When a young dragon gives up and moves on to another pony, will his old crush be able to accept the sudden change?
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Ooooh.... The corruption of one corrupts them all...
Or, in AJ's terms...
One bad apple spoils the bunch.
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Couldn't have said it better myself.
wow... I didn't expect thunderlane to be able to beat the shit out of spike so easily. and I really dislike it when the girl does that momma shit, we about to get it in, don't bring her into it. and now all the elements will break? Uh-oh.
Such a massive cock block from EVERYWHERE
Well fina-fucking-ly Thunderlane's gonna get thrown in jail.
This is not good
Spike=Badass. Way to go Spike WAY TO FUCKING BE A BAWS.
Rarity piss off and die. Twilight being too naive.
Well, at least Twilight really blast the Sh*t out of Thunderlane.
Wow Spike. You sissy. -_-
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In his defense he was drugged and hanged over.
This is getting good glad that sorta resolved itself
Really hope nothing happened to Flitter.
2997023 I think it's more of a case that all the elements are connected. AJ isn't lying but because one of them cracked, they will all start cracking as they are no longer in harmony. Rarity became selfish so generosity broke, she lied so now honesty broke. I'd assume Rainbow's loyalty or Fluttershy's kindness will most likely be the next to go as Rarity is betraying her friends.
Some advice for Spike.
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2997154 Well, what I meant was that one Element broke, and because they are connected, they all break.
2997178 Ah, in that case we are talking about the same thing, sorry
2997183 No problem. I could have worded my analogies (Or whatever the heck those were...) better.
Fucking. Rarity...I feel rage while I type this. I don't usually get pissed while reading anything, unless it genuinely tugs at me...go die in a shallow grave you bitch. You didn't deserve that element.
2997102 I knew he was going to lose, but in one hit?! what is spike now? Fodder?
Rarity lied so hard that it broke somepony else's Element... pahahaha!
Could make a film series based on this fic:
Lie Hard: Rarity
Lie Hard 2: Lie Harder
dude what the hell you should have Spike go dragon on Thunder Lame if Greed makes Spike go big to protect his Horde and with Flitter subconshely in Spike's horde. now Violated what do you thing rage would do to his body one form only THIS!!!!!!
2997200i know right i agree.
While well written (grammar, syntax and formatting are great), I can't read anymore of this. This is unpleasant in every sense of the word and I feel unclean for reading it.
It's kinda like a game me and my friends play called: Who get can get the farthest through Violence Jack?
Now excuse me, I need to find some Brain Bleach.
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Good day sir and the best of luck with your story.
Man, i really wished Spike went into Charizard mode.
And Rarity... well, let's not begin with it.
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Well it wasn't just hit it was a buck the pony equivalent of a superman punch to the back of the head honestly I'am surprised he even came too from sheer will power just make sure Flitter was ok, to me that was more badass.
2997232 Get Spike or Lie Trying
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Directed by Michael Bay
Well Equestria's fucked if shit goes down and it's all Rarity's fault.
Well I guess the worst is over. At least from a moral standing.
But now we have a bad chain reaction going on. And it's not Discord this time, it's much, much worst.
Good chapter! Nice to know you didn't fully have Flitter raped.
...well now, that's odd. I've got my own guess as to what's going on now, but I'm not gonna say it here - that'd be telling
i think the term " oh fuck " about sums up what is forthcoming.
2997254 that is the most badass adult spike pic ever.
Holy crap I missed a lot
Now I'm gonna have to read it all over again.
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LMAO!!!!
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Too bad they didn't make him look more like that in the show. His canon adult form is just... blagh.
CRAP! Flitter got raped & obviously impregnated, Rarity got off scott free, Spitter (Spike X Flitter) are in the hospital, and to top it all off, the Elements of Harmony are breaking & it's all Raribitch's fault!
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Reader bunny is right with you.
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However, I shall endure.
Still wish Spike had given him a face full of fire.
Or a dragonbreath enema....
2997864 it is not suppose to be nice it is suppose to be badass
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I wouldn't count things up yet, Even if Thunderlanes testimony doesn't get Rarity arrested, it could plant seeds of doubt, especially if Cloud Chaser gets suspicious and hands in that wine, since she doesn't have the friendship to cloud her vision.
And, you know, the whole cracking elements thing could clue them in
2998284 Still, they better have abortion spells because if Flitter gets pregnant, then Thunderlane gets the last laugh!
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But we have no idea if Flitter is even old enough to breed, let alone in a fertile time (Thunderlane does seem like a sick enough bastard to do so regardless)
Thunderlane is such an a-hole in this one
Wonder why the other elements are cracking as well?
Oh shit
She's breaking all of them
God, this is intense
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um... old enough?
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Why did Applejack's EoH crack?
Is it because Rarity was starting to lose it, and the damage is a grim omen of what is to come?
every time i see this story update i go "yay it updated...... oh no it updated." i love this story but i don't like seeing rarity going all psycho but you write a great story. though i gotta say that the honesty element cracking doesn't surprise me that much. cause the way i see it is that all the elements are intertwined together just like all the girls were "destined" to be friends thanks to RD's sonic rainboom. and if they are all tied together that means if one starts to break cause of some sort of corruption then the others will get infected as well, but that's just my theory. keep up the great work.
I hope they actually do real police work and find that Rarity is the one that did it (especially seeing that they HAVE TO take statements from all the people involved) and I don't care if it waits until the epilogue, I hope she gets what she deserves
and as for thunderlane, I hope he gets tortured mercilessly (like the countless mares he drugged and raped) wherever they decide to throw him
but as for Spike and Flitter, I hope it was just her marehood stretching too far that caused the bleeding, not her hymen... but that's hope vs reality (or should I say the cannon of this fic [and no, I'm not sure cannon is the right word])
Woahh first off rarity going all psycho bitch is really well written (as well as the fic) this chapter made me really worry like I got so into it (usually happen to me on only certain ocations. Ps grats on making me feel said way even though I am no one special) and I absolutely love the conflict I felt the emotion in it. Great fic so far and that last bit with the breaking element was a really nice touch I (like may before me) love where you are takeing this story, and cant wait till you update this.
Well...once Twilight finds out what REALLY happened Rarity isn't gonna be making dresses for a long time