, you make me hate you again.
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I can only promise that Flitter will NOT be a virgin when this story ends.
First Generosity, then Honesty, Kindness and now Laughter. I'm mostly guessing Loyalty will be next. And Rarity is trying again to get Flitter raped?
3014101 TheCamel is very good at doing that.
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You're too kind.
Is it also bad that after writing the first two chapters of this, Flitter is now my favorite?
Wow.... just wow... after all of that rarity still wants to destroy flitter? Dude, just make rarity suffer already, this is getting fucking ridiculous and painful to read, for serious, i might just stop reading this.
3014070 ok u understand over protective sister sooo do you way any background the parents or where you not thinking that far back
Spike is going to be in for a surprise when he wakes up and probably ends up bashing each other till dawn.
Wait a second in the previous chapter ( or the one before I dunno) it said about guards on every street or something so Flitter might be saved :D
Why?
That is all.
Well Rarity your evil action have ruined two lives so far, and thrown the element out of sync causing them to self destruct. You now fit the description for an element of chaos more specifically the element of Greed. (If anyone is wondering that something that I though up in an old rp a while ago involving the show.)
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where did you read that?
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It's like: "My element got a crack! I should go to Twilight about this, buuut, not right now, I'll just wait until all elements are crack for later chapters."
Something like that, IDK
3014277 Wait. That was a different fic I read...
:c
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I was gonna say, if I put that in somewhere my plans are screwed!
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Patience, young padawan...
Have none of them told twilight about the damn elements? I mean, I understand there's a lot going on, but when ancient items of power start breaking for no reason, you'd think that would be a situation where Celestia would put off her shit and show up!
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By the end of the story? That could either be good, or very, very bad
All I can say is, if this turns into a bad end, all I keep thinking is Flitter ends up being shamed to the point of suicide, leaving a note that Spike finds upon waking, pointing the hoof at Rarity and a number of stallions tricked into this, driving Spike into going into crazy monster mode, destroying everything and having to be put down, his last words being something very spiteful towards Rarity who spends the rest of her life either in prison or a run down sanitarium being used by guards and orderlies, constantly still blaming anyone but herself, before finally being buried in an unmarked grave, alone, unloved and unmissed...
...
Okay...I just went to...kind of a dark place there...I need some light put back in my heart, if anyone needs me, I'll be on YouTube watching the finale episode of Gurren Lagann and some happier comedy/pony vids...
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Yes master.
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Hold up. Let me MY toy!
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Please..............no more Flitter abuse........my soul is already 95% dead as is
I LOVE CAMEL.
1. Raribitch!
2. Now Pinkie gets to learn about the domino effect!
3. Raricuntnugget! (Yeah, I learned Cuntnugget from a friend in High school!)
4. Oh yeah, Luna suspects something!
5. How could she do that to Flitter?
6. If Rainbow Dash doesn't gather the girls when her element is on the fritz, then damn I hope Twilight does something about this!
7. GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!
i hope spike eventually gets to slap the shit out of rarity for what she put flitter through
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Well if that's the case, I hope that everypony else catches up to Rarity, she gets what she deserves (jail time for her at least), Spike lets Flitter know that he still loves her for her and not because of all the crazy shit Rarity's pulled over the last few weeks, and that in a sort of good ending Flitter gets comfortable w/ sex because she allows Spike to be her true first.
3014268 Wow, a week old and that joke is still going strong.
3014820 It's truly funny.
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Damn right it is.
Ok seriously what the fuck? No one is that fucking retarded, the moment Flitter felt the assbeans being inserted is the moment she had to say "fuck you Rarity, I'm going home", and even if that first one didn't do the trick, the other unlubed ones should have done it.
Seriously she was almost raped and she knows, but somehow let herself to be convinced that wearing a whore's dress and having shit put in her asshole was somehow for the best interest of her relationship? Nope man, that does not work, unless of course you reveal she sufferst from a debilitating brain condition.
Also you said Luna was to be the judge but then named Celestia once as the one.
Hahahaha, Rarity is going to get it bad..............well, it's her own fault.
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Yes!! Luna bring justice onto the crazy mare. I pray for Flitter and Spike to come out of this with few scars, emotional or physical.
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Love can make you do stupid things.
I'm guessing you meant this part. She means that the only other pony that she would trust to make a decision for such a crime, besides Luna, is Celestia
I honestly don't mind the exhibitionism for the moment (because of a few reasons, but that's not important right now) but I really want three things to happen:
1) the stallion not to rape her
2) rarity to get an ever worse punishment than I can imagine
3) Spike wakes up and reveals the truth that Rarity covered-up (which I'm almost 100% certain will happen by the end)