When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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...Rarity, you monster...to condemn a filly to such a fate...
Rarity...
Starting to get a little rapey near the end there, huh?
This fic is interesting. I'm getting excited about every update. Keep them coming :)
Oh ho ho. Master evil plan... although I fear two ponies will be serving for a lifetime shortly afterwards.
Poor Flitter...
Couple of things. First, this is one of the reasons i try to avoid "dark" tags. It's a good story and I love how you've implemented Flitter, but I'm enough of a pessimist and cynic already. Second, I know this has been added to Sparity group, but i hope it at most ends with a friend-shipping between Spike and Rarity (although even that would be stretching it at this point). Finally, I pray that something occurs to prevent what I anticipate Thunderlane will do to Flitter from happening. Terrifyingly awaiting the next chapter.
Rarity, you BITCH! I wanted some wine too!
I must agree, that alcohol must have been quite the treat. And she just gave it away! So generous. You evil conniving bitch I hope you burn in hellfire!
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No shit, right? I mean, she had more than enough to share with all of us.
this whilst far from the darkest thing ive read here is not only terrifying but fucking epic. roll on dear author, i await more horrifyingly awsome things.
rarity you mad bitch, how I love to hate you.
The things I will do to Rarity will make Cupcakes look like mother fucking Yo Gabba Gabba
I'm hoping at the very least that Thunderlane's 'plans' are thwarted and he gets what he deserves. The drug-rape of ambiguously-aged fillies is where I disembark this ride.
You bastard, I called it. I just hope Flitter's gonna be alright. Cloudchaser better figure out that something's wrong.
2987705 EXACTLY! Rarity! Get the fu** over here!
*slap* 'You don't- *slap* freakin'-
*slap* keep the wine all to yourself you greedy Bitch!
Rarity has completely gone off the deep end. Drugged both Spike and Flitter and she doesn't care one bit what the stallion who tried to drug and date rape her does to Flitter. Somehow I get the feeling this is all gonna be blamed on Spike.
It would be totally ironic and somewhat delicious if Spike had some kind of system failure because of the drug and all the alcohol he ingested.
Alright who here wants Spike to beat the shit out of Rarity and Thunderlane and blame it on drugs being meant for ponies and not dragons?
said it before and Im saying it again, not even my cousin can reach THAT level of BITCH!
Daaaaaaamn, I am not sure where this is going next, what exactly would Rarity's reason be for Spike to break it off with Flitter
Guess I'll just have to read on
Once again from one user's comment to Rarity
OH, also to Thunderlane.
Yeah, but at what price?
I am desperately hoping that due to Spike being a dragon he'll be able to come to quickly and show Thunderlane why you should never mess with a dragon's mare.
COME ON SPIKE PULL YOUR SHIT TOGETHER YOUR MARE NEEDS YOU!
I'm really enjoying this Flitter and Spike relationship, but Rarity has just gone mad! However, since I continue to return to this, and I am excited for the next chapter (and more to come) you have successfully peaked my interest. Good job sir.
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Technically she's an adult.
I think.
I dunno...
She's older than the CMC's at least.
Well, gee. If Rarity's generosity in giving Flitter to Thunderlane doesn't repair her element, I don't know what will.
I know Rarity isn't thinking things through, but the sheer number of ways this could go horribly, horribly wrong is kind of overwhelming. She'd better have a much better plan than she's shown so far. She can't exactly keep Spike stuck in her boutique forever, and Flitter is going to have a few questions of her own, assuming she survives whatever Thunderlane has in mind. Then, there's that everyone knows where Spike and Flitter were headed. Once Spike fails to return home, or Cloudchaser charges to the library wanting to beat Spike for abandoning Flitter(after getting some terrible excuse from Thunderlane about why he took Flitter home instead of Spike taking her home), Rarity will have some explaining to do.
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Maybe if Flitter gives her virginity to Thunderlane she'll become the new element of generosity.
I know it's been said to death, but it's one of the very few things that get me angry: rape
Plus, if I were to have the chance to talk with Rarity after that, I would undoubtedly say that now, even the most abused, deprived, and drugged-up crack whore would feel disgusted to be in the same vicinity as you
Any particular chance we could bash thunderlane's skull in with a brick and skin his ass into a toaster teecozy? II never thought I'd actually grow to hate this guy so freaking bad! There's only so many charicters in all of creation that I'd love to drown in thier own blood but this guy is taking the cake right now! :
I'm hoping that when Spike finds out what Rarity did that he runs off to rescue Flitter. I'm pretty sure that will be the nail in the coffin of Rarity's relationship with him; I can't imagine that Spike will forgive her for this very easily.
By Faust
What have you become, Rarity?
2988474 Damn, I just had a case of deja vu reading your comment for some reason.
Do I want Flitter to be raped? No.
Will it happen? Probably, yes.
*Shrugs*
Free booze is my kind of booze. Besides, I think Spike and Flitter are the mean ones; they almost spilled their drinks!
Everyone knows that free booze is a trap!
Just read this from chapter one to here and goddamnit rarity is more fucked up then pinkie was in cupcake. Please keep this going.
Wow, nice chapter. Didn't expect that. What I do expect is that something will go horribly wrong like it did with her other plans.
I love the ending of that author's note
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Please don't let fritter get raped!
2989900 Keep her a virgin haha
SPIKE! WAKE UP!
Hoping for Thunderlane to get Flitter to her house and tell Cchaser what Rarity did.
Again, what a raribitch! Thunderlane better decide against what he's going to do at the last second or maybe Cloudchaser or Twilight would walk in somehow & stop all this CRAP!
HAHAHAHA oh Rarity
Had to reread this and use Caramel instead of Thunderlane . I feel as though it would royally screw up my writing if I didn't. Oh and I love this story by the way. Even if the raper (I know it's rapist) is a character I use in my own story.
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Uh....... how old is Flitter!?
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Well... I was sorry to Thunderlane for using him as, a somewhat, antagonist in my story. But this, this is different... and I'm already feeling the 'Camel' effect in my stomach... Welp... Leeeeeeeeeeerrrrroooooooooooyyyyyyyyy Jeeeeeeeeeenkiiiiiiiiiinssssss!!!!!!!
3095676 Explain the Camel effect please.